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Melody Song

A Bisexual Pegasus with a talent in writing and singing. I can also do magic-long story. Also, Luna is best Princess and the Wonderbolts are awesome. Change my mind, I dare you.



Fleetfoot has led a bad life. Her parents abuse her, her older brother loves her but is powerless to help. And she and her friends are Wonderbolts. Ponies who are seen as pathetic and losers. Fleetfoot one day finds an old and powerful artifact that unleashes all the power her parents concealed long ago. Fleetfoot only wants to help with her new powers, but she can't control them.

Fleetfoot is attacked by her parents and runs off, isolating herself from everypony else. Her friends Rainbow Dash, Spitfire Flare, and Soarin Skies want her back, and they begin a quest to find her. But when they do, she isn't all that willing to return. Not without a plan

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 17 )

Very intriguing story! I'm liking it so far. This is going on my tracking list, mate.

And she and her friends are Wonderbolts. Ponies who are seen as pathetic and losers.

...Then why does Rainbow Dash want to join so badly and kept singing their praises? Better yet, why did Lightning Dust want to join so badly?

I said seen, not genuinely. Also, that was meant to represent a majority of the population

(and it also includes MLP fans and reviewers-looking at you Firebrand, But I love his reviews anyway:pinkiesmile:)

Is this story a parody of Frozen?

What gave it away? The line 'The cold never seemed to bother me anyway', or the ice stairs and dress?

I thought it would take less time for somepony to catch on to that. Oh well. Yeah, I got the idea while watching Frozen Two, but I guarantee this story will be more than a simple parody. You'll see.

Your stories are good Melody Song

Did the magic come from fleetfoot's hooves

She can use her hooves and wings to control the snow.

Merry Christmas to you too! And there will be sequel, I promise!

If this is a Frozen parody, then who's going to be Hans and his brothers?

No one, not all the characters are used. Fleet's parents are the villains.

Felt kinda fast paced but very enjoyable.

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