I'm definitely glad to see this chapter! I really enjoyed how it turned out after the date in Rainbow Falls.

Good story, but that last chapter was far to rushed.

Policies and procedures! Pound them down!

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Sorry if you think so. I wanted to end it in on good note and not drag it out.

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Glad you liked it!

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You are much too clean.....

This has been a very fun read. I've seen how many have dragged it out and abandoned. It was a fun read and I enjoyed it. Besides if you want to exetend it, just throw in Cherry Berry Hot and Steamy, the Sequel!

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If there will be a sequel, it will be Cherry Berry and Christopher conceiving on their honeymoon.

loved it for sure! Nice work!

So let me get this straight Chris & Cherryburry ruined your picnic in the park because of the Navy? Raining Men? What?
Don't pee on me and say it's raining.
A romantic interLude in her balloon
Consummate of Chicken?!?
More like cream of som yung guy from the sky So it was raining men & mares

Lyra only wanted him for the hands

I was afraid this was abandoned, but I'm so glad it got finished! Absolutely loved the ending, it was so sweet!!

very good chapter, wish it was a bit longer lol

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I wanted to post it on a weekend and I was falling behind. Sorry it was shorter than the rest, but I'll likely throw in cloptional extra chapters later this year (I'm going to school until the fall).

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I said I'd finish it. I have another story going to drop in a week from now and will update a few others I'm working on.

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hehe, I need to get on that as well. Took a bit of a break from writing to give my brain a rest.

"I know, right!? That's was I was thinking."

what

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It's the treat that all stallions treasure and strive for. Two glorious holes ready to be stretched open for you. All in one location.

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