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RobtheMorpherPony


https://www.wattpad.com/user/Timeman202 A developing story writer whose favorite pony is Rainbow Dash.

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Yay! I read the version of this before the reboot, and I’m glad it’s coming back. :twilightsmile:

Nice to see the story to be back again and once again I am pretty interested how everything change if smolder show up pretty early in the show

"Another dragon? Well hello there." Smolder said.

There you go smolder ask and receive 😊

"Well then, I'm glad I'm your first." Smolder said before she hugged him. Spike then passed out in a collection of hearts. "...Your still quite the doofus I see~" Smolder teased.

There it is lol 🥰😍

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Yeah, that's still going to be the running gag like it was last time.

Okay so I still think this is a pretty interesting idea for an alternate universe of smolder showing up earlier in the show and seeing how Spike and smolder interact with each other and I can't wait to see how this will work in the new version

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New version is going to have a modified timeline from the original. Some things will still be the same such as the running gag I'm reusing and the grand galloping gala being effected by Discord's apperence. But there will be some new content.

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Oh very interesting but I'm assuming you're going to skip over some of the episodes to go to the like a major episodes like two Parts episodes or even like a particular episodes either way I am pretty interesting as I was on your old story hopefully we can catch up to where we left off 😅

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There might still be "episode" skips, but there won't be plot skips.

Excellent work on the start of this reboot. Definitely liked the work that went into the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. And, yeah, I can understand keeping the other ships beyond the main one censored so they aren't spoiled for those who don't want to know. And, yeah, Smolder, it will be another couple of years before you have serious competition namely from Gabby . Of course, Smolder meeting her biological older brother during the Great Dragon Migration should be entertaining, even if it would eventually give Garble one more reason to hate Spike (i.e. over-protective big brother stuff). And, yeah, other ships later on ALSO kept censored further along including, obviously, CheesePie and MAYBE Fluttercord would make sense too.

Anyway, definitely looking forward to more of this.

With a grin Rainbow Dash took out two tickets to the grand galloping gala from her own being. "Luna's already hooked me up." Rainbow Dash said before also showing off the letter she got.

Whoa I didn't see that coming so instead of her fighting for it she got the ticket from Luna wow unexpectedly I think I remember why she's doing that but I'm not going to spoil it from your previous story

"Only too well. That spoiled prompus cousin of the Princess should never be considered royalty. Especially the way he always talked nasty in regard to Spike." Twilight said. "I should go warn Rarity." She added before heading off.

To be honest I would have imagined that Prince Blue Blood would have been so horrible to Twilight and Spike during the time at the Canterlot

"Ah. Yes I remember when that happened. It was during my second year of Princess Celestia's school when a new student known as Sunburst had come into the system from way out of town. However, early on, Spike here stood up for Sunburst when Prince Blueblood was belittling Sunburst." Twilight said.

And I also wondering about why sunburst failed his exam because somebody like him giving him a hard time but that's just a theory

"Heh...Sweetie Belle already has this Button Mash guy after her. But I doubt your interested in her." Smolder said.

There's that famous shipping which I did like I seen a couple of stories and fan videos of them together it's very cute

So this is a different direction of the Ticketmaster so Spike told smolder about what happened today and what an unexpected event that Applejack and Twilight were talking about the ticket to the Grand Galloping Gala until rainbow showed up and she got invited from Princess Luna so she was not in the heated argument with the others about going to the Grand Galloping Gala until they mention about Prince Blue Blood that Twilight needs to warn her about him so did Spike and smolder how mean and nasty he is and that saved her embarrassing moment in the grand Galloping Gala and in the end everybody gets to go so that worked out pretty well I wonder what's going to happen next guess we'll find out next time

REALLY good work on this latest chapter. Definitely liked the effort that went into the exchanges, characterizations, general wrap-up and future chapter set-ups. Quite certainly appreciated the alterations that went into this version of the Ticket Master (such as Twilight and Spike already verifying to Rarity just how big a jerk Blueblood is [though Rarity can still use her trip to the Gala to try to score some helpful business contacts - which would, at least, have SOME realistic chance of going well], the foreshadowing for Sunburst and Rainbow already having two tickets of her own because of some business Luna wants to talk to her about).

And, yeah, Spike already developing a protective streak makes sense when you consider his adopted big brother is the Captain of the Royal Guard.

Definitely looking forward to more of this.

Another really good job on the exchanges, characterizations, general wrap-up and future chapter set-up in this latest chapter. Very much liked the warning concerning dragon greed growth (essentially nipping "Secret of My Excess" in the bud) as well as Spike's reaction to Smolder's outfit. And, yeah, Smolder, a comic book hoard DOES suit Spike. Of course, he could ALSO include his family and friends as part of his hoard AND eventually learn to weaponize the "Dragon Greed Growth" in emergencies while still retaining his normal sized intelligence (i.e. increasing in size as well as proportionate strength, durability and flame breath power, but fully focused on protecting his family and friends) after he has had sufficient training. That would certainly come in handy against the likes of Tirek or most of the other major villains. But that's for much later down the road and is a guess just as likely to be wrong as right anyway.

VERY certainly looking forward to more of this.

Awww such a sweet chapter, also glad Smolder talked to Spike about greed growth & how to curb it down! :moustache:

"Speaking of, we really need to talk to Twilight about starting some sort of hoard for you sooner rather then later." Smolder said. "The sooner you have some kind of hoard, the sooner you can prevent yourself from going godzilla on Ponyville." She added.

"Do I want to know?" Spike asked.

"Smolder's 8th birthday, the entire town started giving her a bunch of gifts, and it was making her go giant sized. One pony in town yelled out 'RUN IT'S GODZILLA' by the time she finished growing." Sweetie Belle said.

"The answer is no, no I did not want to know." Spike said.

"If you're going to prepare, you're going to need to know the reason." Smolder said. "Because once your greed growth gets triggered, you'll lose all sense of yourself and only thing about taking everything, including the bathroom sink." She said.

"I thought the saying was 'everything but the bathroom sink'?" Spike asked.

"Yeah, that saying doesn't really work for greed growth." Smolder stated. "Because I actually did take a neighbor's bathroom sink while I had lost all sense of myself. It was only when Rarity snapped me out of it did I finally go back to normal." She added.

LOL now that was a priceless scene! :rainbowlaugh:

It was also cool Spike telling Smolder about not minding her when wearing dresses, she was already adorable in canon whenever she did that! :heart:

"Smolder's 8th birthday, the entire town started giving her a bunch of gifts, and it was making her go giant sized. One pony in town yelled out 'RUN IT'S GODZILLA' by the time she finished growing." Sweetie Belle said.

"Speaking of, we really need to talk to Twilight about starting some sort of hoard for you sooner rather then later." Smolder said. "The sooner you have some kind of hoard, the sooner you can prevent yourself from going godzilla on Ponyville." She added.

That's actually a pretty good call try to avoid the season 2 episode Secret of My Excess so he doesn't go crazy with greed

"I'm just glad that's all that happened." Smolder said. "And I'd rather not you and Twilgiht be forced out just because you couldn't control a greed growth." Smolder said. Suddenly the ground started shaking. "What's that about?" Smolder asked.

Twilight

Obviously, still a bit of that love-at-first-sight thing he's got there. But this time...I actually don't mind it... Smolder said. "So...wanna see me wear a different kind of dress? There's one I'm dying to show off for you." She added. Suddenly a bunch of mares started screaming down below. "Oh what now?!" Smolder exclaimed.

It's a rabbit stampede run for your life

Wow it looks like the day starts out pretty normal and Spike is getting fitted for the grand Galloping Gala and smolder gave him a heads up about the greed growth which that was a pretty helpful heads up for Spike just in case in his next birthday not only that this is during the time of Applebuck season and smolder was testing out her dress as well and Spike was pretty Starstruck seeing her like that and it's a pretty cute interaction and everything until they got interrupted by rabbits but it looks like it turned out to be a good day I wonder what else could happen guess we'll find out next time

That was a cool take on Trixie here, her switching Smolder/Spike places without knowing how was priceless!:twilightoops::trixieshiftright::applejackconfused::moustache:
Glad she got a much better treatment early on, till the next chapter!:twilightsmile:

I really don't know why the show wanted Trixie to go complete asshole on the cast and be an antagonist for several episodes just so she could connect with Starlight.

All because she has she was boosting her ego at first it was just nothing but that it kind of doesn't help that those two kids snip and snail or the one who boosting her ego and not only that causing trouble bringing this Ursa Minor it's just Trixie got super jealous and usually that always happen when somebody gets thinking they got showed off and I still think the friendship between Starlight and Trixie is pretty nice even though Trixie can be something else but I kind of like it

"Um...that's not an Ursa Major. That's an Ursa Minor. It must've been woken up by someone." Twilight said. Suddenly Snips and Snails; two colts; ran past. "...And I think I know by whom. But for now..." Twilight said. And using a series of spells, she was able to put the Ursa Minor to sleep.

So basically it was those two kids fault if they didn't disturb the bear Twilight could have reason with Trixie and could have gone differently but then again if she didn't we would not see Twilight's development but that's a different story

"I can't teach you any magic, because that whole thing about magic being involved in Illusion Magic is a fabrication; in other words, it's a lie." Trixie said. "Every bit of it is sleight of hand, a fool the audience kind of deal." She added.

Once again this is a pretty interesting turn of event here so it looks like the great and powerful Trixie showed up and the other ponies and creatures ( I'm talking about smolder and spike ) wanted to see what she does yes immediately A lot of ponies really enjoy the show and what she does but after that Twilight wanted to ask her if she can teach her some illusion but Trixie refused she was about to say something until there was an Ursa Minor and Twilight had to use every amount of magic to come the bear and putting the putting the little one somewhere else Trixie was pretty impressed and she even admitted that some of her tricks was an illusion it may be but it doesn't mean it can be very entertaining and even Twilight wanted to offer her to do some real magic and it looks like it kind of worked Trixie wanted to learn some new tricks and it looks like it turned out pretty well and Spike really like smolder alot lol anyway this was a pretty nice turn of event here I wonder what else could happen guess we'll find out next time

Hey there. Again, an excellent job on the exchanges, characterizations, general wrap-up and future chapter set-up in all the right places. latest chapter in this story. Glad to see Trixie getting treated much better here than she was in canon at first and also like the idea of Twilight and Trixie learning from each other (Twilight learning basic illusions because they could be helpful and Twilight teaching Trixie some of the magic that SHE knows that could help out her act ever so often. Also liked how Trixie got surprised when she accidentally worked Spike into her act, but was able to roll with it. All in all, definite a big improvement over "Boast Busters" which nips "Magic Duel" in the bud (except maybe as a friendly spar for Twilight and Trixie to each get to show what they learned from each other with no Alicorn Amulet mess). And, yeah, Trixie COULD still make friends with Starlight, but it would be under much more honorable circumstances.

Of course, for some reason, I could easily visualize "Bridal Gossip" going a little differently too (such as either Twilight or Smolder chewing out the rest of Ponyville for LITERALLY treating a Zebra minding her own business like she is worse than Nightmare Moon and/or Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo accompanying Apple Bloom when she goes after Zecora, allowing for them to become friends a few weeks sooner than in canon).

Or, in "Call of the Cutie", I could see Smolder berating Diamond for picking on the Crusaders (including her foster sister Sweetie) "As a dragon, I can't even GET a Cutie Mark, but I don't let THAT stop me from doing the things I like to do as long as I'm not hurting anybody. And, yeah, just because your dad's the richest stallion in town and your mom is in charge of the school board DOESN'T give you the right to be a bully."

And, sorry about that. Just let my imagination run away with me, again. I freely admit that these guesses are just as likely to be wrong as right and I fully respect your right to not use them if you don't like the ideas.

At any rate, certainly looking forward to more of this.

"What do...ah...I see." Celestia said. "Twilight, let me be frank, I only want you to make friendship reports when there's actually something to report on. No sooner." She added.

and thus 'Lesson Zero' is adverted

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My view of Trixie's personality was that she had a 'Notice me Sempai'/Tsundere thing towards Twilight.

I like this chapter better than the episode

Great chapter like it better than the episode

Again, the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are all wonderfully done. Definitely liked the chat that Spike and Smolder had during their own sleepover (including Smolder admitting that her own past dealings with other dragons hasn't exactly been that good [which may or may not have included a passing reference to "Dragonshy", but probably not]) and Zecora's reaction to meeting Spike and Smolder (and the reactions to Spike getting a couple of inches taller). And, yeah, Rainbow, I can understand that the rhyming IS pretty difficult to do on a regular basis.

Anyway, certainly looking forward to more of this.

Good chapter & clever way of getting Spike's height a bit closer to Smolder than in canon!

"...Sadly, you've hit the nail on the head there. I've met a few other dragons, and each one is either a complete jerk-face, or a total doofus." Smolder said. And yet, while you Spike are a doofus, you're a far better deal than the others I've met. She thought to herself.

Oh yeah that's right the dragon migration even before Twilight and Spike came around it's been like that for a long time I kind of forgot about that

"I'm sure she'll understand. Best to remain indoors until that storm passes." Smolder said. "Hey, at least you'll be seeing me in my princess dresses while the storm blows over." She added.

Oh yeah this is during the time of look before you sleep and not only that that's also the first episode I ever watch back in 2011 Good Times all thanks to my YouTube notification

A week passed, and the next week there was this whole thing involving a zebra named Zecora and a plant known as Poison Joke.

Oh yeah the poison joke I remember that one when the main six have to get apple bloom and accidentally run into the flowers and it would have been funny to see Spike and smolder be affected although there was a story of smolder did got affected by those flowers and that's a pretty funny effective

"I think Zecora means is that, you've defainltly grown a few inches Spike." Twilight said.

Yeah the first time I saw her I feel like she's a little bit older than Spike just about a few years

And I know I stretched during a few of Zecora's rhymes. Doing them makes my brain hurt.

I'm sure it must be very difficult to find a couple of words that rhymes and everything

Well this is a certain interesting chapter here so it looks like Spike and smolder been talking about how smolder looks like in the dress she did even talk about when the dragon migration was here she did interact with those dragons and she didn't have a good experience there with them and she's thinking about Spike being so different from them she kind of like that and it looks like the storm was about to hit and Applejack and Rarity are at Twilights to take shelter the next few days after the event of the poison joke Zecora was pretty surprised to see dragons in Ponyville and they even explain how they've been found by their sisters and it was pretty funny saying rainbow having trouble to understanding the rhyming so I wonder what's going to happen next guess we'll find out next time

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Rainbow wasn't the only one getting a headache from Zecora's rhyming, so was I as it was VERY hard to do; some of the lines are BIG stretches as a result.

"Pinke Pie said something about getting a Tuba. Maybe has some idea." Smolder said.

Well I always knew Pinkie Pie knew something about those creatures she can be smart when she wanted to be

"Seriously Pinkie Pie? How do you know about my super hard scales?" Smolder asked. "Wait a second...it's you I'm talking about. Never mind." She quickly added.

Okay first of all wow then she must be a really tough dang and second yeah it always feels like Pinkie Pie knows everything when it comes to randomness and I don't know why I question it lol :pinkiehappy:

Again, thanks very much for the effort going into the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in this latest chapter. Definitely liked Spike and Smolder backing Pinkie up during the Parasprite mess as well as Spike basically just telling the girls to trust Rarity about the Gala outfits (which causes Rarity FAR less of a hassle than in the actual episode).

And, yeah, I could see Twilight's first meeting with Flash being at the Gala (Shining assigning Flash to Gala security as one of Flash's first assignments following his graduation from the Royal Guard Academy (after all, with royalty and all those celebrities and assorted general rich folks all under one roof, the Gala WOULD realistically be a tempting target for some ambitious criminals looking for a score big enough where they could comfortably retire after that night, so it would make sense to take Gala security seriously). But, that's just a guess and just as likely to be wrong as right.

VERY much looking forward to more of this.

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