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Israel Yabuki


I like drawing. I've been writing stories for over 2 years now and I've been getting a lot better thanks to everyone's support. Like I always say, brony on everypony.

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Sunset and her friends are now young adults. Ever since their high school days have ended, they all got their own part-time jobs and either live in their own houses or share a couple of them with each other. But peace and tranquility will have to wait, as one day, the electricity goes haywire and strange logos appear on every single electronic screen. Sunset and her friends trace the source to an abandoned factory where another group of young adults are gathered. Apparently, according to them, this has happened before.

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Comments ( 49 )

Ah this is bring back memories, I miss that show

Need more Code L.Y.O.K.O crossovers.

It did have a good run until the live action Ruined it

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Just do what I do with The Disney Star Wars, the Shyamalan Last Airbender movie and the Lilo and Stitch anime series:
Pretend it doesn’t exist.

Ok. A few critiques if I may.

1. I notice you go in and out of past tense. In my experience, it’s best to just STAY in past tense for the sake of consistency.

2. And keep in mind, this may be subjective, but how did Twilight (Sci-Twi) get a virus tracking program that was able to track X.A.N.A. with absolutely NO problems or counter resistance? The guy/program always had the gang on their toes with whatever he threw at them, so unless he was weakened when he resurfaced and couldn’t stop them from tracking him, I can’t help but say it’s too convenient a solution.

Aside from that, it’s a great nostalgic crossover and I look forward to what comes next.

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I'll keep in mind on the past tense. As for how Twilight found X.A.N.A and why it didn't do anything to stop the girls is because he doesn't see them as the Lyoko Warriors, just a group of girls running from the chaos. I'm not sure if this is a good enough explaination and also, X.A.N.A left some traces of his data on Twilight's laptop.

Tracking.....and I vote Fluttershy as the group's Aelita. n///n

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Eeyup, I see what you mean. She's adorable ^///^

Never watched the show but this story is good

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So he wouldn’t be able to sense he’d be tracked from just the small traces he left behind? If so, I think I can buy that.

We need more good MLP/Code Lyoko fics. The only one that comes to mind is Code Lyoko: EG by Azure Sandora

I love you even more now for making this story

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I couldn't agree more, that story was one of the reasons I stayed on Fimfiction.

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AKA the reason I joined this place.

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Mhmm. n////n .....the other half of Aeltia I see in Vinyl Scratch. ;D

I love this story! Code Lyoko was my childhood show. My favorite is Ulrich. Glad someone made another Code Lyoko story with Mlp.

Hell Yes! I've loved this show since I was a kid, and I know that you'll give it justice in the EQG universe. Blessing of the Moon upon thy journey.

Okay, I'm going to check this story out. I loved watching Code Lyoko as a kid. XANA was always a creepy villain. I mean, what kind of a computer virus has the power to remove gravity!? It's suspence like that that made me keep watching it. That and the action in Lyoko itself.

Seriously all things they have to forget the phone to forgot two things phone numbers

Will Tyrone appear in this story?

Ulrich and Odd had stopped right away and got onto the elevator with the others. Rainbow and, surprisingly, Fluttershy followed the group into the elevator.

Well she is the bold one of her family.

Fluttershy gasped and all of a sudden, her halo rings started to glow and then she throws one of them. "Ray Thrust!" she shouted. Her ring traveled at blazing speed, literally cutting up the crab in half, destorying it.

The others were baffled at what they just witnessed

.....Princess has competition for most powerful weapon.

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I think they were a character from the Evolution sequel. But given what you said in this chapter, you're just going with the original series.

I'd love to see what the others have for outfits and gear in Lyoko. I kinda see Applejack using an energy lasso or firearms. Rarity could use a whip or rapier, Pinkie could have a portable cannon of sorts, Twilight would use sci-fi gear like hard light weapons, and I see Sunset using a sword of her own in combat.

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yeah, my main focus is on the original series

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That will be cool. I hope we see Sunset Shimmer as an angel like her daydream transformation.

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That would be pretty cool. But looks like Fluttershy has an angel appearance for battle. Maybe Twilight could have some sort of look as Midnight Sparkle if it isn't a sci-fi bodysuit or something.

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Yeah that will be cool making twilight kinda like her midnight sparkle form. Idk about Sunset I been thinking about her being a sun goddess or have powers of the sun like heat stuff. Idk that sounds stupid.

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Fire powers does sound like a fun idea for her.

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Yeah and it totally suits her. Because her name is Sunset Shimmer. And having her heat powers works well on her.

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i really want to see that now... :rainbowderp:

I think princess twilight might notice the temporal distortions and comes to investigate becoming the next warrior while X.A.N.A. learns about magitech

When I opened up FiMFiction today, the last thing I expected to see was a brand new Equestria Girls/Code Lyoko crossover. It might just be the best thing I've seen this week. MLP might come really close, but Code Lyoko still remains my favorite animated series of all time, so I'm glad to see it still inspires people to write new stories after all these years.

I've noticed you're really good at writing Lyoko battle scenes. You pay attention to what everyone is doing, switching fluently from warrior to warrior to keep the action going while also keeping everything consistent. This is tricky to achieve when you have to deal with up to 13 main characters, so I'm definitely impressed. It bodes well for the rest of the story.

Jeremy and his friends never exchanged phone numbers in case of another XANA attack.

I actually wonder how they'd go about it, since it's a problem which never came up in canon. Obviously, any data noted down manually or saved on their phones would be lost forever after the RTTP. I assume Jeremy would just save the Humane Seven's phone numbers in the Supercomputer's memory, which is immune to RTTP's effects, and message them afterwards.

Anyway, as I was saying, I'm loving this so far and I can't wait to see how this develops.

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I'm glad you like it so far. But you're right, switching from character to character hasn't been so easy.

I got a question are we going to see the Humane 7 to transform into their pony forms to show the Lyoko warriors even are their going to be equestria girls villains. And great story btw.

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Of course. The girls will show the Lyoko Warriors what they can do with their magic

It's been a long time since I watch Code Lyoko as a kid, I use to watch it along with Ed, Edd, and Eddy, such good memories. And as the story goes, I like it how it works together in a crossover. though I don't remember nor not know what town that the Lyoko Warriors live in, regardless, it fits well.

Oh, I wonder if Z.A.N.A. it going all terminator on them and the rest of Canterlot City, as I last saw Z.A.N.A.'s main plot back then.

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He'll be rebuilding a robot army, but this time... he'll be even more serious.

Man, with X.A.N.A. back.. he's extra pissed.. Though, now I'm curious what schemes he's gonna try now.. and what people in the EQG world he's gonna possess with his spectres.. etc. etc...

Speaking of which, random thought.. has anybody ever wondered if XANA ever had a voice? And if he did what he'd sound like?

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Since you bring it up, I've thought about it and decided that later on, XANA will have not only a voice, but a human form as well and the way he's gonna get one is gonna be pretty unique

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That is until the EQ Girls blast XANA with the Elements of Harmony :rainbowderp:, who knows what the power of friendship is going to do to him? :trollestia: It would be a backfiring blow to XANA's domination. But hay, I'm just guessing... :pinkiecrazy:

I also got a second question, is their gonna be the Mane 6 the ponies version of the equestria girls. Are the Lyoko warriors ever gonna go to equestria along with Sunset.

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We'll just have to wait and see

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