We all make choices. Decisions that are often thrust upon us by circumstance more often than personal desire. For Orion, his choices will lead him through the veil of our world and into the wonder of another.
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Once Chapter 3 has been posted, the old book will be deleted from my page
me: https://youtu.be/aI9d4CvoH0o
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*dies*
Though I hate to see the original story deleted, I understand why.
Man, this woman is desperate to get Orion for what he done. Now he on the run and things will get more excited
Thanks for yet another awesome chapter!
God damn do I hate that bitch of a mare Backwater. Her attitude in this chapter alone now has me hoping that her death is even more painful then it was in the original version.
Also will Lazy Rain or Star Shine be playing a significant role in Orion's life in Canterlot or are we not going to be seeing them again for a while?
And so it is on, with Orion heading to Canterlot, with the zealots looking for him... Keep it up.
Also semi-sad that OG story is getting "the boot", but understandable. And there is time to download it if someone still wants to still read it, right?
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Yes there is. I'm sure many have already,
It's just with the new story replacing the old I don't see the point. Part of the reason I didn't just do major edits with the old one was because I wanted this new work to stand on its own. Seems a cheap way to farm already pre-established likes imo.
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Is celestia gonna be the same as the 1st story or is she gonna be different?
This also open the multverse to a fracture timeline to the old book like different equestria reset wave he will have few blank while he take different path unknown to us
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Largely (get it? Cause she huge) she will remain the same person. This was a lot more with addressing inconsistencies in the original story, and restructuring a bit to streamline it into a better telling. I have added new stuff, but again, it is in line with the old just better.
11144582 so everything gonna stayed the same but with more depth in the story if I said that right
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I've added a bit more to the story. But yes. Exactly.
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Okay
Will "Fractured Pasts" also be rewritten after this, or will it continue where it left off?
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It is very likely I will be rewriting that o r as well. Because of the heavy changes of the rewrite, a lot of what is written down in the new chapters will Ultimately change the shape of the story.
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Question about this comment - what kind of inconsistencies are you talking about? When i read the first story a few times (won't lie, I re-read about it three times). I'm just curious as to what you didn't like about it.
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Mostly it's a timeline pacing. Too much too tight, and my courage to actually write more indepth scenes. I like to think I've gotten better, so I am trying to better the story to my current writing standard.
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How do you justify having Discord on your side and still losing the battle? Even if for some baffling reason he could not fight Daybreaker, what stops him from tuning the entire enemy army into a funny triptych?
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You will just have to see...
Is Orion still an omnivore?
Forgot how good this was
I can understand your reasoning, but I would argue that its better to leave it up. It’s not as bad as you make it out to be; and its a source of extra info for us readers. I noticed that a number of details in the previous version of the story aren’t present here; how much of the old story (included the less details) is still cannon?
Also, twenty four guards for one child? Geeze, Blackwater is scared or she’s on a power trip. Either way, I feel like covering her in petrol and light up a match.
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Nah he's a yumivore, he only eats McDonald's now.
"Much of it was blamed upon the almost rampant battles and campaigns of war before all the ponies had finally unified. Since then, they had never been able to catch back up. There had been gains of course, but it seemed like it was going to take several millennia before that disparity was redressed."
That is not how genders work. That is not evolution works.
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This is magical pony land, where the solar bodies can't move by themselves, and some sort of demigod attacks every other week.
I think we can believe the author for this.
As someone just picking this up and not having read the old story I'm feeling pretty confused about why Sapphire and Azure are going to such great lengths to protect Orion. They're risking legal retaliation not only against themselves but against their orphanage and from the government corruption implied existing in this chapter it doesn't seem like it would take much to have terrible things happen to them. Sapphire attempting to sneak Orion out of the city in the dead of night and when that doesn't work to pay, I'm assuming, a significant amount of bits to transport Orion out of the city seems to be motivated by more than just a general protectiveness of the foals they are charged with looking after. A conversation between the two to explain what makes Orion so special to warrant this kind of treatment, even after sending two foals to the hospital, would have been nice.
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I guess they just want to do the right thing? Pony mentality at it's oddest.
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Seriously even human mentality would do the same thing
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Who would let this happen to a child willingly? More so the orphanage workers who actually know the kids directly, from their view, he might not be a perfect kid but even he doesn't deserve that
People have done crazier to protect kids,