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I'm a bit confused, I have many questions:
1--Is the main story finished?
2-How did Rainbow Dash get with the griffons?
3-Where is Zakia?
4-Celestia was dominated before?
5-Did Zakia manage to conquer the Mane Six?
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1. Saga One, Yes. This is a direct follow up of, Me and Holo are breaking it up into smaller more manageable saga's. I'll have that more clearly stated in the summary.
2. Taps?
3. He's around. Don't worry. Just making sure their are more perspective from other than one or two people. So don't worry, Zakia is still around.
4. What you read at the end, think of it as a traumatic memory from her past... explaining some of the reason why she is the way she is.
5. Still in progress. Just things are broken into Saga's is all now.
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Griffons, sorry, i use the translator.
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So how did Rainbow end up with the Griffons at the beginning of this chapter? I don't remember anything like that being mentioned in the previous saga or maybe it's all Celestia's imagination?
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Those gryphons are apart of the Siri. Its not just Zebra's that are apart of the Siri.
With the start of the chapter. She was on a mission with them as she is a Siri Asset. The Siri have old standing allies and will get new ones as things go forward.
:D
Wow, after reading this I wish that Celestia will defeat Zakia and the Siri
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Yeah, she had it pretty bad early on. Keep her past in the mind with what she does in the future. No one has clean hands in this, both have been fucked over in some way and both have in return done things immoral and unforgivable. Good and Evil is subjective to what side you stand on.
How much time passed after the final chapter of the first story and this chapter? I feel like I missed something.
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It's left vague but this takes place right after the last Saga. We are breaking things into smaller saga's instead of one massive mega story. If a time skip of any major size happens it will be mentioned. Sorry if the start was a bit confusing.
A submissive Zakia? Wow that was really unexpected!
There appears to be a phrase without translation, "“YUKO WAPI HUYO KAHABA WA BLUU*", an extra phrase not present in the text,"* Au nitaidhibiti kwa ajili yako: Or I’ll control it for you!", and "Ndiyo, Bibi" isn't marked.
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Thanks for that. When it comes to these translations, some things slip through the cracks.
Wow, I thought this was an easy conquest, instead what an unexpected turn of events.
Salía seems so out of his zone right now.
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So did Zakia. ;3
Damn, Bo really is trying to convince himself that he is superior to Zakia but is going to be a rude awake for him when Windy begs for Zakia’s cocks like a whore. I like the contrast of how confiden Bo was on previous chapter to him being a little nervous now.
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Tyvm, that was the intent! :D
Windy's teasing was so hot! Well done! Let's see if Zakia can hold himself a little longer. Also quick question, will you include the batponies in the story?
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They will appear, won't say when though.
Nice time to fuck the husband next
Nice, hope we get to see Windy surrender completely to Zakia.
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Sounds like an interesting spin on the story. -thumbs up-
I love the breeding talk! She will certainly have his foals. Can’t wait to see her reaction when she sees Bo.
Nice chapter but one thing needs to be changed. Rainbow Dash’s eye color is rose, not green.
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Good eyes, corrected.
I was left with the question of the state of spitfire after his round with zakia
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Me too, did Zaka won?
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Hmmm, in a way I guess you could say.
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Exhausted and sticky.
Very nice chapter.
So part 2 is now done, although I'm surprised Mrs. Shy wasn't in this one as she lives in Cloudsdale as well and should at least be on civil terms with Windy.
So far we have Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Apple Bloom, Scootaloo, Windy, and Spitfire claimed. I know there are guys too but that's not what I am here for.
As for main characters we still have Twilight, Pinkie, Rarity, Sweetie Belle, Cadance, Luna, and Celestia left as well as many other side characters including a plethora of MILFs.
I'm looking forward to see what's next. Personally, crossing my fingers that Rarity's family is focused on next.
Wait, its over? Or will be more?
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There is a sequel in the works.