We all make choices. Decisions that are often thrust upon us by circumstance more often than personal desire. For Orion, his choices will lead him through the veil of our world and into the wonder of another.
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Nice!
got here early for once now its back to the fallout equestria book i was reading before
Thanks for yet another awesome chapter and I wish you the best of luck with your new job!
Well, Orion's meeting with the king went better than I thought it would. With everything Bloodbeak said and did to Orion during that meeting. I was expecting him to do a little more than levitate a sword to the king's neck in response to his actions. Especially when you consider Orion's track record with people that try to push him into a corner.
At least Orion is already making some new allies among the griffons. Which is good because he's going to need them since it looks like that one nobel is starting to make her move against Scream.
What a fucking lovely treat, it ain’t the weekend yet!
Is this an early post or are you a busy body?
You need to put some more dirt on griffons to make it more balanced, otherwise this story would become too one-sided, And others too.
Liking where this is going, now just waiting for shining to pull up and add to the chaos.
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Also taking notice of Orion too, I'm expecting an attempt on his life. Maybe 2
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Busy this weekend thought I'd get it out now.
Great chapter as always
Right now, this Story right here is my favorite ongoing/regularly updated story on the site. I don't know why, but the excitement I feel seeing a new chapter drop just to see how the story will progress is something I haven't felt in quite a long time. Or to shorten this overly long comment: "Thanks for the Chapter!"
Really nice chapter. This story is definitely something worth waiting for!
I think he should stay. 😥
Oh come on. Do something rash. He is only a simple pony. Do something rash. < Maniacal laughter. >
Monk
This is getting good
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Hahaha it's cause of the meat, isn't it?
Absolutely awesome chapter! Even if it was a chapter from hell, know that you have all our support!
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You're not wrong in that the prolog kind of catches you. This is one of those stories or movies where the first scene is actually the ending scene of the film, then the story takes you back in time and shows you how things got so messed up in the first place. How the characters began and how they got to that point. Its not an uncommon way of writing, but if you're not used to this type of introduction it can confuse you.
Just stick with it. As stories go, this one is actually one of the better ones on this site. It's not going to be one of those times where you feel that you wasted your time.
Monk
Hate it? this was a fantastic read! The first stroy you wrote was good but this re write is soo much better. Please keep up the good work
Great chapter! Thank you for writeing it!
Interesting that you hate this chapter, I was a hobby artist for a small art and my best image was in my mistake folder. I think the biggest hater of ones work is oneself. lol.
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I believe the prologue stands a good chance of being a the scene right before Orion transforms into an alicorn, along with pretending to die in order to stop Celestia. Though that theory was going off the hints of divine intervention that was apparently occurring in the previous version, and my own theories about how the alicorn amulet was probably an enchanted item similar to the ones he uses. If an enchanted item could get Trixie to be more powerful than Twilight, then the sky very well may be the limit for Orion’s power base using enchanted items.
Though something that wasn’t in the previous version, as far as I can tell, was the Hyperborean ruins. Made from a material beyond anything the Griffins can penetrate? Sounds like advanced metallurgical technology. Trace hint of humanity? A fallout bunker left behind has humanity spread into the stars? Maybe Orion didn't get sent to a different universe, but to the very distant future? How is Orion going to react when he hears the name “Lauren Faust” in reference to pony religion, which is distinctly human and not pony-esque? I eagerly wait for updates.
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All Orion has to do to make Griffonia a economic super-power would be to teach them the technique called the “Assembly Line.” All it requires is a belt, a track, and some rollers; and BAM - industrial leap forward by 500 years.
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Good luck on the job front. I selfishly want more chapters, so I hope your new job pays well and grants lots and lots of free time!
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I couldn't more strongly disagree. Morgan wouldn't write schlock like that. What ever he plans, it's isn't going to be a GI Joe Saturday morning cartoon.
Monk
I might pick this story up again, the reason why I dropped it is that I saw missed potential, if romance had been added to the story , without that the only way I see it working is if he becomes more powerful
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There is romance, but those stories are likely to develop in the long term. Orion's almost pathological need for secrecy is what will prevent him from seeking further entanglement. At least right now.
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sorry, Just finished reading your story, anyway I would like to say that maybe you might want to speed up the romance and his powering up a bit, don't get me wrong, what your doing is good, but it can get exhausting, I drop this story for almost, what, 2 years before finally coming back to it, if you add more romance or quickened up his powering up I think you might find that people start to enjoy a lot more, though, I may be wrong, I have trouble with reading so I could be an idiot, or at least naive putting into account my age, I mean, you an adult, right? I kinda want to place you between the ages of 20 to 30, maybe 25, so a teenager's opinion may not be very useful, also, maybe add music, hell, judging from what I've seen you might be able to get your very own soundtrack made for the story, also, maybe some pictures, helps people from an image so they can forces more on the lore then tryin' to make a picture, anyway, this comment has become far too long and it probably would have been better to DM this but, if you ever lookin' for ideas, proofreading for free, or hell, even someone to talk to as I know writing chapters 10k long takes a lot out of someone's time and can be very stressful, please dm me, maybe we could even exchanges discord if you have it.
Augh where chapter
You doin alright? You seem to be pretty consistent with your schedule. A longer space like this makes one worry.
That feeling when your plans go to hell because of meat, food and griffons am i right?
You know, a fountain pen is probably the best possible gift one can give a monarch in a world of quills, given all the paperwork they do. Orion should make up a few and mail them to all the Royals he can think of xP
HAH. HES IN YOUR HOUSE