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Are Smolder and Garble still siblings in this story?
Early Discord? I might be okay with that
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They are still biologically related yes. However, will they be actual siblings siblings? I suppose only time will tell.
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Actually, Discord was already dealt with...sort of that is. That was in Chapter 8.
Unless you meant him being free from stone entirely.
Either way, the thing about Discord is that he's not really evil to begin with, he just enjoys chaos. And with this alternate universe, he has a reason to just keep watch over the unfolding events and I went over said reason in Chapter 8 as this is a version of Discord that has suffered the actual MLP:FiM show around three thousand times over.
great chapter
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Oh I know, it’s how I almost always perceived him. It’s just wildly interesting that he’s going to be around much earlier than before
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Discord's always looking to spice things up is the thing, and this version of him has dealt with the same episodes of the original version of MLP:FiM so much, he believes things are predictable at this point. Guess you could say that this version of Discord is getting a rare treat to see how things play out with certain events he's familiar with.
And if him getting to witness Spike basically scaring the crap out of Garble for a change is a small price to pay for continuing to see how certain events play out while sitting on the sidelines? All the better. Seriously, the moment I allowed this version of Spike to essentially trigger the monsterous form seen in the original version of "Secret of My Excess" out of a desire to protect things, I knew I could basically make Spike go into his Spikezilla form on Garble during their initial encounter.
And I'll be honest, I had a lot of fun writing chapter 24 as a whole. Does it show?
Ohhh lol 😆 that's cute
Yeah that's actually a pretty good control there I did remember there was a comic that Spike did grow like that called the Guardians of Harmony but he was in control of himself which I think that's pretty cool
Oh no Peewee they're going to mess with his family of Phoenix
So it looks like Rarity came back from her trip from Canterlot and also hanging out with fancy pants and smolder made fun of her for that and it kind of ruins the date for Twilight and Flash but not really see invited her to come along after being kicked out of the house few days later the dragon migration started and after discord's mentioned about smolders brother Grable is there she really wants to meet him to see who he looks like and of course the result was not too great because he is a brute and kind of mean and he was going to mess with those Phoenix family but luckily Spike stop them with his new ability maybe someday garble learned his lesson someday probably in season 9 but who knows well I guess we'll find out next time
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Can you tell I had fun with this piacular chapter?
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Oh yeah definitely especially about Spikes growth that's was funny lol
Sorry I took a while getting around to responding to this. Nothing to blame except self-admitted laziness. But, yeah, this was an excellent chapter. The exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up were very well done. While I enjoyed Smolder getting a chance to get in some good- natured payback on Rarity for past teasing, my favorite parts would have to be Spike's "monster form" being impervious to Discord's magic (certainly provides a good reason for Discord to behave himself a bit better) as well as Spike being able to use the form to put a good scare into Garble (especially with Garble officially [in this universe] coming up with the name "Spikezilla")..
On to the next chapter.
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...Wait...
IS THAT PEOPLE IN A CHARMANDER AND PIKACHU SUIT I SEE IN THIS SCENE?!
POKEMON FOR THE WIN!
I love how Discord is entertaining Spikezilla being a threat to him, especially on how many ways he can distort reality to mess him up. It's for the sake of comedy I guess.