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That took an unexpected turn
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That was the point. Wanted no one to expect what was going to happen this chapter.
This is how Discord didn't become an actor, but a viewer.
Because now he doesn't know the story and finds it interesting.
Nice approach to the story.
Again, thanks immensely for getting this next chapter up so quickly. Most certainly appreciate the effort that went into the exchanges, characterizations, general wrap-up and future chapter set-up. Loved the gang getting to meet Shining Armor months before the wedding to Cadance (particularly Smolder's reaction and Twilight's brief surprise concerning how she knew what BBBFF meant). Also got a kick out of Discord getting shocked by Smolder already being there and NOT knowing about Garble. And the first meeting with Flash was also enjoyable set-up for later chapters, including Shining going into "Big Brother Instinct" mode and Flash pretty much thinking he wasn't planning on hurting Twilight anyway. Definitely enjoyed Rarity's reaction to getting a chance to verbally rip into Blueblood and Fluttershy both already spotting Discord before he could get his traps set-up AND already befriending a few of the garden animals and Celestia already having the protection spells on the Elements prepared.
VERY certainly looking forward to more of this and am very willing to be patient if I know the end product will be better because of it.
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Best part is, I don't think anything was terribly OoC with Discord in this. And I did my best to not make anything else seem too OoC either within reason of course.
I think my proudest part is what I did with Flash Sentry.
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My personal favorite part was how I managed to give Flash Sentry history with Twilight here. It was actually part of the reason why the previous chapter had to be delayed until today as I knew I wanted to double dip on the chapter uploads. I really wanted to make this chapter a long one to make up for how the previous chapter had to be handled because of my hands being tied. So I figured I might as well make this chapter extra special to justify it going up on the same day as the previous chapter. Not to brag, but I think I accomplished my goal.
You misspelled draconequus.
"Big Brother Best Friend Forever!" Twilight and Pinkie Pie both said at once. "...Do I even want to know?" Twilight asked.
"Just a hunch." Pinkie Pie said. Twilight just sighed.
"Of course it is..." Twilight said.
Lucky guess Pinkie lol
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To be fair, it IS a pretty difficult word to spell, like the names of a certain action movie star/former governor of California or a certain late-19th century/early-20th century German philosopher.
Ah I see he saw like the our timeline aka the show and now things are different here nice reference ð
Oh yeah lol ð
I don't think you don't know Spike ðĨ
Armor
Ok wow so we are in the early season 2 of return of Harmony so Twilight and the others included Spike and smolder for a meeting and Shining Armor is there as well wow very unexpected turn here so once they got there Celestia explain about Discord and he got the elements of harmony and the girls Spike and Shining Armor want over to the maze because that where he is and once again things got interesting when Discord mentioned about the original timeline and got confused about is but before he could say something flash Sentry show up which another character that showed up earlier in the show and apparently cupid hit Twilight because she got a crush on him and it broke Discord lol that's funny which kind of likes this whole thing just happened so it looks like he's going to stick around in this time line so once they return to Princess Celestia she made announcement that it's going to postpone the grand Galloping Gala until everything is fixing up and it looks like everybody it's getting ready for those events I wonder what rainbow and Luna are going to talk about I guess we'll find out next time
Best chapter so far
Headstones ðŠĶ
Is Discord in a time loop?
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Did he really need to be in one?
He IS Discord.
Honestly like Codiet said, nice job making Discord aware to a point he notice the whole thing is off from the original. Though I wanted to doubt the shattered to millions of pieces, but hey he is a chaos entity, so go buck wild.
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I figured Discord literally breaking into a million pieces over differences from the main timeline after just breaking out of his statue would be something that could believably happen in cannon because it's Discord. Really, he's the avatar of Chaos. Whose to say he couldn't do something like this just because?