We all make choices. Decisions that are often thrust upon us by circumstance more often than personal desire. For Orion, his choices will lead him through the veil of our world and into the wonder of another.
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Nice to see Orion finally bury the hatchet with Romeo and inadvertantly let Grace know that the love will never be returned because of his hangups and his fears. Also loved how Gilda walked in on Orion after his drinking binge, shouldve gone for the good ol' windup hand to ass slap maneuver, be even better if Orion looked at Gilda and said 'You may spank it, once.'
And Book Heart, I knew she was evil, but Orion shouldve pointed at her and shouted 'Assassin!' just for all the griffon guards to look at who he was pointing at, and then straight up dogpile or obliterate the poor fool.
Thanks for yet another awesome chapter!
Damn, now I really hope that Grace will be the one to fully capture Orion's heart in the future. It also looks like he's made a future ally and possible friend in Roderick with that little talk.
Will Orion stay in regular contact with the new allies he's made on this trip or will he limit his interactions with them to keep them from being targeted by the cult?
What can you expect of a cult, I am right?
It seems Orion paranoia have payed off
https://youtu.be/hCA2qvnh__M?si=JNGWyqbOKhTY07g1
Oh damn perfect timing to reread this
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I'm no sure about friends but Roderick does definitely owe Orion a solid
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Is not paranoia when someone is out there to get you.
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I feel like there's a pop culture reference in there somewhere...
Dang this story is awesome! Always a pleasure to read a great chapter!
I'm so incredibly glad to read this story again. I feel the time taken to rewrite was well worth it. While the first iteration was more befitting the stature of fim fic, you really have come into your own when it comes to writing style.
There is little in the way of conveying the weight behind my appreciation for you and your work, but thank you for not giving up, and thank you for the entertainment.
10/10 would read again.
Keep up the good writing, and let your editor know we appreciate their efforts!
I honestly like this version of their relationship better.
Less heartbreak and makes more sense.
Grace is also more mature.
Also, Vegeta Moment lmao.
When this happens???!!!
"999 what's your emergency?"
"Hi, police please. I'd like to report a murder."
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That was a great chapter. Wrapped up their little adventure nicely, and lead into the next one with just a hint of whats going on for Orion to ruminate over. I'm guessing it'll be an important clue, once he has some of the context needed to work towards the why.
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Orion has just given excellent reasons for why a marriage between him and Grace wouldn't work out. Heck, he shares better chemistry with Gilda than with her liege.
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Twilight would probably be even more devastated and frantic than she was when she discovered his range issue... Man do I sorta miss her already
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Fear not, we are returning to Canterlot soon.
I have a question. Can I assume that this story is going to be updated every week?
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Just to the end of this Arc. Then it's back to silence as I write and edit the next chapters. I find this easier for both me and my editor. That way I can get a connected story plot out for the readers so they do not have to wait six months like I did last time.
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I can't decide if that's a good thing or no, but I know that this site is a dead one for me, when I have nothing better to do I open it and read some of the stories. Yours however, made me go back to this site on a weekly basis just to see if you uploaded another chapter again. Take your time brother, for me your story is addictive enough to the point of it still being in my mind for months. Wish you good luck <3.
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Well, thank you for that my dude! I do plan to start uploading to other sites here eventually. I work full time, often times more than full time. So it kinda leaves my days super busy.
If you want to just pay attention to my updates, I do have a Twitter/X/whatever-the-hell they are calling it now. Should be in my bio. I regularly speak there, and I'm doing better about announcing uploads.
As much as I love how mature these characters are being, I am OrionxGrace aaaaaaaaaaall the way.
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I can respect that my dude.
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I think it may be from "Person of Interest", the show that made the assassination chain meme.
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Is it from "Person of Interest"?
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Don't get me wrong. I really do appreciate you portraying Orion as being very mature. It really shows him acting his age (since he is technically as old as my dad). But I just really like the feel of Grace and Orion. Something about it just feels right.
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well, it doesn't talk about his relationship (my vote goes to Twilight, their interaction is fun, they should have more screen time) who dies throughout the story, and the canonical differences, in addition to the obvious ones, (shadow), but There's something there, but I don't think it was the MC's death, it seemed very anticlimactic