• Published 22nd Aug 2020
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The Filly Fatale Folly - DatZigga



Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon develop a schoolyard crush on the local human.

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Besides, it was a nice looking tuxedo with a red tie. Putting it on, it almost felt familiar. Like it was an extension of himself or at least of his legacy. Still, the suit was about the only good thing he was feeling.

I get that reference.

“It’s just an anatomy book?” Anon asked incredulously, looking at the cover. He thumbed through the pages, which at best had pictures of anatomical models that were more scientific than risqué. “Come on, I figure you ponies can do better than that-“ He nearly choked on his word.

Cleverly hidden deep within the pages of the textbook were pages of what could only be described as the pony version of Playboy. Playpony? Anyway, the pages were torn from their original publication and glued to the pages of the textbook. On this particular page, a blue stallion stared back at him with the same lecherous gaze given to him by Mrs. Rich before.

Diamond Tiara knows the strat. She’s been slick since the beginning of mlp.

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Nope, just a mature comedy that’ll eventually address the elephant in the room. I’m just slow to update.

Nice chapter.

That's how you address that kind of situation
"You simply know nothing"

Already looking great! honestly I was a little wary with Anon with only the prologue to go off by such as being too vulgar or a little too hot headed or oblivious which I might add, a trait that gets VERY old when used for something other than a one shot but I'm already ecstatic for the story.

I'm already loving Anon and the setup which I do question adding so much like a unloyal wife with the crush thing because that might be just adding something in for the sake of adding but I have high hopes for this.

You have my interest peaked!

I mean that isn't worth much, but still!

You keep jumping between past and present tense. That's almost always considered bad form.

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Glad to hear. There is a plan for how the story unfolds, it's just a matter of time and I'm artificially extending it. Anyway, thanks for the read!

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Good thing I'm not a writer! Hahaha...ha...ha...hhn

Hell to the yeah LETS GO.

Also fucking hell why did I know about a new chapter NOW?

This is getting better and more interesting as it goes on.

Why was this one canceled?

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They were all canceled due to burnout and loss of interest.

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