We all make choices. Decisions that are often thrust upon us by circumstance more often than personal desire. For Orion, his choices will lead him through the veil of our world and into the wonder of another.
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If he has to use his magic to deal with the timberwolf, won't sunbutt get wind of it? He's still keeping his power as a secret, hopefully he gets by with ingenuity alone.
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She is already aware of his increased strength. Certain talents however...
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Oh yeah! I realise now that he used his power when he was cornered. Now I just have anticipation for when she does inevitably find out about his talents, and that will be a doozy. I didn't read your original but this story is rather unique and I've read thousands of fics on here over the years, you should be proud of your improvement!
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Thank you. I am. And I am so encouraged by those that read from me. Even the criticisms are welcome. I improve with every chapter, and every voice.
A bit of the empire leaking back to normal or something else?
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take it from someone who binged the original it was good and this is better
Keep up the great work really love this re-write your doing.
Thanks for yet another awesome chapter!
We all know Orion is going to save Winona and become an honorary member of the Apple family. However, THAT STILL DOESN'T MAKE THE CLIFFHANGER ANY LESS EVIL!
I also have one quick question for you. When the Timberwolf incident is over. Will the Apples make an attempt to adopt Orion or will his relationship with them be close to how it was in the original version?
I wonder if this is going to go different than the original. I kind of hope so. I rather like the Apples.
No spoilers!
Monk
"The idea simply stated that when personal feelings are mixed with power, bad things happen." -Corvo
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You know I can't give you an answer my dude. That would spoil the fun!
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And you shall get NONE!
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I know it is canon, but I always found suicidal levels of stupid that Ponyville was built next to the Forest Of Ultimate Doom, yet lacks walls, guards and security of any kind.
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God I know. You'd expect a town known for disasters would be better planned. I blame the Earth Ponies. Bunch of stubborn...
Some good action lays ahead. Can't wait.
That handgun sounds useful now, or maybe start spamming Molotov cocktails and kill it with fire!
great work!
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In the original story The empire had fallen to ruin and every pony was dead by the time it should have returned, that is the one major thing I hope he changes in this story. that only the outer limits of the empire were ruined in the battle and that there are some surviving crystal ponys.
great chapter 👍, also rip and tear until it is done
*Distant angry rambling about cliffhangers*
That cliffhanger....
Impotent rage intensifies!
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That's gross
Thanks for explaining
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Yeah no probs dude.
Your comment made me curious so I had to scar myself with this information lmao
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And now you scarred everyone else. Woo hoo!
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I saw that you didn't explain it and so I said in a joking tone i.imgflip.com/4fxzyf.jpg
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And I'm happy to help
*Insert "Fluttershy sucking a tear back in" meme here.*
Lies are for the weak who have not the strength to seize what they want by force alone
Ugh, how many fics have i read where something like this has been said, almost always exactly like this with the lecturing tone.
"I'm in Hillbilly hell!" -Lightning McQueen, Cars