We all make choices. Decisions that are often thrust upon us by circumstance more often than personal desire. For Orion, his choices will lead him through the veil of our world and into the wonder of another.
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LETS GOOOOO!!!! Though now I have to reread the last chapter.
Also, I read the old version of the story, and if it is anything to go by, then this new rewrite will become one of the best out there with how it’s going so far. It is already incredible, but the improvements are astounding and make this a joy to read.
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I'm grateful for your praise!
I think dog napoleon might be an actual retard
Although just mere wishing, I do hope the next chapter starts with Orion indulging in his violent desires regarding Barney. I also love how you can expand on certain incursions in the story, instead of them being mere set pieces, and can flesh them out and incorporate them into the flow.
You have a spelling mistake of Scone when you likely meant Sconce when talking about fireflies
Anyway, looking forward to this conclusion here.
I miss being a kid, miss my friends being a short distance away instead of scattered about the country, got into so much mischief.
Thanks for yet another awesome chapter!
First of all, let me say that I hope Orion is able to help the Diamond Dogs with their plight.
However, when it comes to the Barney. I say that you have Orion go into a mini blood rage and give that mutt something permanent to remember him by. My recommendation is for Orion to hit him with a cutting spell strong enough to leave a very visible scar across his face and possibly leave Barney blind in one eye. I know that sounds incredibly vicious. But you somehow managed to make that dog a character I hate almost as much as Backwater in just a couple of chapters.
Speaking of Backwater. Will she be making anymore minor appearances in Orion's life or will she not be showing up again until she makes her big move?
Morgan!
Well written. You went in a direction you didn't take for the original.
I rather like it.
Monk
"You had a therapist once, and she made you stop coming after you told her about your childhood. Apparently she just didn’t need that kind of negativity in her life." -amphetanon
Another fun chapter to read, as for any summer plans probably will end up going on a camping bender with the boys.
Barney just keeps digging that grave deeper and deeper, huh.
Yes... Let the hate flow through you
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Barney isn't even remotely as loathsome as Blackwater. At his core, he is just a small dog filling shoes too big for him and pretty aware of that fact.
Even his aggression is plainly an attempt to overcompensate, probably because Diamond Dogs alphas are expected to act like big bullies.
Fuckin' Barney.
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This is actually a lot what it is. I took examples of actual dog behavior when crafting his character.
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I have been trying to improve my narrative abilities for the past few years, I think it's passable. Certainly not as good as some writers on this website, or others.
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Thanks for the heads up, not sure if that was me or my editor. Will correct it soon.
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Who says you can't all head to the arid lands of some such place as a get together and war for supremacy?
Go! Do battle!
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Thank you, I too, appreciate this route more. I honestly look back on the previous book and shale my head on it. What the hell was I thinking? Much more organic now.
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I haven't been camping in years and years, my dude.
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Well, he is a Diamond Dog, he is genetically predisposed to dig. The fact that it just so happens to be his possible end is just a bonus fact.
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*insert Sith meme here*
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Fuckin' Barney.
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Where my fast bois!
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Basically a bomb, yes
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That man deserves every bit of the ass-kicking SURELY coming his way
I am solidly expecting Barney to get punted down the road.
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Lmao, is it because he is football sized?
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Kick da baby lmao
How did I not notice this update sooner?
I came here to comment....
Ok bye.
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Lmao you rock bud.
I've managed one escape plan for him, and the odds are terrible. All I can come up with is that if the weird mom diamond dog got back into his cell, he could try and convince her to get him his things. If she thinks he's her pup, he might be able to manipulate that.
"I'll need my shit back."
OH MY GOSH. How cute would it be if the diamond dogs worked with the village? They could mine iron and coal for them!
I KNEW IT