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Israel Yabuki


Canon x OC, that's my specialty, both in art and in MLP stories

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This story is a sequel to Heirs of Grogar


It's been days since Grogar was defeated and Inferno Blaze sacrificed his life to save everyone. And now, their troubles are just beginning as a new evil plans to resurrect the beast while one of Grogar's captured slaves escapes his crystalized prison and wreaks havoc upon the city in a blind rage.

Other tags: Drama, Sad, Romance, Thriller

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 42 )

You know, friend, in this type of story, sometimes a character from death returns, either to be an enemy who manages to save him to overcome the new threat, that's why I ask if infernal blaze will return

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You'll find out later on. I'd rather not spoil the story too early

A bigger threat has escaped from it’s prison. Hope the girls find a way to stop it and find out about this group called Dark Trinity. :pinkiegasp:

A good start on the first chapter of the story. and seeing Blaze Burn, sounds like another Filthy Rich in comparison. and Dark Trinity, well I wonder who are they and why sunset is more important to one of them, regardless, I have to wait and see how it goes.

Good work you two and brony on

It is good that you have updated this fic again.
You know, you have done the impossible, I made the flash sentry a character that I never liked, I will start to like him but if I see him with sunset, twilight, starlight or any of my waifu I kill him

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Starlight's heart belongs to Inferno Blaze, Sunset's dating Eternal and Twilight is with Heat Blitz. Unlike in the show, I'm giving Flash a purpose that will benefit the characters in the story.

He'll be playing a big part near the end of the story.

Also, I'm glad you like it

love it so far, and the trinity too, they are like the legion of doom all over again. plus why do I feel like Light Ray is like Rasputin from Anastasia.

I gonna wait to see how it all turns out, hope for the best for Eternal and the others

P.S. Pinkie, If I want to know about A.A.M, I would already remember that anyway, be lucky I lost it somewhere

Whoa dude this is awesome

awesome chapter keep it up my friend:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Awesome chapter, with the danger looming, the quest to defeat the evil presence is underway.

awesome chapter you two keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

What an adventure on this chapter, and never think Chrysalis will be a love interest to Celestia after all that. I wonder how far can we all run from the monster since we now the target of interest.

Great work and as always, brony on

Love it, and seeing this the plot get thicken as now everything has revealed to us. with the two characters, the main antagonist now becomes the new focus in the story, especially with Inferno.

Despite the time of absents, this chapter has kept the storyline perfectly, you and your editor should be proud of this work in the chapter.
Great work you two and as always brony on.:yay:

amazing, not only the aftermath from the previous but now the deities all gathered in response to the wraith, and now hell broke loose as the trinity now stepping up to their plan, everyone is now in dangerous waters here, even I may never know what happens next.

Great work you two, I'll keep waiting for the next chapter, as always brony on

friend, this chapter you did wonderfully
Question that this was the last appearance of the dazzling in this story or we will see more of it.
I'm also curious about Adagio's love life.

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Oh, you can bet she's gonna find a lover, along with her two sisters.

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I'm very happy and you know that as much as I don't like the flash, I think I should have a girlfriend.
though I doubt it's one of the dazzling

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Flash won't be the Dazzlings' boyfriends. I'm shipping him with an OC

Awesome story, the redeeming of the two antagonist, and Inferno's powers, things got intensified as hell went loose on the city. we're definingly running with our lives their Israel. and boy we are in a hell of a wake up call after what has happen at the end.

Great work you two and as always brony on.

seeing Light Ray for what he is, it will be no surprise that we the readers will desire for his demise, and we can see that the wraith has become more of himself, as of now we going to need all the strength they need for the coming battle ahead. good work you two and as always brony on

So, Light Ray was responsible for what happened that night long ago. That damn power-hungry fiend! But to get all that power comes with a price. One that our dear wraith gladly will give to him, painfully. 😈

Good chapter you two! I'm looking forward to see what's next. :raritywink:

Love it, also I have also heard the name of that chapter used before, in a movie I watched before.

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I picked that up from a line from Yu-Gi-Oh! And the Pyramid of Light.

now that's a wicked/awesome chapter

especcially that our OCs

Great work you two

Talking about an upgrade for the boys. :raritywink:
The final battle is about to come! Can't wait! :eeyup:

Awesome work dudes! :ajsmug:

now this chapter is Epic

Love the ending, excellent work you two as always brony on:yay:

Chrysalis and sombra how they were both beaten ages ago chrysalis was turned into a statue with cozy glow and tirek and sombra got beaten twice

Looks like the human version of heat might get chrysalis as a stepmom and im starting to suspect that the titan demon is the human version of eternal flame also its nice to see the three sirens

Note to self never make sunset shimmer angry but shes a nice girlfriend

A beautiful ending it actually made me cry

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