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Dr Sharaz Jek


Cynically Pretentious Hedonistic Nihilist...and those are my nicer qualities!

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Great chapter!

Are Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo with Spike and Lightning Dust when they’ve been captured?

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They wandered off on their own, forgot to note that!:twilightblush:

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Thanks, good luck with your own!:raritystarry:

Silver Spoon hugged her childhood companion, the only real support she had anymore. Sure, she had followers, worshipers, but none she could dare let down her guard to. They doubted the air pirates remembered it, but the pair of them had been kidnapped as children, hostages to be sold back at an absurd price to their parents. Except they had never paid the ransom.

Did Diamond's parents really abandon her, or could they simply not pay the ransom?

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It was most likely a split; Filthy Rich wanted to rescue her, Spoiled Rich argued they could replace her, squabbling and failed negotiations until it was too late.

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I wouldn't be surprised if that ultimately was the case---at least for Tiara. It's a shame we dont canonicaly know much about Silver Spoon other then that she's Tiara's best friend and she's a decent baker...Also i figure Filthy Rich is a good stallion, just his wife is a straight-up golddigger and a bitch...

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Yeah, big fan of Diamond Tiara, but Silver Spoon never made much of an impression on me.

:twilightoops: Well. That's certainly one way to involve those two on a remote tropical island. It'll certainly be interesting to see how Spike and the pirates handle power struggle they've stumbled into. Ah, politics...

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Indeed, figured it would make for an interesting contrast with the natives vs 'civilized' folk!

Time to put on the Spike Charm.

Sorry to hear about the real-life struggles. Rest assured, you got out a good chapter in spite of everything.

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Thank you, glad it was acceptable!:twilightblush:

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

1) Just how long has this civil war been going?

2) Betting now that Gabby will join EG!Spike's harem.

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1. Good question, probably less than a few years to be honest! Although the possibility has always been brewing in the background...

2. Highly likely!

Perhaps the Dazzlings are more worried about Spike since they got a taste of him.

Great chapter!

“We'll behave,” assured Adagio as they waddled onto the shore. The threesome stretched their naked bodies, gills expanding and contracting on one side of their bellies. “Don't worry, we can last at least several eyes without water.”

Don’t you mean days?

The parasprites proceeded to rampage across their new home, but that's a story for another day.

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Sadly for them, Beatrix banished the swarm to a barren rock!

Phew! I was afraid the Parasprites were going to bring the rescue mission to a screeching halt, but I'm relieved that wasn't the case.

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To be honest I considered that idea but decided against it!:twilightsheepish:

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Plot setbacks, if not done correctly, can interrupt the pacing greatly. However, I can only speak from reading experience.

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Yeah, that was why I ultimately decided against it. Any characterization I might have mined from said scenario could be done without such a disaster.:twilightsmile:

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

1) Now Zecora will want to join Spike's harem by the time this is over!

None of them were aware that the island's guardian continued to stalk ever closer...

2) It can't be Diamond Tiara, can it?

Great chapter!

We’re the Dazzlings just watching when the brief conflict occurred?

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Not her, but something under her control! Diamond Tiara prefers not to dirty her own hands!

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Most likely, although Aria enjoys punching things! Plus sirens naturally have violent instincts! All depends on if they felt motivated at the moment.

Oh! Not one, but two chapters in such short notice. Someone's been given some much-needed writing time. Good stuff!

I wonder who this island guardian is~

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Thank you, finally felt inspired to continue!

Yeah, giving both sides something else to fight is definitely one way to resolve tension. As we'll soon see...

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Tempted to drop another chapter but I'll wait a bit!:raritywink:

Gabby's just as greedy as Spike is.

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Yep, she's needy in a sweet way!

Ah nice chapter! Nice to see Spike having some fun

1) Aren't Dash and Lightning Dust still bound to Dragon Lord Spike? They might be open to other partners, but I doubt that they would let anyone besides him seed them.

“That may be,” admitted Zecora who always noted its odd behavior. Almost like it had always tried to break free of its puppeteer, with no success. “A potent spell, indeed. But can we possibly break it?”

2) Just how long has Ahuizotl been possessed?

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