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He's a brave kid
What wait a minute I thought he was a Pegasus
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Yeah that would be the worst thing that could happen
Cadence
Ok this was a pretty interesting one and interesting turn of event so it looks like Twilight and the others are on their way to the Crystal Empire alongside with the Cutie Mark Crusaders and White Flame and the other and apparently he revealed himself that he was a unicorn to everybody and told them the history about his family but once they finally arrived things are crazy apparently there are some sadness of energy following the others and even showing the vision even white flames past and whatever that energy orb is possessed Sombra and taking advantage of his sadness but it looks like radiant hope which I'm surprised she's alive save him from his own despair and saving the Crystal Empire now White Flame amitted to everything about who he is and this time it was the truth but they all understand his situation and they're going to help him defeat that Zanth guy but whatever Twilight saw worries her I wonder what could it be I guess we'll find out next time
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Yeah I think I AU'd this without sacrificing too too much of the original episode. Plus I felt like this was the best opportunity to have Zanth involved in this universe more than just have him be this mysterious orb that everyone would question. Plus, I always planned for this to be where White Flame would tell the full truth so that was another excuse to throw Zanth into this.
It’s going to take a bit to digest this. I was very much expecting White Flame to have been from som remote part of the world
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Actually, that's TECHNICALLY the case. It's just not as important as who he really is.
Again, some really good job on the dialogue, adventure, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Great work on the family details concerning White Flame. And, yeah, one of your OCs giving Sombra another form to up the ante was an intriguing touch. Also loved your working in a character from the IDW comics in a way that makes sense here (which is the most I'm going to say while minimizing spoilers).
REALLY looking forward to more of this.
so they are unleashing the CMC on Sombra?
i gess not but that would have been funny
Translation:
Usurper Umbra of pure rage, I grant you a form that will strike true Fear.
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The “f” in fear is not caps. I had to cap “R” because of the way grammar is checked.