• Member Since 31st Aug, 2014
  • offline last seen Last Wednesday

New Canterlot


I can finally see...but not for long

T

Scootaloo has been bouncing from home to home for years until moving to Canterlot City with her new adopted mother. After making friends with two of the greatest girls in the world, she finally feels a sense of security in her life, and being in the same place long enough has allowed her to look up to and idolize a certain star soccer player. Now, with hope and newfound courage, Scootaloo makes the decision to chase her dreams of becoming someone and growing close to her longtime idol, but a crushing blow to her shattered heart puts an end to her emboldened aspirations.

It's up to her two best buddies in the whole world to help her realize her truth self worth and the power of love.

Gratefully edited previously by: gwg

Writer of Chapter 5: Such A Chlorbag

This story takes place after the events of my previous stories; Never Grow Apart and Never Drift Away. You are NOT REQUIRED to read those stories if all you came for is Scootaloo. :yay:

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 87 )

Great start but poor Scootaloo. :fluttershysad:

Wow, great first chapter!!! I feel bad for Scootaloo though, watching Rainbow with Fluttershy must have broken her heart. Oh, can't wait for the next update. Now I have to add this to my favourites list so excuse me while I do that.:pinkiehappy:

It was okay....


LOL JK 11/10 BEST STORY I LOVE IT I LOVE YOU :scootangel::heart:

It's rare to see EQG Scoots in a fic. I wholeheartedly approve. Especially because it's not yet another "I can't fly" fic because that's not an issue in Canterlot Highverse.

6902615 Yes! Sweetie can pull off the "more cuter" look! :pinkiehappy:

Guess I'm gonna have to downlaod that song by TheFatRat...

I'm confused.....does she like her friends or her idol? Anyway, great begining!

What stories? May want to link them

that was awesome u need to finish this book dude

6902615 I fixed those issues. :yay: If need be, we can make this back and forth a ritual for future chapters.

Great start! I don't usually read EQG fanfics, but I'm liking this one so far. :)

Holy shit, I just finished reading the first chapter today and was wondering when the second would come out. :rainbowlaugh:
Anyways, time to read this!

I'm with Applebloom on this one, candycanes are my favourite!!! Sorry got side tracked there, I didn't have to long at all so don't you worry. This chapter was great too!!! You seriously need to stop writing such good chapters!!! Just kidding, keep up the good work and can't wait to see what the crusaders do next!!!:pinkiehappy:

gwg

Still surprised to see this out so quickly, feels like I just reviewed this.

Keep up the good work.

-GWG-

Well well a CMC EG finally got around to reading them both of the chapters back to back and i got to love it so far and amazing work into both chapters in a short amount of time it may seems but who knows how much time you really put into it! don't mind the scoots having a crush on rainbowdash but in my personal opinion I like the fluttershyXrainbowdash ship and relationship a lot more just me of course, this makes some good drama I suppose to me but overall it's still an amazing story! love it man great work I'll keep reading those up coming chapters! :twilightsmile:

Well I might be a complete idiot for asking this: is this gonna be a love triangle between the Crusaders?
I'd love to see that :pinkiehappy:

Nothing like best friends to drag you back outta the dark moods. Good job girls!

6918383 I fixed those errors like last time, and I was surprised to see so many! I'm starting to get a little worried now. For what it's worth, "muckrakers" is now "punk".

gwg

6921950 always pointing out my flaws, :twilightangry2:

Sigh, I did tell him you are better at this.

No problems mate, and besides if I caught everything, you'd be out of a job:trollestia:

Keep up your nitpicking.

-GWG-

Lose one girl, get two. There should be a coupon for that.

Lol, wasn't expecting that to happen, though at the beginning of the story, I thought that Applebloom and Sweetie Belle liked Scootaloo, so yeah.
Great chapter again!!!:pinkiehappy:

Can't say i shipped the cmc before but this was really cute. :scootangel:

As usual keep up the awesome work. :pinkiehappy:

If she does, me ‘n Sweetie’ll go ‘n put Nair ‘n her shampoo.”

how odd is it that I actually know what that feels like. It hurts like hell and I was bald for 2 WEEKS!!!:flutterrage:

thanks dude your an awesome friend
:pinkiehappy:

Are they going to constantly kiss when no one else is around? Or was this the only kiss they have?

The wait for the next chapter is killing me :raritycry:

7075020
New chapter coming in the next week, I promise! :fluttercry:

This story takes place after the events of my previous stories; Never Grow Apart and Never Drift Away.

Friendly word of advice, link to those stories.

Great chapter again! I was so exited when I saw it was updated!:pinkiehappy:

when is the next chapter coming out:duck: i want some more dash scoot drama:scootangel:

You're going to be getting lots of notifications from me today. I favorited all four of you stories, and gave you a follow. You're a great writer, keep it up!

This dash-scootaloo drama makes me uncomfortable, and for the life of me I don't know why :raritydespair:

[quoteIt was then that she discovered that eating food and trading spit not only could be possible at the same time, but done right, could also be very enjoyable.] i think i'm gonna be sick :pinkiesick: * runs of to the bathroom and pucks*

Comment posted by GemstonexCherry4life deleted May 20th, 2016
Comment posted by GemstonexCherry4life deleted May 20th, 2016
Comment posted by GemstonexCherry4life deleted May 15th, 2016
Comment posted by GemstonexCherry4life deleted May 20th, 2016

How old are the CMC in this story?
Can someone please tell me? It's driving me nuts!

7224038 probably, considering that one just got their license, around 15-17 years old.:twilightsmile:

LOGIC!!!!:yay:

7232247 Thanks! In my country we have to be a little bit older to drive, so I was confused :applejackconfused: :twilightblush:

Sweet Celestia I'm freaking loving your stories! Can't wait to see what happens next :pinkiehappy:

Login or register to comment