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Melody Song


A Bisexual Pegasus with a talent in writing and singing. I can also do magic-long story. Also, Luna is best Princess and the Wonderbolts are awesome. Change my mind, I dare you.

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Magnus didn't think anything of it. He was just going to spend some quality time with his friends in Manehattan, having some drinks. But then, when Stygian the lightweight has too many drinks, Flash is the one who has to take him back to their hotel. But his feelings on the matter change as he gets Stygian to his room.

After all, he does look pretty cute in that sweater vest.

Written for the M/M Shipping Contest'

Popular 9-22-21!

Chapters (1)
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Fun Read, hope it leads to more fun stuff between them.

Awwwww!

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I like it!

But wait a second—

Flash stayed quiet, looking out the window. “Hey Styg?”

“Y-Yeah…?”

“...Did you know a while after we went into Limbo, there was an entire civil war?”

“There was? About what?”

“...The LGBTQ+ community.”

Stygian stared at him. Then, in almost a whisper, he spoke.

“...Who won?”

“The LGBT ponies won eventually.” Flash replied, smiling at Stygian. “By the way, your sweater vest looks very nice on you.”

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Howdy hi! Thanks for your entry into the shipping contest. :raritystarry: We look forward to judging it when it comes time.

Not sure why this is so heavily downvoted? Its so cute lol

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Thanks. It's probably because it's a Pride thing

This is so cute! I've never thought of this pair, but I love it!

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I'm glad you like it!

I'm honestly kinda irritated that people are dislike bombing not just the story for no reason, but also comments. People need to grow tf up

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At least they have an excuse for liking MLP: They're all children

Updating their fashion styles, courtesy of Twilight and her friends, though mostly Rarity, before going to a bar to celebrate.

a very important thing to do! (though modern pony fashion seems to be "no clothes", if anything)

“He had a golden yellow coat, sky blue eyes, and his mane was ‘as red as a bonfire’.” Flash smirked at Stygian. “Admit it, Stygi, the character was based on me. The only character in the main cast who was based off of any of the Pillars and you chose me.”

ah, the classic maneuver of admitting your crush by writing a character based on them in a novel

“I guess so… I mean, it’s not like we’re going to get married right away…” Stygian agreed after a minute. “Wait… we’re not, right? Like, marriage laws have changed, haven’t they?”

interesting what this says about marriage laws in Old Equestria!

Stygian blushed and smiled, closing his eyes as he sank into Flash’s warm embrace. The two stallions then fell asleep, each holding the other close.

aww, very cute!


i have to admit, this one felt a bit rushed. it set up interesting themes to explore, but then did not go into them. as Stygian says:

“Magnus, don’t you dare change the subject after dropping something like that!”

it would have been nice to hear more about that! but Flash Magnus x Stygian is a ship there needs to be more of, as well as Pillars shipping fics in general. there's so much to explore of them getting used to adjusting to the modern world together, and that can work especially well with queer themes!

and it's always nice to see a fluffy, happy ending. thank you for writing!

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Thanks for the comments! But just so you know, I actually took the "Civil War over LGBTQ" idea from my good friend MLPHero, who made a story about it this past June. That's why I didn't put very much detail in here, I didn't want to steal the idea from him completely

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