We all make choices. Decisions that are often thrust upon us by circumstance more often than personal desire. For Orion, his choices will lead him through the veil of our world and into the wonder of another.
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si te hace sentir mejor, tambiƩn es domingo para mi (11:33)
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jaja, me alegro de haber cumplido con las expectativas de alguien
Just had to say it, huh?
Thanks for another awesome chapter!
Orion shouldn't have let that other Timberwolf get away. It's clearly got vengeance on it's mind and if that part at the end was any indication. It's already building up a big pack that'll be out for nothing but pony blood. I'm gonna take another shot in the dark and say that unlike the original. It won't just be Applejack's parents that are going to be killed by the wolves before Orion annihilates the pack.
It also seems that thanks to Granny Smith. The citizens of Ponyville are starting to see Orion as one of their own. I'm actually hoping that Backwater and some of her goons show up during one of Orion's future visits to Ponyville to try and take him. Only for Granny Smith to rally the entire town behind her and send them running back to the pit they crawled out from with their tails between their legs.
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I believe it will be the opposite actually where Orion saves Applejack's parents. No offense but that really should have been something that happened in this story in the first place. His influence would have caused far more ripples and probably will save them
Some small words mistakes like using hand me down, unless they know minotaur hand
I wish Bright Mac and Pear Butter had more interactions, specially with their children. It seems like Granny were the only one raising and correcting AJ and BM.
It's always a pleasure to see an update to this story, and this chapter did not disappoint.
I thoroughly enjoyed the characterization of the town and the Apple family, and the entire arc so far is a marked improvement from the first iteration. The fight scene was also a joy to read with a good flow of battle and suspense. It's chapters like these where I almost wish I didn't read the original just to be able to approach this without preconceptions on how things will move forward. Overall, I'm left in suspense again at what happens next.
Glutinous should be gluttonous
It's astonishing just how much you've improved in terms of writing characters and their development. Love it.
So there's an update every Sunday? Neato.
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Every other Sunday. Twice a month, or near to it as I can. These chapters are hefty things, takes a lot for me to write, edit, my editor edit, and me editing once more before posting.
I usually avoid anthro stories, but i decided to give this one a chance. No regrets so far! I am really looking forward to the story! Really good take on the characters!
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Thank you. I understand anthro stories are not everyone's cup of tea. So it makes me happy that my story is entertaining enough that you can look beyond it.
Objectively wrong. I would fight a giant wooden golem for my dogs
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was not his dogs thou
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Me: (Facepalms) "Damnit Granny Smith! Stop being "that person" who raises red flags!"