A trans MTF story about Fluttershy coming to terms with who she really is.
Stormcloud had always been bullied for who he was, so what if he accepted who she was?
Updates occasionally, will not be abandoned.
Currently on hiatus until I find the manuscript for it.
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Cute story so far, keep it up and don't let these troll down vote get the best of you, they are losers and are impotent to stop your from letting you speak.
it's not bad. But it's not great either. 5/10 it's decent nothing more. Try not to rush it all out. That's where things can go off cliff hanger. The idea is set it's just you need more details and time and make the characters pop out such as how they feel when doing dialog and stuff. Try not to do this... place caps of one word and then put she yelled... that is something that we know with caps (caps means shout) it's either that or lower case it and then say she yelled. which it's leads to poor writing. (saying it twice in different format.)
example... "AHHHHHH" she screamed. = (saying it twice different format)
stuff that you should be doing.
example... She used that high pitch of her voice letting out a scream.
It is your first fiction this is true... Hope you learn from this quickly.
Why didn't you call male Fluttershy Butterscotch?
This is excellent so far! I dont know why it has so many dislikes- its quite enjoyable! looking forward to more chapters actually, before I binge it
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Homophobic trolls mostly and just plain jerks, they are trying to discourage and scare off the site any and all writers treating about LGBTQ+ stuff because they are think skin insecure guys hiding behind anonymity of the internet who like to punch down.
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They might not prefer Trotsworth's R63 names. I don't like most of them, so I use different ones myself.
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I didn’t because I wanted the name to almost reflect the feeling of being trans. The name ‘Stormcloud’ is so opposite from Fluttershy that it kind of fits with the idea of being in the wrong body.
Giving upvote purely to counteract the transphobe downvoting
This fic is a nice concept and I find MtF Fluttershy to be an interesting headcanon, but it would really benefit from not being so briskly paced. I suggest you give more time to explore Fluttershy's feelings and interactions with her friends, and try to make each chapter at least 1000 words, if not more. Making things just a little more fleshed out will do wonders to your writing, and make the characters easier to be invested in.
I will say, I like Stormcloud as a deadname for Fluttershy. I could tell you were going for a name that doesn't fit her personality, and she has to think of a better name herself, or maybe by suggestion from a friend. I know quite a few trans people who feel that way about their birth names.