We all make choices. Decisions that are often thrust upon us by circumstance more often than personal desire. For Orion, his choices will lead him through the veil of our world and into the wonder of another.
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Great chapter! More about Celestia is making me wonder what exactly is her connection to the first chapter. I'm currently wondering if it's her going insane, or her being possessed.
Sinking feeling in my stomach about what Celestia is up to.
it begins
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Either way, it will make her transition into Daybreaker creepier than in the previous version (where she went merely from evil bitch to even eviler bitch).
ive been waiting for the rewrite of this part of the story for so long and i wasn't disappointed
YESSSSSSSSSS... IT BEGINS!
Love it, curious if we see Forager in this version but I’ll have to wait and see :)
Half an inch think or long? Half and inch long would be too small to be a rod or bar, it'd be a bead or microbead
Thanks for another awesome chapter!
I was wondering when Orion was going to start learning Enchantments. He definitely seems to be a lot more cautious about anyone finding out about his talent with them than he was in the original version. I wonder if because of this. Celestia won't be discovering that there's a new Enchanter hiding amongst her subjects until much later in the story.
Well there goes my earlier theory lmao
Celestia irritates me. She tries to force Orion into Equestrian Society, fully aware that he wants nothing to do with it, then gets upset when it backfires.
I like this, learning enchanting in secret is more believable than the minotaur keeping his word or Celestia not reading his mind and finding out.
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Imagine spending centuries surrounded by fawning subjects telling you all the time how wonderful you are, that your orders are always wise, that the society you have constructed is the friendliest and most advanced of the world (probably true, considering the time period and the bloody dark ages left behind)...
...and then, some orphan colt comes along breaking or downright ignoring you precious social conventions. Worse, the brat whose age is merely a small fraction of yours dares to talk you back and openly disagree with you. The nerve!
On top of that, your precious, brilliant yet very impressionable daughter-like protégé is practically eating out of the palm of his hand. The boy clearly needs to be corrected.
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There's a mixture of reasons, I think she has a god complex (obviously), meaning she pretty much thinks she is always right. The 'Mother is always right!' kind of right. And because she's been alive and manipulating ponies for dozens of century's, and is seen by some as the bringer of dawn, while other see her as a goddess of the Sun. If you read the story this one is rewritten after - it makes sense she would be surprised. Every other time in her recent memory it was always 'Yes, Princess!' never 'But why the fuck would I do that, Princess?'. She's used to her ponies being 'yes men', and not questioning her authority / methods / reasonings. Then this little shit named "Orion" does all of that openly. She keeps expecting him to be a yes man, because she moves the fucking sun, dammit! and she can't get why Orion doesn't just accept that.
Delivering us new content, what a treat! Keep up the good work :)
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Thank you all will be revealed. In a couple of years XD
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Could be indigestion. Celestia is just a motherly Alicorn after all....
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Begin's it does. My poor little fingers are already yelling at me to the B.S. I am gonna put them through in writing all this out.
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Super khamehame-bitch.
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Pinkie it not there yet. Do not invoke her here.
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You'll know within a couple of chapters.
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oh my god i know please don't abandon me like so many other fics have. I've been abandoned by two 200k words stories, two 400k word stories, and one 1.1m word story
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Half inch bars for making jewelry is actually rather large when you think about it.
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I wanted to make this more believable, rather then let it be the same silliness as before. And I don't know about you, but I personally am one paranoid bastard, and I didn't go through nearly the hell that Orion had pre-Equestria.
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MWHAHAHAHAHA I RUINED YOUR THEORY! TAKE THAT! Yeah.
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The others who responded to you, are correct. Royalty, no matter how down to earth they may be. Have certain expectations. Not to mention there is a cultural problem as well that is as old as the nation itself. Very hard to break past that in a few short years when the fastest method of communication is mail or the news paper.
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Yep. I wanted a slower approach to his growth.
During the middle of this reply I was begged by my gf and her sister to take them for ice cream. There was no need to mention this but I felt it good to note it for posterity.
Last time I didn't really give him a chance to learn, just pushed things along.
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Bingo bango got it in one oh.
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This is also correct.
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I'm trying sometimes the chapters fight me. You wouldn't think it would considering this is a rewrite, but dear god the hell some of them put me through.
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Not sure what you were trying to say bud, but I will take it as a compliment.
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No! I refuse. I don't care if it takes me ten years, this story is getting done. I have an end already in mind.
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dont over work your self besides i can wait it seems the quality of writing on here has increased since November 2021 ive also found a few older stories lately like the "change" series by tom117
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speaking of the Minotaur i really liked him as a character is he coming back or have you decided to remove him form the story
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i have a rule when it come to fanfiction "if its been 3 years or more with out an update its dead" but i got a good feeling about this one only one fic has proven me wrong so far tho
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Is that why Orion introduced the rotary printing press in the previous rendition of the story? To increase the production of works that espouse “controversial” ideas?
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Stay tuned....
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There are..consequences to any action. For Orion it was a matter of wealth.
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I do in fact feel called out and that is hilarious
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In all seriousness I had a rough draft set up for this rewrite well before I published the prolonged. So don't feel too bad. You were wrong before you knew it.
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Stop it.
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Sorry I think I posted a blank comment while reading on my phone.
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You good. Just made a funny.
Its a fucking magical programming language...
Ive never been so excited!
Da fuk? He was ordered to be her friend, so why bother to feel ashamed, if it's against his own wishes?
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It's a dencecy issue. Orion was raised better than that. While he doesn't wish to be there or involved with whatever the hell Celestia is trying to cook up, he was being unnecessarily prickish to the one pony that really just wants to be a friend. He knew the statement he said about acquaintances had hurt Twilight deeply.
Red stone! Release your inner Minecraft nerd!