Marinette Dupain-Cheng is a normal girl with a normal life, except she has a secret. She’s Ladybug, the magical superheroine of Paris, and fights crime alongside her partner Chat Noir. Together, the duo protect their hometown from the elusive Hawk Moth, who uses his Akuma to corrupt innocent civilians into fearsome supervillains. When their routine conflict is interrupted, both superhero and supervillain must contend with a mysterious trio: Lord Tartarus, Queen Chrysalis, and Rook.
Meanwhile, a new student begins attending Françoise Dupont, and becomes classmates with Marinette. Is Cozetta Glasgow a normal girl, or is she hiding a secret of her own?
Cozy Glow didn't account for being thrown into this strange world after failing to conquer Equestria. She certainly didn’t account for becoming an entirely different species either! It's a good thing she’s got both Tirek and Chrysalis along for the ride, her bestest friends allies ever! Posing as a family, the trio have identified a potential hot spot for magical phenomenon in their new world. Having to be human isn’t easy for the young pegasus, but it’s not the first time Cozy’s infiltrated a school with sinister intent. No creature in Françoise Dupont will suspect ‘Cozetta Glasgow’, just like the local magical beings will never suspect Rook, her alter-ego in this world of superheroes.
Perhaps she’ll even make ‘friends’ with these superheroes. After all, the best way to defeat Equestria’s always-victorious-heroines is to turn another always-victorious-heroine against them!
Crossover between Friendship is Magic and Miraculous Ladybug. Diverges following Season 9’s ‘The Ending of the End’ of FiM and in between Seasons 2 and 3 for MLB. Spoilers for both series.
First of all, I'm sorry if my grammar is not the best, English is not my main language.
Let me tell you that your story totally caught my attention, there aren't many stories that have the Legion of Doom as their main characters. I have never seen a single chapter of The Miraculous, so I appreciate the notes at the end of the chapter. In those notes you also mentioned very interesting things such as the reaction of Ocelllus and the other changelings, seeing their former queen misrepresent something that for them was sacred and incorruptible as the "Reformation" was a hard blow for them, if she could do it Who says no one else could have done it?
I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop the characters in this new world and how their choices will affect the others. I have a few questions though and I hope it won't be too much trouble if you can answer them.
- Do you plan on giving Cozy Glow an origin story in the future or will you leave it ambiguous to some degree?
- In some later chapter, will we hear from Equestria again or will we see any of its characters again (Mane 6, Celestia, Luna, Discord, etc.)? I mention it because as I was able to read in the chapter, all the races that helped Equestria did so without knowing that Discord was responsible for everything, it would be interesting to read the reactions of the different leaders when knowing the whole background story.
And finally, the last thing that interests me is how you will develop The Legion of Doom in this new world, you will reform them, you will turn them into antiheroes or antivillains, open internal conflicts, some will change their intentions and try to betray the others, open some romance or role change in the team (personally the character that most attracts my attention is Chrysalis), but only you know that, it's your story and you have the last word on it.
I look forward to more chapters, I'll keep an eye out for any story update, that would be it and thanks for reading this comment.
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Your grammar seems fine to me, no need to apologize! I’m excited to write about the dynamics of the terrible trio, since most people only focus on one specifically. I’ll admit right now that Cozy ended up taking the main protagonist role, especially since I fully intend to give her the backstory and characterization she lacked in the show. She’s getting that origin story. Tirek and Chrysalis already have plenty of material for me to work with. Case in point, how Queen Chrysi handled ‘reforming’ and how the changelings reacted to that.
This story will mainly take place in the Miraculous world, which I’ll guide newcomers through as we go, but we are far from done with Equestria and it’s cast of characters anytime soon. For now, we watch the antics of three dysfunctional fugitives adapting to an alien world!
Oh frick, it's me again, you know, the commenter from ao3?? Commenting on your story made me finally suck it up and get an account on Fimfiction and ao3, (the only two fanfic sites I actually use) and what do I see immediately after signing up but this fic. It's, uh, still good. I'm still looking forward to it. That's all there really is to say on the matter.
Interesting start. I never saw Miraculous Ladybug, but I'll give this one a shot.
Oh, so they can't hide it now. How will they attempt to excuse Discord from this?
I wonder if they'll attempt to track the trio down. Would they be able to find them?
Does this mean that Cozy is younger then Marinette or is she 14 as well just with a shorter build?
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Cozy is slightly younger. She’s either 12 or 13, haven’t decided on a solid number yet. As for the rest, you’ll have to wait and see.
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Welcome aboard!
I love that Cozy Glow is a evil muse again. She's is the best evil muse. And her plan here to save Chrysalis from herself is actually pretty smart.
Marinette and Twilight are actually pretty compatible honestly.
I guess they cast the petrafication spell while the trio were still inside the cupcake?
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Wait so has bug a boo reformed yet? Because the idea of a reformed Chrysalis is actually pretty terrifying once you realize just how powerful she could potentially be.
Now this is a lovely introduction. Chrysalis did the unthinkable just for the chance to escape. That's dedication. I imagine the Legion of Doom had to spend some time in Paris just for Cozy to get the documents to get to school.
Would it even be possible for the ponies to find the trio. It's another world. I imagine separate from the parallel one they got access to.
I wonder if Equestria has access to this human world through a "mirror portal" or is this world completely different that it is not yet possible to get into?
Were the villainous trio able to learn French? because the standard excuse that in all fantasy worlds everyone speaks English doesn't fit here anymore.
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That sort of compatibility inevitable when you’re both protagonists. As for your other questions, including those of 11628155 and 11628161 will be addressed in future chapters.
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Little do you realize that in fact it is the ponies who were speaking French all along! Both shows were simply translated into English!
It all makes sense! Mwah ha ha!
Hmm, never seen the Ladybug show, but this should be interesting.
Ooooh, nice loophole. Take that, crayon moose! Chryssie found the true way to use all that reformation energy.
Mmmm, hopefully this time Discord will face some punishment.
Am the best to the best trio and especially the best bughorse.
'bracelets around his wrists shinned' shined
'Ocellus, breath' - breathe
This premise shouldn't work, and yet, I find myself extremely interested in seeing this continue. Keep it up!
Also, prediction:
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Lila's about to find out how a real pro handles things.
The girl seems to be an exchange student from England with an Italian and a British parent. That explains her english accent. "Well the bell is ringing. Maybe I continue to talk with her later." thought Marinette.
Back in Equestria:
Nobody knows where the villains went. The creatures involved in the battle were speculating, where the LoD could have gone and if Chrysalis has lied about Discord. None of the three seems to be in Equestria anymore, so what was their goal? Find help? Find a place, where they are save from their opponents? Then, has Discord something to do with this? Did they get the spell from him? Could be the case, if he has really united them. But for Discord it got worse: While searching in the Secret Lair, if there are clues, which spell they used or where they could have gone, they found the Crystal Ball of "Grogar". This could end bad for Discord. But now the villains are more important. The Elements of Harmony can take care of Discord, but if the villains are somewhere, where even the Tree of Harmony has no influence anymore, than it can lead to a catastrophy.
Imagine putting this much effort into a story… and never coming back to it again. Quite sad, but also very funny in a cosmic way…