11443874 His POV was very good. Logical as well. If I had been accidentally summoned to Equestria, I'd be wary/unsure of getting with ponies for a bit too.
Id also want to go back home, which he does, but can't.
Darling, Don't worry in Equestria inner species relationships are not frowned upon, Yea Cherry look at us.... Believe me when I say claws are better than clumsy hooves any day Yea, Just because he looks like a malnourished bald dehorned and naked Iron Will - That's your pick. Oh dear Cherry's crying more More happy tears?
11444245 It builds background and sells the fact he's in a different world. It's also common fandom terminology. Some fics don't do it and want to skip it for simplicity. I chose to use it was part of the "man in a different world" aspect and to also further drive the fact he doesn't understand or isn't used to another culture.
11444218 Thank you! I hope you like my other works if you do read them. I hope to wrap up this story on a good note.
I really like how this is going so far. I just finished the second chapter, and was pleased that the story wasn't rushed or hurried along. The pacing is good, and I do like the details you include.
11445637 I try my very best to give as much details so the viewer can imagine the story in their head. And thank you, pacing is always a worry for me, but I'm happy to see my writing has improved over the years. I have several projects going on but Cherry Berry will be #1 since it's the fastest story for likes I've ever gotten. I didn't expect it to be on the top featured slot for days.
Lucky smiled as he passed out cards to everyone and replied, “Well, for one, you froze when reaching for the chips. You then tried to dodge the question; poorly, I might add. Secondly, you took a couple of minutes talking to the mares as we waited for you to bring the ball back. And seeing how it’s almost Hearts and Hooves Day, the mares are out looking stallions, so we all took bets on who it would be to ask you out.”
11445747 I needed a method for the man to told the "ways of the ponies" and for him to understand the gravity of the situation. Out of ignorance, apprehension and "Is this boner okay?" moment is why he stood her up. But all will be corrected...the P&P demands it.
You down with P&P? (Yeah you know me) You down with P&P? (Yeah you know me) You down with P&P? (Yeah you know me) Who's down with P&P? (Every lastPony!)
Yes!!! A good chapter!! Get your mare!!
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You read it already? I just posted it.
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I read things fast. As soon as it came up, I read it.
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What did you like about it? What do you think of Christopher's POV?
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His POV was very good. Logical as well. If I had been accidentally summoned to Equestria, I'd be wary/unsure of getting with ponies for a bit too.
Id also want to go back home, which he does, but can't.
Nicely done! Had to chuckle at the title.
Looking forward to the next chapter
Dude is gonna be walking infront of a firing brigade when he goes to talk to the sisters.
Heh, they really should have pushed harder for the time of date. But then the plot couldn't have had time to thicken!
When a human was mentioned (didn't read the tags) I was going to drop the story there. I'm glad I kept reading, this one is different in a good way.
Well look at that, a decently done drama story between pone and man, who would've thunk it?
Seriously though, this story definitely gains from having more than one chapter, so I'm glad you did a sequel
Interesting outcome, but its not over yet
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Very interesting to hear.
And good picture!!
I still haven't checked out the first fic you made, but still, this was pretty good.
As much as I like the story why is it in every HIE that the human protag has to switch terminologies when they are practically the same thing?
Darling, Don't worry in Equestria inner species relationships are not frowned upon,
Yea Cherry look at us....
Believe me when I say claws are better than clumsy hooves any day
Yea, Just because he looks like a malnourished bald dehorned and naked Iron Will - That's your pick.
Oh dear Cherry's crying more
More happy tears?
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter to come out! Hope you plan to do a NSFW AU chapter during Hearth's Warming for Christmas!
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Hmmm. I have never really written clop. I might consider it.
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You're silly dude.
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It builds background and sells the fact he's in a different world. It's also common fandom terminology. Some fics don't do it and want to skip it for simplicity. I chose to use it was part of the "man in a different world" aspect and to also further drive the fact he doesn't understand or isn't used to another culture.
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Thank you! I hope you like my other works if you do read them. I hope to wrap up this story on a good note.
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thebatfang sells pony anatomy well.
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No, it's not over yet.
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Thank you! I hope to keep it that way. Very happy to hear you like it.
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HiE isn't your thing? That's okay, and I'm glad I did it well you gave it a chance! I hope the rest is is just as enjoyable.
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Exactly but to be fair, they were prying the details out of the guy, and they set his ass straight when they found out he screwed up.
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Oh...just wait for the next chapter.
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Stay tuned!
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Thank you! I try to select funny chapter titles.
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I'm glad it made sense for his POV but he needs to fix it, or else the chance at a good mare is gone.
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I'm so happy that you answer as many comments as possible. Really shows how much you appreciate our comments.
And yes, thebatfang does indeed do good art
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Yep, it also reminded me of something similar
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I really care about seeing people enjoy what I write. It's fun exploring Equestria with Humanity.
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Good to hear
I really like how this is going so far. I just finished the second chapter, and was pleased that the story wasn't rushed or hurried along. The pacing is good, and I do like the details you include.
Can hardly wait for the next chapter!
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I try my very best to give as much details so the viewer can imagine the story in their head. And thank you, pacing is always a worry for me, but I'm happy to see my writing has improved over the years. I have several projects going on but Cherry Berry will be #1 since it's the fastest story for likes I've ever gotten. I didn't expect it to be on the top featured slot for days.
I hope you'll like the rest!
"the mares are out looking for stallions"
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Fixed.
I like the little lecture of Equestria terms and phasing, compare to Earth.
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I needed a method for the man to told the "ways of the ponies" and for him to understand the gravity of the situation. Out of ignorance, apprehension and "Is this boner okay?" moment is why he stood her up. But all will be corrected...the P&P demands it.
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moment is why he her up.
moment is why he stood her up
You down with P&P?
(Yeah you know me)
You down with P&P?
(Yeah you know me)
You down with P&P?
(Yeah you know me)
Who's down with P&P?
(Every last Pony!)
(Apologies to Naughty by Nature)
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Starscream-and-Hutch / Tumblr / Giphy [T]
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Muwahahahahah!
Speaking of which, there was a reason Cherry Berry had that dream.....
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My bad.
But your brain is smart enough to know what I meant.
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Ugh, I fixed it.
I type really fast, so forgive me.
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I totally get understand, writing as typing without notice the mistake.
Loving this story! Now to get P&P!!!! Out of my head! 😂