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Odd_Sarge


Literally, Reckless. Ponies give this sorrel mare purpose. Be kind. Be happy. Be a good pony. 🐎 1948 - 2024

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This story is a sequel to Cypress Zero


For hundreds of years, the post-scarcity world of Equestria has served as a launching point for the stars. Beyond their green earth, interstellar relays and starships power the colonization efforts of all species. And in just minutes, the digital messages of little ponies can cover distances once considered impossible.

It makes the arrival of a physical letter all the more meaningful.

Especially to the most isolated pony at the heart of the Equestrian Core Worlds.


An entry to the Science Fiction Contest II.
No prior reading of Cypress Zero is required. But both stories are stronger together.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 18 )

Just beautiful. This was a profoundly moving piece of pony science fiction. For all the complexities in your descriptions of a Future!Equestria's development, there's something really personal and emotional at the core that grounds it all.

Lovely to see more Cypress content, too, as always.

Someone needs some time off-the-clock, badly ... :trollestia:

I was thinking 'What a Wonderful World' (Louis Armstrong) for background music ... :pinkiehappy:

While I'm not familiar with source material (yet), there is something very moving and inspirational here. Thank you for that

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It means a lot to me, too. Thanks for all of your support through the universe of Cypress.
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That is very much a fitting tune.
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I'm not familiar with source material

This story captures a lot of the tone and themes for Cypress Zero. The thoughts and actions of the characters are definitely intended to inspire, and I'm glad that came through.
Thank you for reading, and all your kind words.

This was both heart-warming and sad, but luckily so, more of the former than the latter. I've not familiarized myself with the universe this takes place in, but from what little I've seen it's ripe with detail, care, thought and heart and I think I'll go give this Cypress zero a read.
Melancholy, that's the word, I think. The best way to describe a universe like this, one that moves on without you, but does so because you've given it the gift of choice in doing so. Yet there's hope in the endless depths of space, in that even so very far away, there are those that remember the day.

Thank you for a wonderful read, It felt quite profound to me and I'll be looking forward to seeing more like this. ^^

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I greatly appreciate comments like this. It means a whole lot for you to lay out your thoughts. Doubly so when it matches the kind of emotions I wanted felt.

Happy to write for you. Thanks for reading

After reading both the storys of this verse I have to say... WELL DONE!!!! They are both heartwarming and keeps one wanting to read more. With what you have done in these stores make quite the impression for many more stories, and spinoffs. I hope to see more stories of this verse.

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Thank you very much. I’ll probably get back to this one in time, but for now, I’m very happy to hear your words. Thank you for reading!

Oh my Sweet Celestia, Cypress Zero sequel. Much squeeing Can't wait to read it. :heart::twilightblush:

Celestia was seated gracefully on her modern throne: a simple, but plush, crimson cushion. It was easy to clean, and that was something she performed regularly with the vast swaths of magic that pooled in the interior of Canterlot Mountain. The cleaning was a necessity as well, for she’d done away with almost all interactions with her servants as the engineers had asked her to move further and further into the mountain. The walk was too great, and her needs not worth the exponential suffering.

love how much this introduction captures: the self-sacrificing nature of Celestia’s reign, her position as the protector and guide to her little ponies in one age, and facing the coming of the next. 

“Thank you, my little pony.”

love it every time

It had cost lifetimes from her little ponies, and dozens to hundreds of intertwining destinies to forge the Canterhorn into the tool of a star-befriending princess. And it cost her nothing.

great sentence

In recent times, that fleet had turned armada, and while Celestia could not say she was happy about it, she was proud of her sister. She was out there traveling to the stars that were rightfully hers to see... and Celestia was safe and sound in the midst of Equestrian bureaucracy.

definitely very fitting for them both!

Celestia’s ears perked up, and she leaned forward on her cushion. “From the northern colonies?” Her alicorn biology kept her heart beating at the same perfect tempo, but her mind skipped to make up for its lack of imperfection.

love this bit! of course alicorn biology would be different from mortal pony biologies

Scuttling down a stairwell, she found herself diving into once-known territory. The castle had hardly changed since her sister’s return from the Moon all those years ago... and for Celestia, this may well have been her own return.

ooh, really underscoring Luna’s concerns!

Twilight had shown her how to do that.

Celestia had shown the sun how to do that.

And the sun had shown them how to harness atomic forces for their own needs.

Friendship, too, was a wonderfully complex series of reactions.

love how friendship is magic and magic is physics and physics is friendship

Celestia frowned at it, then looked to the nearby analysis team with concern. “Are your counters in the shop, my little ponies?”

love it every time

But her little pony was right: there were no spells, here. A passive stream of magic flowed through the gray ‘scroll’, fed into the power supply, and came back out. It was magic in a constant state, a notoriously difficult display of harmonic forces at play.

it is great that the mystery of what this object is is a draw to both the reader and the protagonist

“Of course, dear.” She smiled warmly. “Thank you for your time, my little ponies.”

love it every time! 

Inching her folded wings back and forth yet again, Celestia looked to one particular side of the room for help. The gilded cage of Philomena remained empty. Her mind went out in search of her long-lived phoenix companion, but it was a muted attempt.

Philomena would return when she was ready to, while Celestia had yet to ever leave.

ooh, feels like a very nice touch

Celestia thought now of how foolish she'd been while her student lived. She wondered at just how she could have possibly seen her and her sister retiring.

And at the same time, she felt as if she’d been forced to.

so this explains how Celestia is back on her immortal throne. or a commentary on how forced that element was in the final season?

No, these letters of the modern age did not belong the lonesome Princess of the Sun, even if their physical arrival was a practice that hailed from the history of their ancestral homeworld. The homeworld that Celestia would continue to maintain, for that was her everlasting purpose.

Yes, she still had a purpose. But what she had been content with was what she deserved.

and what a shift in perspective! only when marekind is spread among the stars does domain over a single one seem like the less significant

“Your subjects have created a most precious gift. For you. It is yours. Everything is earned, and you have earned this.” A pause. “And it is your birthday.”

In the background, there were a few half-called cheers of ‘happy birthday’.

aww, do love that there has been a “happy birthday” every chapter so far

Your faithful subject,
Skylark Twinkle

aww! this really does feel connected in spirit to Celestia’s precious, lost Twilight Sparkle, retracing the life she once had in more than just the similarity of her name. 

I know you’ll be here tomorrow,
But I’m glad you’re here today!

I’m glad you’re here today.

Celestia really is now in the position that Luna once was, though she humbly debases herself rather than fall into resentment. so of course Luna sees and understands this, and gives Celestia what would have been exactly what she needed all those years ago, beautiful. thank you for the entry. i will have to read the prequel one day!

Celestia needs to ensure that other worlds actually have magic it seems. Certainly not something I've seen before.

Celestia clearly needed such a message.

This is pretty nice.

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