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Another really good job on the exchanges, characterizations, general wrap-up and future chapter set-up in this latest chapter. Very much liked the warning concerning dragon greed growth (essentially nipping "Secret of My Excess" in the bud) as well as Spike's reaction to Smolder's outfit. And, yeah, Smolder, a comic book hoard DOES suit Spike. Of course, he could ALSO include his family and friends as part of his hoard AND eventually learn to weaponize the "Dragon Greed Growth" in emergencies while still retaining his normal sized intelligence (i.e. increasing in size as well as proportionate strength, durability and flame breath power, but fully focused on protecting his family and friends) after he has had sufficient training. That would certainly come in handy against the likes of Tirek or most of the other major villains. But that's for much later down the road and is a guess just as likely to be wrong as right anyway.
VERY certainly looking forward to more of this.
Awww such a sweet chapter, also glad Smolder talked to Spike about greed growth & how to curb it down!
LOL now that was a priceless scene!
It was also cool Spike telling Smolder about not minding her when wearing dresses, she was already adorable in canon whenever she did that!
That's actually a pretty good call try to avoid the season 2 episode Secret of My Excess so he doesn't go crazy with greed
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It's a rabbit stampede run for your life
Wow it looks like the day starts out pretty normal and Spike is getting fitted for the grand Galloping Gala and smolder gave him a heads up about the greed growth which that was a pretty helpful heads up for Spike just in case in his next birthday not only that this is during the time of Applebuck season and smolder was testing out her dress as well and Spike was pretty Starstruck seeing her like that and it's a pretty cute interaction and everything until they got interrupted by rabbits but it looks like it turned out to be a good day I wonder what else could happen guess we'll find out next time
Rushed all to Hell and back and there are still some typos. I don't see myself continuing. This is just way too rushed.
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I thought I did as best of a non-rushed job as I could with this particular chapter. There are still more chapters ahead, though I won't lie and say there won't be similarly rush things as there have been several times while writing this where I felt like either I couldn't really add much to the original story without basically retelling the whole thing or having a way to circumvent all of it.
So maybe this isn't really the story for you in that case. And I apologize that you feel that way.
Leave? Was this mentioned before?
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