We all make choices. Decisions that are often thrust upon us by circumstance more often than personal desire. For Orion, his choices will lead him through the veil of our world and into the wonder of another.
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good sir or madame or whatever,
This has quickly become one of my favorite stories on the entire site. It's a good premise, with a well thought out MC and most importantly, it's very well written. There are a lot of authors who write well within the universe of MLP, but not all that many who write well in general. Your story would be just as enjoyable stripped of all the MLP ties. Writers of fan fiction don't have to engage in world building, but you've chosen to, and it's great. Thanks for this story.
PS thank you for writing chapters that take longer thank 10 minutes to read
That bit with Celestia was gold.
Edit: (I think accidently punned, if so I'm not sorry )
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@_@....thank you....
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Never be sorry for puns!
I am really loving this story! I didn't read the original version, so I'm very curious on where this is going. I'm guessing Orion is some form of Umbral, like Sombra, or I'm completely wrong and he's something you made up.
Wrong again, Orion. Not aliens, and a lot more than 3!
I so badly want to comment other things, but I don't want to influence the story unduly. Morgan is doing an excellent job with it.
I will ask though, he packed his lunch right? Did he only eat what the lunch ladies were handing out, or did he unpack the meat he brought and Twilight Sparkle just not notice it?
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Shhhhhhh
Every time another chapter releases, I feel compelled to reread the original work all over again. Fantastic work on this latest installment of Orion's Fun Life Of Joy.
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"Fun Life of Joy"...ya know, Orion is going to most certainly disagree with you.
PS. Also thanks for giving the original some love. I have deviated a lot from some parts of the first. I'm glad to see it still getting some love.
Thanks for yet another awesome chapter!
I really enjoyed the scene with Celestia putting that greedy little noble in his place. I think you're doing a great job with Celestia's character. This chapter alone shows us her good side by ensuring that Daisy will have all the funding she'll ever need for her orphanage. And to those of us who have read the original and know that Scream is royalty. The implication that Celestia may have not only engineered the death of her parents but also erased her memories as well.
Also, will Twilight have any interactions with Scream in the near future or will the two of them not be meeting until after Luna returns?
Funny how Orion blunders through in each chapter… surprise the Equestrians haven’t put him on a table and studied his brain by now.
Also surprise the bed wasn’t burned to a crisp yet…
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Yet is the key world. So help the orphanage if he comes back to find a pink duvet on his bed.
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For the most part the story will remain the same, I am just going through the story of actually building a world that will likely deviate from the original story very quickly.
Sheeeesh, i am a new reader but god damn your world building and characterization is so good. I will be an avid reader of your story for the chapters to come!
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Well many welcomes to you! Thank you for stopping by my little slice of the site as well! Hopefully I can keep you, and everyone else, we'll entertained.
I love seeing think what you could possible have planned as I have not read your previous story. You have made excellent transition and character development including many characters that have not been shown in the limelight yet. I look forward to your continued passion.
Hmm yes the story will be mostly the same but with more detail
Fantastic as always!
You've got a few typos and grammatical errors in this chapter, but it was great.
Honestly, I think this is the first time I've actually found an anthro story that was legitimately good instead of just fetish fuel. And it's really good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Similar to the original story, I hope that you address the idea that nations outside of Equestria have nominal sovereignty. Even without utilizing sanctions, Equestria still controls Equus through the sun and moon.
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Frankly, I prefer this Celestia too. An overall benevolent ruler who still had (and have) to do pretty unsavoury things to build her nation and keep it safe.
Even in the original version it was implied medieval Equestria was NOT a fun place to live, and that Celestia and Luna did their best to make it a better place. Is not fair to judge someone living in the Dark Ages under modern moral standards.
Thank you for the new chapter.
It was like always a pleasure to read.
Me and my unbridled wisdom didn't think to see if the rewrite was being posted. Smh my head. Reads a lot easier but I do notice a few spelling errors. And the overuse of the word consternation. Also perhaps used in the wrong way or in place of 'concentration'
I can't wait for those entitled bullies to try and to shove him around, only to get trounced by someone who has an adult mind in a child's body. Of course if I was him, I'd be dreading pony puberty that would be starting in 3 or 4 short years.
I have to admit, I prefer the rewrite. Though I always feel like a duck for saying that.. I enjoyed the first go round too though
I rly appreciate the changes.
Só... lets Freaking GOOOOOOOOOOOO
Ah, Mr asshole becomes nice to the one true pony that matters among all the others, color me shocked.
Mr. white?! what are you doing!?! you're supposed to be making Crack not funding Orphanages!!
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Jesse, its important Jesse. You gotta understand we need the tax exemptions Jesses
A foal that thinks candy has to much sugar, who speaks like a sailor. Way not to draw attention to yourself.