We all make choices. Decisions that are often thrust upon us by circumstance more often than personal desire. For Orion, his choices will lead him through the veil of our world and into the wonder of another.
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And so begins the wild goose chase of Shining and Orion, I am loving this already and it looks like a certain baroness is trying some underhanded maneuvers to try and remove an obstacle to ruling the lands, but will it go the way she expected it to go or will it blow up in her face? We shall see in the next few chapters. Keep up the good work!
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Political intrigue then a rancorous scene to complete this will be some interesting few chapters to forebode. Still can’t wait for those ruins though.
Thanks for another awesome chapter!
I really thought that Orion was going to be forced to kill Dorothea and her guards when he realized what was happening.
At least some good was able to come from that meeting. He got to advance some of his plans and we learned of Burgandraw's Wall. It sounds like the playground for that world's versions of the lovecraftian monsters. I can't wait to find out more about that place and if Orion will be visiting it in this or the next book.
Also, I hope Shining Armor and Spitfire have fun with the all the wild goose chases the king's agents will be sending them on.
Interesting chapter this was!
I can't help but feel bad for Orion.
From the moment he stepped on Equis, his life has been a bumpy ride fool with crimes, zealotry and political intrigue. Every time he tries to do something, innocent or not, he always get the sort part of the stick, with Celestia, the nobility & the foreign governments trying to take a piece him and discover his true intentions and bring him down, even though he is trying to just live his new life and plan for the future.
Im excited about the next chapter! I would like to see the reaction of the rest of the agents about Shining's secret being discover.
Good chapter!
A great chapter man, learning more about the lore like that of the Lands Between and that of Burgandraw's Wall has been very interesting in this world. Despite Dorothea's little incident, I'm glad Orion got out of that unscathed, as it could've went the other way with him very fast. Like if his Flash Bang didn't work or worse, it unintentionally effected him.
Spitfire being a Pony Supremicist... not surprise with her character detail and all. But I'm sure it's just going to get better. Also the more Orion knows more about Artificying, the more the knife's edge is on Orion's throat. It'll make more sense if by the end of this story, Celestia will eventually find out about his hidden talent, either through Twilight or somehow through the trial.
Makes your sequel all the more interesting.
Anyway, can't wait to the next Chapter, and you have a good day my man!
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I uuuuuhhhhhh....forgot that it was already bring used xD
Double chapter Sunday? You shouldn't have! But you did, so I send you my thanks!
Can't wait for the next chapter that's coming later on if theirs no delays, Also can't wait to see Shining and the whole squad get flash banged by Orion if it happens. The lore about the freaking land outside the walls of Equestria is very interesting, What kind of beast lurk their, do any of them put the Ursa Minor and Major to shame?
You mentioned a beast that likes to burrow into the ground in one of your previous chapters, I think you also mentioned that the beast devours souls to. Will it and Orion meet?
You got me anxiously refreshing the page for that second chapter...
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It is been an hour, and I have been spamming the refresh button.
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Lmao, my editor is in the process of final preparation. It'll likely drop in 4 hours.
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you're saying I have to wait till midnight!??!!?
It's worth staying up for, even if I have an exam tomorrow.
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No! Get your but to bed! It'll be there tomorrow
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You can't stop me!!!! I WILL SLEEP WHEN I DIE!!! Until then, I eagerly await the coming chapter... ;-)
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If Orion's poor luck continues there appears to be a fight in the horizon. With some pony on pony action, that's going the be interesting.
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Oh, aight. At least it won't be four in the morning again.
I just set a flag huh..
Many people misquote that to the Bible. It's an old Chinese proverb, many people accredit it to Confucius.
Amazing chapter. The world building had me riveted.
I KNEW SHE KNEW. SHE WAS WAY TO WELL INFORMED
...The question now becomes how. And if one person figured it out, someone else can surely do so. He needs to find out why she suspected him, so he can