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Trust me I babysit my nieces and nephews it can be fun but it is also hard work especially this is your first time keep an eye on them
Oh you're going to be surprised who it is
Try to do some new tricks and yeah so much for dazzling
Well done this was a pretty cute one so it looks like the baby cakes twins are born but while this was happening Spike and smolder were just talking with each other and apparently she keeps on teasing about Rarity having a boyfriend which apparently people takes it very seriously for some odd reason but then again I'll be probably upset if somebody tease me like that but afterward it looks like the package finally arrived and Derpy is leaving for a while and it turns out it was the fire Ruby that Spike got for his birthday but decided to give it to smolder which that was pretty nice meanwhile at the hospital apparently rainbow injured herself after doing her stunts but soarin came to visit to cheer up Rainbow Dash which that's also awesome of him and it looks like they have in common with each other when it comes to Daring Do and I did like that little kiss in the end again I ship them so much but anyway I wonder what else could happen guess we'll find out next time
Very little I can say that the other reviewers haven't already said better, but I DID really enjoy the dialogues throughout. Especially that one concerning Derpy already giving her "two weeks notice" some time earlier and making the delivery to Twilight her last delivery. And the forewarning concerning nicknames was also more than fair.
Have some ideas, but I'll share them via PM.
Awww that was adorable, well done Spike!
...wait, what?!
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It be fixed.
You wrote "furry" instead of "fury."
That being said though, i can imagine a bunch of furry critters ganging up on him because it's fluttershy's fury specifically so it still kinda works.