Breaking in - Pinkie Pie's Rent

PuzzleMaster98

PuzzleMaster98 #1 · Jul 3rd, 2022 · 8 · 2 ·

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Can't wait for the sequel

V-H-SClop

V-H-SClop #2 · Jul 3rd, 2022 · 4 · 2 ·

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I love that in every fic you do, you put Rainbow in a lewd situation and I like that (at least in most of your projects) Good job, man.

Winsor27

Winsor27 #3 · Jul 3rd, 2022 · 4 · 14 ·

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make one where Rarity talks badly about the clothes of someone she doesn't owe and that's why he kidnaps her and rapes her until she gets pregnant

Winsor27

Winsor27 #4 · Jul 3rd, 2022 · 2 · 14 ·

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make one where Rarity talks badly about the clothes of someone she doesn't owe and that's why he kidnaps her and rapes her until she gets pregnant

V-H-SClop

V-H-SClop #5 · Jul 4th, 2022 · 1 · 1 ·

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One question will there be a sequel to this? I saw that you left some things that could be interesting to develop like the RD thing and the movie, Starlight and Trixie.

rakhen

rakhen #6 · Jul 4th, 2022 · 3 · 1 ·

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Gonna be great to see something with Celestia and Cadance where they become bimbo broodmares for their master

DerkerRED778

DerkerRED778 #7 · Jul 4th, 2022 · 7 · ·

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I don't know how you do it, but you really have a kind of magic that makes the characters retain the essence of the series to trick the reader into knowing that they are not what they seem to be.

I really liked this Pinkie Pie, despite looking innocent, inside she is an arrogant mare and does not hesitate to take advantage of others using her body, I really liked that detail and the writing does not fail.

For when a sequel?

Nolan Grayson

Nolan Grayson #8 · Jul 4th, 2022 · 4 · ·

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The only bad thing about this author's stories is waiting for another story to come out

Fusion Blaster

Fusion Blaster #9 · Jul 4th, 2022 · 2 · ·

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So we have a series. So personally I'd like to see Spike take Rares, and Flash take Twi. AJ, maybe the FlimFlam bros get her?

In any case it'll be a good time.

TheOneWithoutAName

TheOneWithoutAName #10 · Jul 4th, 2022 · 2 · ·

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Can't say if there is a sequel. This is mainly me and my friend writing this and that. Whatever mood strikes us.

So, maybe the Trixie scenario will be explored or it might not be. It is hard to say as an example.

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There is a reason why "I want to cum inside Rainbow Dash" is a thing. In all honesty, I didn't like her at first, but her look seduced me!

Though my friend brought that lewd Daring Do movie idea up.

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That is a bit more unlikely as me and my friend write more consensual stuff overall.

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I love to hear that you enjoyed it, albeit my friend was the one responsible for Pinkie and should be given credit for this scheming depiction of Pinkie Pie. Well, credited as in me saying this. Friend wants to stay anonymous after all.

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My bad. I am working on my game and longer story commissions, because of this there are less uploads. Have written about 90,000 words on an Equis Online MMORPG lewd spectacle. And if you ask me, why I haven't posted it yet, it is mainly so, I don't have another unfinished story. I want to only publish it after it is done. Luckily next month I might wrap it up as only the large epilogues are left!

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All mood dependent for my friend and me. We write whatever comes to mind.

V-H-SClop

V-H-SClop #11 · Jul 4th, 2022 · 4 · 1 ·

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Hehehe, I don't blame you, it's also contagious to treat Dash that way, in fact you were the one responsible for me using Dash in my fics as my test doll and I can only thank you, although I still have a lot to learn. xdd

I don't know who your friend is, but the Daring Do +18 movie idea was great.

ponepony

ponepony #12 · Jul 6th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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I'm just really curious how they raise the twins now.

Synchrie

Synchrie #13 · Jul 6th, 2022 · 3 · 1 ·

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I really like this series~!
I also really love seeing Pinkie get dominated because that doesn't happen too often

ryuyi

ryuyi #14 · Jul 10th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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Otra buena historia.

megaatun30

megaatun30 #15 · Jul 10th, 2022 · 3 · ·

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Recemos por que haya una secuela.

Twilightlovesclop

Twilightlovesclop #16 · Jul 16th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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114 likes? impressive, this story contains little but at the same time a lot of content to have fun, I like background situations like DD's pornographic movie or the situation of Starlight and Trixie enslaved, that gives magic to the fic.

I have 2 questions
1-Will there be a sequel? As a possible idea for a sequel, it can be said that the DD movie has an effect on the ponies that corrupts them since the fic mentions the moral degeneracy of the Mane six, I'm just saying you can start from there.

2- I don't know if he mentions it, but how is Twilight's castle in this universe? Pinkie only mentions it but doesn't give any details about Twilight's life.

TheOneWithoutAName

TheOneWithoutAName #17 · Jul 16th, 2022 · 2 · ·

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It actually is the second one I wrote with my friend. There is a Fluttershy one before it. Not sure if I should title it a sequel though as reading the other one is not required for this one.

The moral degeneracy and the castle is probably something best left alone for a future fic in any case. It is a small little series and I hope you will enjoy the future stories about it in any case.

SuzukiTEAM

SuzukiTEAM #18 · Jul 17th, 2022 · · ·

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It could be a sequel in the same world perfectly and if you get to do a 3rd part, there they could be connected through specific mentions as epilogues of both stories (Although I feel that the problem would be Rainbow in the fluttershy story, it is understood that both mares live with their rapist).

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