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That was a cool take on Trixie here, her switching Smolder/Spike places without knowing how was priceless!
Glad she got a much better treatment early on, till the next chapter!
I really don't know why the show wanted Trixie to go complete asshole on the cast and be an antagonist for several episodes just so she could connect with Starlight.
All because she has she was boosting her ego at first it was just nothing but that it kind of doesn't help that those two kids snip and snail or the one who boosting her ego and not only that causing trouble bringing this Ursa Minor it's just Trixie got super jealous and usually that always happen when somebody gets thinking they got showed off and I still think the friendship between Starlight and Trixie is pretty nice even though Trixie can be something else but I kind of like it
So basically it was those two kids fault if they didn't disturb the bear Twilight could have reason with Trixie and could have gone differently but then again if she didn't we would not see Twilight's development but that's a different story
Once again this is a pretty interesting turn of event here so it looks like the great and powerful Trixie showed up and the other ponies and creatures ( I'm talking about smolder and spike ) wanted to see what she does yes immediately A lot of ponies really enjoy the show and what she does but after that Twilight wanted to ask her if she can teach her some illusion but Trixie refused she was about to say something until there was an Ursa Minor and Twilight had to use every amount of magic to come the bear and putting the putting the little one somewhere else Trixie was pretty impressed and she even admitted that some of her tricks was an illusion it may be but it doesn't mean it can be very entertaining and even Twilight wanted to offer her to do some real magic and it looks like it kind of worked Trixie wanted to learn some new tricks and it looks like it turned out pretty well and Spike really like smolder alot lol anyway this was a pretty nice turn of event here I wonder what else could happen guess we'll find out next time
Hey there. Again, an excellent job on the exchanges, characterizations, general wrap-up and future chapter set-up in all the right places. latest chapter in this story. Glad to see Trixie getting treated much better here than she was in canon at first and also like the idea of Twilight and Trixie learning from each other (Twilight learning basic illusions because they could be helpful and Twilight teaching Trixie some of the magic that SHE knows that could help out her act ever so often. Also liked how Trixie got surprised when she accidentally worked Spike into her act, but was able to roll with it. All in all, definite a big improvement over "Boast Busters" which nips "Magic Duel" in the bud (except maybe as a friendly spar for Twilight and Trixie to each get to show what they learned from each other with no Alicorn Amulet mess). And, yeah, Trixie COULD still make friends with Starlight, but it would be under much more honorable circumstances.
Of course, for some reason, I could easily visualize "Bridal Gossip" going a little differently too (such as either Twilight or Smolder chewing out the rest of Ponyville for LITERALLY treating a Zebra minding her own business like she is worse than Nightmare Moon and/or Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo accompanying Apple Bloom when she goes after Zecora, allowing for them to become friends a few weeks sooner than in canon).
Or, in "Call of the Cutie", I could see Smolder berating Diamond for picking on the Crusaders (including her foster sister Sweetie) "As a dragon, I can't even GET a Cutie Mark, but I don't let THAT stop me from doing the things I like to do as long as I'm not hurting anybody. And, yeah, just because your dad's the richest stallion in town and your mom is in charge of the school board DOESN'T give you the right to be a bully."
And, sorry about that. Just let my imagination run away with me, again. I freely admit that these guesses are just as likely to be wrong as right and I fully respect your right to not use them if you don't like the ideas.
At any rate, certainly looking forward to more of this.
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My view of Trixie's personality was that she had a 'Notice me Sempai'/Tsundere thing towards Twilight.
Great chapter like it better than the episode