We all make choices. Decisions that are often thrust upon us by circumstance more often than personal desire. For Orion, his choices will lead him through the veil of our world and into the wonder of another.
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Oof, that got heavy. And if it's setting up for what I think it's setting up for, it'll hit Orion much harder then the original version.
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Damn Swanky, you're a fast reader
Thanks for another awesome chapter!
So Lazy Rain has popped back into Orion's life. And based on how Twilight reacted when she saw her interactions with Orion. I'm thinking that Twilight and her are going to get along about as well as these two.
I'm being 100% serious I read the title of this chapter as growing penis and I was slightly befuddled
It will happen soon
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Get enough sleep?
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About as well as three angry cats trapped in a box.
It's Sad Boi hours
Ugh I really hope your not gonna throw that curveball of the apple parents dying. But like last time that'll probably happen. Itd be cool if they didnt actually die though. Like them going into a coma for a few years or just going missing and popping up again years later with a story. Anyway still a fun read.
I'm so glad that I realized that you were still posting. This is one of the three or so stories that act as crack to this word addled brain.
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Of course I'm still posting. Had a bit of a hiccup last year.
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With sleep, enough is never enough
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I hear ya. I wish I could sleep.
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Yeah, it's almost 2 AM over here
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It is almost 3 here. I unfortunately slept most of the day away.
Just realised alot of this story can be summarised as 'weird colt chased by weird cult'
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HAHA! Mind if I use that?
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Let's hope the school doesn't get destroyed in the crossfire.
Hell of an emotionally charged chapter.
He really doesn’t have to ever kiss or bone anybody. If he wants to, that’s one thing, but the way this is worded makes it seem like he thinks it’s an obligation.
Maybe it’ll make some people around him unhappy, but he’s perfectly free to stay single. Heck, even if he does get with someone, he still doesn’t have to do those things.
What is this a picture of? I have looked at it from multiple angles and I have no clue as to what that picture is other than random splotches of black and gold.
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Lol, complete abstract art I'm afraid. I have a cover page being made to eventually replace it.
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In the old story, the reasons become a lot more clear near the end of this book. It's less to do with Orion himself, and more to do with what they are protecting him from.
This may be the best character development chapter yet, and that's really saying something.
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I thought it was the inside of an enchanted device that will be important to the story later.
I'm liking the extra addition of Lazy Rain. I don't rememeber her from the first story very well - so its interesting to see how the dynamic changes!
And it already has changed a few things - and I'm liking it.
Way to go!
Wowzers
Now I see why you liked writing this chapter. Writing cool action scenes are cool and all, but the chance to show your readers how Orion’s baggage impacts his decisions must be a great feeling once you got those pesky letters sorted out.
That and writing fun character interactions is always a treat once you have it just right. Keep up the good work!
I'm just finding this story, and I gotta say, you've done fantastic work. Orion is compelling, he feels real in a way so many authors with similar characters fail to achieve. You've done set-up for future conflicts with subtlety and care, and you've made damn sure I care about it because of how it'll effect Orion and not just because I'm SUPPOSED to. I never read the original, and I honestly don't want to because it will change how I view this excellent piece. Keep up the stellar job!
Awww, baby's first lesson to Celestia!
Not good enough for Twilight, but impressive enough to join the guard. Rudesville. Population, sun butt
Trying to remember who that is... I can't place the name. Someone from the orphanage?
Go twilight go!