• Published 1st Jul 2022
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Greave - Bicyclette



Flash Magnus tells Rockhoof about what was lost when the Royal Legion became the Royal Guard.

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Greave

“So, uh, yeah, I guess that’s it for the tour, really!” Sunburst said, standing awkwardly in the open doorway. “Once again, it’s truly an honor to have you both as visiting lecturers for this week, and I’m so sorry that we couldn’t get you separate rooms! With all the new boarding students, and this being so last-minute, we only had a single one to spare.”

Flash Magnus barked a laugh. “Ha, I once spent six moons living in a ditch dug into the side of a mountain with forty other stallions!” With the elbow of a foreleg, he poked the side of the enormous stallion standing next to him.” A week sleeping in the same room with my good buddy Rockhoof here sounds like a dream compared to that!”


Sunburst laughed nervously. “Hahaha yeah, that would be a dream, wouldn’t it?” he blurted out, before quickly continuing, “I mean, I”m sure you two have a lot of catching up to do, so I should really get off to do some Vice Headmare business! I mean, so uh, bye, then!”

Sunburst nodded to Flash and gave Rockhoof the briefest of eye contact-avoiding glances before trotting off in a way that was obviously trying to seem more in a hurry than he actually was.

Flash and Rockhoof looked at each other for a moment in silence, their faces still. With a mutual understanding, Flash reached out with a hoof and swung the door closed. A split-second after it shut, they both burst into the widest of smiles.

“Ah, ain’t you a sight for sore eyes! C’mhere!”

Rockhoof opened his forelegs wide and wrapped them around the pegasus, who embraced him in return, both squeezing tight before letting each other go, and sizing each other up.

“Ah, the lad was right, we do have a lot of catching up to do! Look at you! Adapting to modern pony ways well, I see!”

Flash laughed uproariously at that. “Ah, yeah, I guess it would seem that way!”

Indeed, in the modern fashion, Flash Magnus was naked from nose to tail, no longer wearing any of the armor he had returned from Limbo with, save for the polished silver greave that he still wore on his left hoof. He flashed Rockhoof a smile.

“And you look just the same as you ever did!”

“Aye,” Rockhoof agreed, looking down at the tunic and hoofwraps that he'd always worn since he was a colt. “Naepony’s worn the clothing of the islands for centuries. I cannae very well let it die out.”

Flash lifted the greave on his left hoof with a sad smile. “I understand that.”

Their eyes met for a split-second before Magnus turned away.

“You know, that Sunburst is sweet on you, you know.”

Rockhoof raised an eyebrow at him.

“Hmm? The lad?”

“Yeah! You didn’t notice?”

Rockhoof shook his head. “Nae, not really. He’s far too much of a wee’un for me tae even be noticin’ such things.“

Flash barked a laugh. “How old do you think he is? You know that he’s second-in-command of this entire school, right? He’s thirty-five years old!”

Rockhoof raised both eyebrows. “Really? The lad’s so fresh-faced and has such an innocent air about him, that’s hard tae believe!” He shook his head. “But that does make sense. Modern ponies seem so much younger than they oughtae be.”

They do, don’t they?” Magnus smiled. “But still, you should think about it! Looks like he’s been pining after you for a while.“

Rockhoof looked deep in thought for a few moments, before resolutely shaking his head.

“Nae, I cannae imagine it. The idea don’t feel right.”

“Yeah, I’d bet.” Magnus gave him a look of understanding. “You left someone behind when we all went into Limbo, didn’t you?”

Rockhoof blinked at him. “Dinnae we all?”

“Yeah, but you know what I mean! I mean, we never really talked about that kind of thing, even with everything we shared with each other over the years.”

Rockhoof considered this.

“Aye, you’re right, I suppose we never did.” A pause. “An’ I dinnae if I want to start talkin’ about that right now.”

“Ah, you don’t have to, Rockhoof! I mean, I’m the one who brought it up.” Magnus sighed. “I… I left the Royal Guard.”




“What?” Rockhoof frowned. “You seemed right at home there the last time I saw ye!”

“Oh, I tried to be, I really did! ‘Once a soldier, always a soldier’, right?” Magnus flashed that cocky smile. “But, well, it didn’t turn out that way, and, that’s why I’m here! Trying to find something else to do with my life, and I figured I’d start with where you found yours. I… I never told you much about the Royal Legion, right? I mean, I talked about it to you and the other Pillars, but in the way I would to any other civilian.”

Rockhoof shook his head. “I dinnae think I understand. What could be so different between the two? Even your uniforms were practically the same!”

“Well, it was pretty obvious from the beginning that things were different, when I saw that mares and stallions were serving on the same units.”

Rockhoof puzzled. “That dinnae seem so strange ta me. The Mighty Helm always had both.“

“The Mighty Helm was a defensive unit. Just like the Royal Guard is. It’s a job. You do it, and then you go home to your family. But the Royal Legion wasn’t like that! We were an expeditionary force! Sent to faraway lands to spend entire moons on campaign and in the field. And you did it all with your echelon, the same unit of thirty to fifty stallions, instead of getting assigned to this unit and that like you do today. Can you imagine that? Twenty years of seeing the same stallions, day in and day out, marching and living and fighting together? Knowing each other to the deepest depths, trusting each other with our very lives? Can you imagine what kind of bond that forms?”

Rockhoof shook his head. “I suppose I cannae.”

“We called each other brothers. Brothers of battle, because we were like family, you know? But we were so much more than that.”

Magnus held up the greave covering his left hoof.


“This was what marked a new legionnaire after passing his initiation. From then on, he was to keep it on at all times, when marching, flying, or fighting. He could only ever take it off when his echelon made camp in the evening, because that was the only time he was ever truly home, resting among his brothers.”

He stared at his hoof, tears forming in his eyes.

“I loved them, Rockhoof. We all loved each other. Because that’s what it took to get through those cold nights and uncertain futures. That was the trade we made. That was what it took to go off to faraway lands to die for Equestria! We risked and sacrificed our blood and lives, and in return we got a kind of love that could only exist in that place that melds the passions of life and death. A love that knew the very bodies that each of our lives depended upon. A love that knew how to properly mourn the ones we lost.”

Magnus’s breath hitched.

“And it’s great that the ponies of today live in a time of peace where they no longer need such things. But I can’t help but think that we lost something beautiful along the way.”

Rockhoof looked at him and smiled, an understanding sadness in his eyes..He reached out with a massive hoof, and gently touched it to the surface of the greave.

“Travelin’ tae faraway lands tae fight for Equestria, trustin’ each other with our very lives. Don’t that sound familiar now?”

Magnus blinked away his tears with a soft smile of his own, looking into Rockhoof’s eyes. “It does a bit, doesn’t it?”

“Yea,” Rockhoof agreed. And gently, ever so gently, he pushed up against the greave, slowly peeling it off of Magnus’s hoof until it fell, clattering, onto the ground.

Magnus’s hoof was exposed.

Rockhoof touched his own to it, nail against nail, the flesh of their frogs feeling each other.

Their eyes met, holding each other’s gazes for a few silent, fascinated moments, seeing in each other the shared sorrow for a long-lost world.

And their lips met as they mourned it together.

Comments ( 8 )

High quality title

High quality stallions

I didn't expect that ending, but hey, it totally works! Good for them, finding solace in each other.

Modern ponies seem so much younger than they oughtae be.

I really like this line! It sums up so much of this tension between past and present. That Magnus and Rockhoof don't exactly resent the innocence their sacrifice bought, but also find it difficult to relate, to cross the gap of who knows how many generations. Good stuff!

CGen #2 · Jul 2nd, 2022 · · 2 ·

Minor nitpickiny lore detail, but I do recall that Flash Magnus was shown fighting with mares in the relevant flashback/story episodes - it does seem that Equestria always had an egalitarian fighting force.

But this is a cute story for something so short! I always felt the Pillars were undervalued in the show, and could have focused on them all more even after the Rockhoof episode. The decision for Flash to keep the single hoof guard/greave in his 'modern outfit' is quite an interesting look too, something I think anyone else would have done in the same position.

I do feel that the tension between them could've been stronger though, there's a lifetime of experience behind each of them. Magnus has to talk about it because those were his own, but between them words alone can feel flat. Thoughts, feelings, expressions, and actions within and in-between dialogue can help things feel much more real. The dialogue was fine alone, but it could be better with more to show what each sees and thinks in greater, personable detail.


Would you be interested in continuing this?

As far as I know, no culture was ever as gay as the ancient greeks, so I'm 100% on board here. Like, we literally named gay ladies after an island in the area.

Howdy, hi~!

Loved this. The little details were great and I always love me some gay Flash (of both varieties). This was super short and sweet, if a bit bitter on the lost love Magnus has. Excellent story, thank you~!

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augh ty so much! i am so happy i found the title, and yeah, i am really digging Flash Magnus who was just a featureless blank slate to me before this story. can't imagine him with anypony but Rockhoof now!
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Minor nitpickiny lore detail, but I do recall that Flash Magnus was shown fighting with mares in the relevant flashback/story episodes - it does seem that Equestria always had an egalitarian fighting force.

i actually only realized that on looking up screencaps! but for this and all the other stories in that episode, i see it as the modern-day characters imagining the historical stories filtered through the modern lens. (alternatively, mares and stallions do both serve, just in segregated units, so that could explain it too)

The dialogue was fine alone, but it could be better with more to show what each sees and thinks in greater, personable detail.

i agree! i am sad because this ended up being the most rushed of my four fics, since the idea only came together on the very last day. there are a lot of ideas i wanted to fit into this, and i wish i'd taken longer with it, to make the conversation flow and connect better.

Would you be interested in continuing this?

yes! both with a direct sequel and a longer fic that dives deeper into Magnus's past, alternating with his difficulties adjusting to present-day Equestria. really excited to develop these ideas!
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so true, Flash Magnus's backstory is very, very gay
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so glad you like it! i think i will definitely have to work Flash Sentry into the modern-day scenes in the fic that goes into Flash Magnus's past and trying to adjust to the present, because i, too, love both varieties of gay Flash

Lovely stuff, especially the interaction between the two veterans of the Pillars, and the ones who seem to have lost the most in the timeskip. Meadowbrook and Somnambula had homes waiting for them. Star Swirl's never really been tied to one time or place. Stygian found far more than he lost. Mistmane... hard to tell there, but she definitely settled in well in the Crystal Empire. But Rockhoof lost his people, his home, his entire culture. Flash saw his warped beyond recognition. It's hard to say which is worse.

(There are some lore issues, as have been noted, but I'll happily gloss over them for the sake of the prompt.)

Excellent portrayal of two battle brothers bonding. Onto the B!

Mfw Bike can’t ever let the gays be happy

this is beautiful. thank you for writing it

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