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Again, the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are all wonderfully done. Definitely liked the chat that Spike and Smolder had during their own sleepover (including Smolder admitting that her own past dealings with other dragons hasn't exactly been that good [which may or may not have included a passing reference to "Dragonshy", but probably not]) and Zecora's reaction to meeting Spike and Smolder (and the reactions to Spike getting a couple of inches taller). And, yeah, Rainbow, I can understand that the rhyming IS pretty difficult to do on a regular basis.
Anyway, certainly looking forward to more of this.
Good chapter & clever way of getting Spike's height a bit closer to Smolder than in canon!
Oh yeah that's right the dragon migration even before Twilight and Spike came around it's been like that for a long time I kind of forgot about that
Oh yeah this is during the time of look before you sleep and not only that that's also the first episode I ever watch back in 2011 Good Times all thanks to my YouTube notification
Oh yeah the poison joke I remember that one when the main six have to get apple bloom and accidentally run into the flowers and it would have been funny to see Spike and smolder be affected although there was a story of smolder did got affected by those flowers and that's a pretty funny effective
Yeah the first time I saw her I feel like she's a little bit older than Spike just about a few years
And I know I stretched during a few of Zecora's rhymes. Doing them makes my brain hurt.
I'm sure it must be very difficult to find a couple of words that rhymes and everything
Well this is a certain interesting chapter here so it looks like Spike and smolder been talking about how smolder looks like in the dress she did even talk about when the dragon migration was here she did interact with those dragons and she didn't have a good experience there with them and she's thinking about Spike being so different from them she kind of like that and it looks like the storm was about to hit and Applejack and Rarity are at Twilights to take shelter the next few days after the event of the poison joke Zecora was pretty surprised to see dragons in Ponyville and they even explain how they've been found by their sisters and it was pretty funny saying rainbow having trouble to understanding the rhyming so I wonder what's going to happen next guess we'll find out next time
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Rainbow wasn't the only one getting a headache from Zecora's rhyming, so was I as it was VERY hard to do; some of the lines are BIG stretches as a result.