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Melody Song

A Bisexual Pegasus with a talent in writing and singing. I can also do magic-long story. Also, Luna is best Princess and the Wonderbolts are awesome. Change my mind, I dare you.


The CMCs are on the train home with Twilight and Fluttershy after saying goodbye to Spur and Biscuit. They are very sorry about using up the flower's magic, and are even more sorry for themselves when they see their older sisters waiting for them at the train station. Rainbow, Rarity, and Applejack are livid, but they understand, in their own ways. The CMC's older sisters take the CMCs off on their own after chewing them out as one. Then they have the biggest talks of their lives.

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"Oh Sweetie, I'm so happy you're okay!" Rarity cried, then glared at her "Run off like that again and I'll kill you." she snarled, and Sweetie gulped


Really liking this follow-up to yesterday's MLP episode, also yeah I think an additional chapter of the CMC meeting up after their own punishments are done sounds good. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by superfun deleted Oct 2nd, 2019

I just got around to reading this fic, and something about some of the punishments feels... overly harsh.

Don't know why, though.

Apple Bloom might gain another sister.

What do you mean by that? If you're talking about Sugar Belle and Big Mac it would be a niece/nephew. Seriously answer this bc I want to understand what you mean

If Big Mac and Sugar Belle do get married, then by default she and Apple Bloom will be sister-in-laws.

yeah, it took me like ten minutes to realize that but I was too embarrassed to admit that on the comments. Sorry. Also it really does look that way, I'll tell you why if you don't mind a spoiler for this weekend's episode

"I had to leave the other 'bolts to come get you." Rainbow said sharply "they're busting storm clouds by themselves right now." she muttered

Umm, Rainbow? Wonderbolts are not weather ponies...

...Unless this your way of punishing them for being mind-controlled by Sombra.

Seriously? It said in the episode that they were called by Spitfire to get rid of the clouds. it was a short line so I can see how you might have missed it but I didn't come up with that, it was in the episode.

I wonder why the rest of the Mane Gang didn't show up at Big Mac and Sugar Belle's wedding?

No Spoilers!! I haven't gotten the chance to watch the episode yet!!!!

Fast forward to The Last Problem, where they've grown up for real and decide that a little reflection is in order.

Something in this story sprang to mind... seems Mane Six amnesia is contagious and it's now affecting their younger counterparts.

Well, can't say the punishment didn't fit the crime.

I would not mind seeing the Crusaders helping out at the farm in the capacity Apple Bloom was being penalized or at the boutique in the way Sweetie Belle was. Since Scootaloo is a pegasus, that's one area they can't help out with. For one week each.

Since this is Cloudsdale, this is the only set of tasks the other two Crusaders aren't going to be able to assist with.

Even foals can be competent in their own way, though. Look at what Spur did.

Yeah but Rainbow, AJ, and Rarity don't know that, they weren't there. Also, I'm pretty sure Spur was older than them, so take from that what you will.

Spur is 11-13 according to Jim Miller, not sure how old the CMC are with or without the transformation...

yeah but I think one of the two mentioned the CMCs were younger

Yes they did, from what I've heard the CMC are about 9 but I'm not sure this was confirmed...

😠 I wish spitfire could stop calling her crash

Why? It's a simple nickname among the 'bolts, they all have them

This was a good story. Well done.

I felt like the characters were well with in character. And, each story that was told sounded like something I would believe them saying.

So, well done.

Thanks! It means a lot!

I always thought that the timing of this episode should have come sooner than later. Applebloom had already been mostly on a long trip by herself delivering the pies that Applejack was supposed to deliver but didn't because she was too busy babying her sister.

True, but we have to work with what we got

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