Loved the original and I am very much looking forward to this rewrite.

What am I even looking at ( The Picture )?????

Absolutely buzzing for this

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Dimensional rift. I felt the abstract would be good to indicate the transition.

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😶

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Oh believe me I know. The reason why I stalled is because as I was writing I began to realize it wasn't lining up, I had accidentally wrote in things that actually didn't happen but ended up making sense. So I'm am retconning the hell out of the story so it actually makes sense.

Plus the timeline was a little too crushed to me. This is me not wanting to get too far ahead before the mistakes become overwhelming.

probablemente sea porque solo lei la versión anterior una ves (cuando ibas por la mitad de la segunda parte), pero realmente no oto ninguna gran diferencia... aun haci me encanta * le chupa la verga a la historia intensamente *

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OH My GOD, ITS HORRIBLE!

Im joking, Just finished it and I see what you're doing now. I have to say, that I'm liking this opening more than the original.

You've always been a good writer, keep up the good work.

Oh and don't accidentally delete one of the best quotes on my list during the rewrite.

Monk
"Turning to the now gaping Shining Armor, “listen you little turd nugget, this is the holidays. A time in which no one is supposed to be a dick to another. So how about you pull on your big boy pants, and act like the adult you are supposed to be.” -Morgan83

Deleted my original comment as I see it doesn't really apply.

Ohhhhh HECK YEAHHHH!!!! Can’t wait to see what’s going to happen in this revamped version.

th.bing.com/th/id/R.c53dbadc8c62486c4f40eaab17a5ec6d?rik=EZzi2AbWnUJByw&pid=ImgRaw&r=0

Once again,

Wait what?
What the hell is going on here..?!!!

Allrighty, let's see how things will go this time to lead into this battle

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This fic is one of my all time favorites

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There will be more, I'm already editing the next chapter.

Wonderful work as always love. I'm glad to see your followers returned happy and excited for your story. Keep up the diligent work, I'm behind you 100% in all that you do. I am so proud of you. 💖

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Thank you baby. And thank you for helping me make this story better. Y'all want a large reason why the story suddenly went way more indepth, it's this one right here.

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I only pointed out a few things that needed editing or clarification. The rest was all you. But I am happy that I could be of some help to you. Anyways, I just wanted to drop in and leave you some words of encouragement. And like your audience, I'm looking forward to seeing what you create. ❤️

It is so nice to be back, and what an opener compared to the OG, can't wait for more!

i realized a quarter the way through that this was just the prologue to the original book but longer with new stuff this time it had names either way ill be waiting for chapter one i am cursed with good memory when it come to none school related things

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I know your pain. If it involves work, I forget....

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its the same reason why i hate skyrim now i wish i had a button i could press that would make me forget the plot to things ive already seen so i can play my fav games all over again

I dunno I'm not really feeling this intro chapter, never been a fan of these types of intros. Well if this story is as enjoyable as the original I'll keep reading.

it took me half the chapter to figure out, OH! dawnbreaker is celestia!

just...wow. incredible first chapter.

I've not read the original, but that sure is a cold open.

I'm confused. Is this supposed to be the beginning of the story, or am I meant to read The Blurring Of Realities (OLD) first? Is this a remake or a sequel?

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Remake. This was the unreleased prologue

"Well now, perhaps I won't just kill you. While I normally like to be on top, there is something to appreciate about a well groomed stallion rutting between my breasts." She grinned as he glared down at her.

"You don't like my voice?" She asked imperiously. How the hell did she impersonate Celestia for so long. Their voices were nothing alike. "I at least beat out the colorful skyrat of a Bearer at the very least."

Can we keep Day Breaker? She has a lot more personality than Celestia.