Intertwined lives are seldom kind. When love enters the picture nothing is ever the same. At cross purposes and misunderstood intentions, there are unforseen consequences. They all come together... And may all fall down.
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Gabriel LaVedier
Just another University-edicated fanfiction writer who prefers the cheers and laughter of ponies to madness and sorrow.
Gabriel LaVedier
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And this is why we don't leave Twilight Sparkle to her own devices for too long. A mind as quick as hers, one so expert at moving from one logical conclusion to the next, and without the natural centering effects of social understanding and common sense, can barrel down dangerous paths with alarming rapidity given even a single seed of misunderstanding. I was truly frightened that she'd commit murder before she could be brought back to reality this time. A very well told story, with a lot of thought put into it.
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And I wrote this way before any good canon was established. I'm a little embarassed by the series, as it shows its age, but all in all I think it does what it does well. Thanks for reading.
This is a good story, kinda surprised it has so few views. The detail is very good, and the characters all act like you would expect them to. One thing I really like is the pacing is perfect; I didn't think this story was too long, and it didn't feel too short. No details or scenes felt pointless, and you wrapped up everything and left nothing missing.
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Ahh, thank you. Sometimes I tend to feel this is one of my wearker endeavors because it it my first foray into pony stories. I had not yet worked out my personal fanon, so I was sculping it in a vacuum. Oddly, a lot of things I use in here never really come up again, like Crescent Sliver or Tic Tock, but a one-off mention of Bad Apple became... everything.
Again, all my thanks for your kindness.
I would put a "the" before market.
Looks like that d shouldn't be there.
Awww indeed ... i love Pinky, when she acts this way!
I see you're with your...
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Thanks. I'll hit these next week on my usual correction day.
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I get the feeling as if this is supposed to be "rubber-legged" instead of "rubbed-legged".
I think she means a walk in the open air rather than hair.