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The Gryphon Kingdom to the north has fallen to the corruption of a tyrannical Queen; forcing her nation into a war against Equestria. As the battle looks in their favor, Lightning spark--Leader of the 1st Pegasus Division--finds himself fighting not only gryphon's, but his own mind as he struggles with the loss of a close friend. Little does he know that the new recruit, Rainbow Dash, may be Equestria's only hope in stopping the war.

Most characters on the list, will come in slowly as the story goes on. Also, the (very sparse) romance doesn't pick up until around chapter 3.

image made by the amazing Hinoraito on DA.

Chapters (20)
Comments ( 194 )

allright, this is an legit Ace Combat crossover, all what we need now is a ponified Kei "Edge" Nagase making a cameo in a latter chapter and we're ready to rock!

Juno or Gilda: "Yo buddy, still alive?"

Let us see if your Ace Combat fandom takes us all the way back to Fortress Intolerence XD

8/10 so far. I would say more, but lazy iPod touch keypad is lazy

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Heh, I'll see what I can do. :rainbowdetermined2:

AWAC? excuse me, but don't you think it's supposed to be AWACS?

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I believe they're both acceptable, but "AWACS" might refer to the actual aircraft, while "AWAC" would be about the team.

"The AWAC (Airborne warning and control) team did jumping jacks all day."

"The AWACS (Airborne warning and control system) team did jumping jacks all day." <-- but why does this one sound silly to me. :raritydespair:

(Or I'm just crazy. It's usually that reason, but I'll change it for you!)

RAAAAAAIIIINBOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWW DAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSHHHHH!!!

Chapter 2 has been unpublished due to shortness compared to chapter 1.

Four emails about an update and only one chapter...?

Also, I mentally referred to this as Bleeding Colours. I don't know which I like better! :fluttershbad:

Apologies, I kinda abused the publish button. Didn't know it would send e-mails about updates every single time. :fluttercry:


Edit: Buck it, Chapter 2 is done. *flops* :ajsleepy:

Just to clear some things up:
1. Yes, the song is from Red Dead Redemption and I thought it fit pretty well.
2. Yes, RazorTalon and the two cutie mark crusaders = Yellow 13 and the unnamed boy in AC4.
3. Yes, goldwing is craaaaaaaaazy :pinkiecrazy:

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1: perfect song, and thanks to you i can now add that to my repertoire of songs that i can play emotionally. I can play a lot of songs, but it's a special song that rings true so i can play it with emotion.

2: yellow 13 and AC4? ah dun get it

3: agreeed :pinkiecrazy:

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AC4 = Ace Combat 4. I won't say who yellow 13 is, but you can gladly look it up yourself if you're confused. ^_^;

173499
You renew my inner muse to continue with this fanfic. :heart:

If i read it carefully.....Derpy is Mobius One.....:derpyderp1:
OMG :pinkiegasp:

Alright I just think this is awesome.

Great job with the story! I am hoping to see what happens next real soon!:twilightsmile:

O_O
i love these battles....

233751 Really? It felt a bit short considering I just killed off a supporting character. >_>;

233769 i like action in general
no matter who dies, i still like it...
UNLESS YOU MAKE IT SO ITS MY FAV CHARACTER WHO DIES.....
nah im still fine with that....as long as there is a good ending XD

*theres something wrong with me*

Short but....WORTH READING! :pinkiegasp:
I'm guessing that maybe 3-5 chapters you'll be done with this story right? :pinkiehappy:

234537 Double the epic! What does it mean?!

>> Brotato
The double post was not intentional but God damn it man your fic is awesome! You deserve it!

234677 :twilightblush: I know, silly. Fimfiction has been acting kinda... "wonky" lately. I greatly appreciate the support. :heart:

>> Brotato Yeah, i kept on getting this 502 timeout thing that randomly shows up every 30 minutes.

Apologies for no update this weekend. Too busy focused on my other fanfic, Toothpaste, but managed to get it completed. :applejackconfused:

Why this is so amazing you dont need to work on the other one. Oh well what is it about? Also I love the Ace Combat Series I have almost all US released for the great PS1 AND PS2 except AC1 and AC2, I love the third installment but it is the Export Version which does not have the cutscenes or the multiple endings as the JP Version, I really want the JP and the first two console games. Also why didnt you go into more depth with the faceoff between Rainbow and Razor.. I mean Yellow 13. Also Yellow 4 was killed before Yellow 13 and where is the sabotage and hankerchief. Oh well very minor complaints keep it up, one more thing I believe that the rescue is a refrence to Ace Combat 5: The Unsung War the mission White Noise. LOVIN' EVERY MINUTE OF IT:heart::heart::heart:

281785 Yes, I realize I'm straying from the actual event of AC4. "Yellow 4" is gilda, and I didn't want to kill her off as I have plans for her later. While I hate skipping over a MLP version of stonehenge, I'm just too focused on getting Goldwing out of the way. :flutterrage:

Also, the next chapter is Rainbow's viewpoint when she fights Razorwing. Although it will be quite short. :rainbowdetermined2:

I'm curious how ya'll are liking the OC's... This is my first fanfic and responses are appreciated. :pinkiehappy:

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I know, I think its a great story, could be the best I've read yet. And a great start as a writer, Ace Combat is the best flight sim I've ever played, I prefer the Strangereal games. They need to go back not do the real world, there is almost no originality. As for your OC's they are great.

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Also I think adding in a AC superweapon would be cool, but this is coming from a fan of the games and an overall gamer.

AC04 is my favorite of the games followed by ACZ, which has my favorite soundtracks, then AC5.

286367 *snerk* sorry, fix'd

Decided to post the last part of chapter seven in a different perspective. Even at a whopping 700 words this was hard. Writers block be damned!

Awesome, the head to head game of chicken reminds me of the final battle of ACZ, that is not a bad thing either, also I was listening to Aquila from the AC04 OST while reading this.

288529 It was perfectly fine just keep going, your readers are behind you.

Only one quick sweep for errors, will refine later. Too busy saving Earth from the Reapers in ME3... *cough* >_>;

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We have faith in you Commander Shepard! :coolphoto:

Im Commander Shepperd this is my favorite story on Earth. Mass Effect, great series, hope to play it sometime soon, too busy playing Ace Combat 04, 5, and 3 I will always love Ace Combat. (I know I said the quote wrong). Cant wait for the continuation. Keep on fighting those Reapers and save the planet (I dont remember where ME takes place).

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Nooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No ponified "Edge", if she is to make an appearance in anything it needs to be as herself.

346866 You mean... as a human in Equestria? :rainbowderp:

346923
Just a cameo or mention. Nothing that would alter the story any.

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