We all make choices. Decisions that are often thrust upon us by circumstance more often than personal desire. For Orion, his choices will lead him through the veil of our world and into the wonder of another.
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I don't mean to be rude, but didn't you delete some of your stories?
The humour, it's beautiful ;_;
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I have yet to delete anything. I'm on the fence about deleting the original work, this story that is being rewritten now. Some people are fine with it, but there is a loud group that want me to keep the old book around for some reason.
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Lmao thank you!
This doesn't update fast enough, I want more! Also, I am liking Orion more and more, for some reason I fully expect him to do something incredibly drastic and shocking that could badly tarnish the CFP's reputation
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I'M SORRY! PLEASE! DON'T BEAT ME! @_@
I like it still, wonder what route he going to take. I still like the original work, this can be the reset universe or a branch type world and now you get the idea why I typing this. The multverse are large
Thanks for another awesome chapter!
I really enjoyed the expansion on Orion's first encounters with Backwater and her cult. It certainly explains why Backwater is so obsessed with getting her claws on Orion.
Since we all know that he's going to get to Canterlot safely. I really hope that both Azure and Cloudy will be alright. Backwater is definitely petty enough to take out the frustrations of her failure on them.
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Why would I do something so horrible!? I'll just tickle you until you pee >:3
Well this was certainly a nice memory-land trip, explaining some things too.
Keep it up
Good job 👍
Cant wait to see more i really enjoyed the original
Great content :)
Ah, an interesting story that had been buried underneath a multitude of stories. I remember reading this one back in the day and having a love-hate relationship with it.
While I really love the fascinating world this story created (which I probably love the most even though it’s anthropomorphic), one of the biggest gripes I had with this fanfic was how annoying Orion was. In my view, this guy had such a snotty attitude towards the ponies (to give him a little space, I will admit that it is kind of inevitable for one from a modern-day America to feel prideful when coming across a technologically primitive, fantastical copycat of Uncle Sam’s land {looking at you, Equestria!}), and his excessive use of profanity made him an unbearable character for me to read through. I’m not really a softie in terms of language, but this man spewed out curses like some end-game boss who would attack the player endlessly and only give 1 millisecond of a breather between strikes! The above, and the usual b r u h m o m e n t s NSFW stuff that seemingly plague the majority of anthro stories I’ve come across (especially since I am now critical of such things to a greater extent compared to previous years because I’ve started to take my Christianity more seriously)
Even though this story was an incredibly interesting read, I am afraid it is not one of my favorites.
Well, that was my little ranty-ish review of this story after not reading it for a long time. May Jesus be with you, Morgan! Hopefully you’re doing alright, man.
-Davidtin
Death to the CFP