Marinette starts out as an normal girl and Adrien who always gets to be locked in his home before they both get sucked into an portal arriving in Equestria, with one way to escape; defeat Nightmare Moon. While in Paris they also have to stop Stoneheart, will they both win? Or will they be trapped in equestria for years? Find out in this story!
This is my first story which is going to be reviewed once or twice also if you guys want this will also be an story which you can add on one of the Wiki's so do it please
Edit: Thanks for the help LyraAlluse for the cover art
Chapters (30)
interesting idea, but the summary has no punctuation. are the chapters this way too?
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see for yourself
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Well played friend...well played
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sorry
Neat.
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thanks
This is a very good story. Please write more when you can.
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thanks
Nobody:
This story:
I AM SPEED!!
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sorry
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np
just slow down ];
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I'm trying
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Next chapter will be hard to make so then it's slower
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take your time
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Okay
Great job.
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"Thanks!" Ladybug said
"It was all thanks to you Ladybug" Cat Noir said
"But also the viewers since without them we wouldn't be joining a new world or that's what Silver told us" Ladybug said
This was a very good story. Is there going to another story?
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yes, it's on the works
Well, this is short
Oh, this is listing the origins of they series.
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what series
Is the vid is not here?
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Will fix it
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Fixed
Big fan of Miraculous and MLP so this sounds like a very very fun read! Boutta check it out
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That was totally unexpected
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Thanks
should work in some punctuation in the summary, almost looks like one long run on sentence.
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Could you help?
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probably not the best, but without punctuation, its like saying it all in one unbroken breathe.
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Thanks
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np
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Yep
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Thanks
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Welcome
Continuity error here. Twilight shouldn't be able to know pinkie pies pinkie promise before she spends more time around her. Cause at this point she doesn't even know who pinkie is since all pinkie did is gasped and ran away when twilight first talked to her.. Pinkie pie in the show created the promise and since this takes place in the first episode of mlp fim there no way twilight already know the pinkie promise.
Marinette knows this how? She only became ladybug fairly recently at this point in the story and she has yet to discover who master Fu is let alone know about a box that can transform other beings into humans. Maybe it would make a little more sense if Tikki was the one that says this since she knows more than Marinette does about the miraculous but at this point there no reason of how and why Marinette knows this from out of nowhere
This story is great from what I read to this point. But there are some Continuity errors.
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I'll fix it
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Will fix it
Should Twilight be afraid of Ladybug because that was one of two of her fears? Just wondering.
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Well, since Ladybug is just a human called Marinette Dupain-Cheng when not transformed she isn't but I had an idea for one of the shorts where Starlight and Ladybug try to help her with Ladybug being dumbfounded but that's then and not now
I believe an only happens before vowels not consonants A happens before consonants
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Okay