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NinjaMare


Welcome to main page readers! my name is Floral Essence (aka NinjaMare), and here you will find mostly HiE fics, among other kinds of fics. hopefully you all enjoy what I have to offer.

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i'll be uploading Tenor's latest chapter in a bit, i hope you like it.

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it's going to be difficult, but i spoil it: Red Hawk does eventually get Scootaloo to fly. i won't say how, but prepare your heart when it shows up.

This was a awesomely interesting beginning can't wait to see where his adventure lead's. Is this story connected to the six story?

This was a warm and heart felt chapter I really hope he can help her with her flying.

You have intrigued me with this story. I look forward to more.

Go Beyond! PLUS ULTRA!

This was a beautifully awesome chapter I hope RD also helps them.

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in terms of Red Hawk, and the Six Heroes coming from the same version of Earth? Yes, they do come from the same Earth, which i call the Un-Naturalverse. if you stick around my home page and read most of my HiE stories that have humans with powers, 80% of the time they will come from this made up universe i came up with.

10283961
thanks for the compliment, but wrong universe. Red Hawk comes from my own universe.
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/902973/the-un-naturalverse

10285463
not in this story, no. Red Hawk appears a week or so after the first 3 or so episodes of season 1. the 6 Heroes arrive just after the wedding. for this story Red Hawk will be the only Un-Natural human the ponies will meet.

10285491
So will he appear in the six story? But a different time

10285587
.....not sure. you see the only way that any of my Un-Naturalverse humans can ever get to Equestria, is if they bump into another Un-Natural will cross-dimensional powers. but those people are RARE! plus, Red Hawk in my universe, lives in the Arizona Desert, so he has very little contact with others, even other Un-Naturals.

10285802
Maybe the old man wants to add Red hawk so he been hiring ,but they can't because RH is to good so he does himself but RH says no and trys to fly away, and that's how he gets transported. Or the old man gets a shape shifting Un-Natural to track RH after he says no and fly's away.

10285964
i'm getting the notion that you really like Red Hawk, a lot?:ajsmug:

10285966
Yes and I love how he helping Scoots it warms my heart.

10286156
well if you like that, then you'll love what Red Hawk does to make sure Scootaloo gets to live out her dream to fly.

This was a beautifully heart warming/touching chapter it really hits you in the feel's.

Damn good chapter!!!! Keep it up!

At first I judged it by the cover.. Don’t do it to this book!!!

Welp, a lot of government officials are going to hell for thinking this. Especially The Collectors.

10297266
yeah i'm not good at drawing big fancy covers for stories, and my character arts are.....okay. glad you like what i got so far thought!

10297699
well this on Earth have been hepatic in the past 50yrs. if you want to know what i mean, i got a blog post that kind of tells you what my Un-Naturalverse (the made-up universe i made for any of my super powered humans) is like.

Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/902973/the-un-naturalverse

Nice story...

both friends and the crowed, following in suit.

both friends and the crowd, following suit.

Oh shit noooooo!!!!!!

Keep up the chapters and now I am truly scared for him!!!

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Red Hawk isn't the only thing that should be afraid...........:trixieshiftright:

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true, they'll think all ponies are a "Un-Natural"

“Threat level…A. Target locked, and slated for termination.”

Oh shoot! Well, that’s not good.:twilightoops:

UH OH...:twilightoops:
By the time Celestia, Luna, Mane Six... Let alone Discord or whoever is powerful realizes who the Collectors are, there will be dread...
On the other hand for the Collectors: THERE WILL BE TARTARUS TO PAY... (ORBITAL FRIENDSHIP CANNON UNLEASHED!)

The shit has hit the fan I hope Red Hawk and maybe the main six and the princesses can stop this and fight. I also hope he date and makes a herd with all eight of them.

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I also hope he date and makes a herd with all eight of them

now i'm still figuring out what to do for the romance & sex, but i'm not sure if i'll do the Herd dynamic. while i do like fics with Herds, i just not sure if i can right a good Herd story. i like having characters have 1 on 1 (maybe 1 on 2) romance life cause i feel more confident that i can do a decent single romance.

other than that, i'm glad you're liking what's going on so far.

Bringing Un-Natural's to this world is noble Red. But you have to pick and choose and use good judgement. Some of them may seem nice.. but they could have evil intentions

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that's going to be one of the main conflicts. while Red Hawk wants to do right for HIS people, not many of them would accept because:
A.) they think that he maybe crazy.
B.) they could have evil intentions.
C.) they are to traumatized by being on the run, and being lied & used, that they won't trust anyone else. not even other Un-Naturals.

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I've always like stories like this where a Alien lands on a different world and wants to bring more of their kind for a better life but it may or may not go correct. So entertaining.

oh good, they're safe!

Keep up the work and hope Celestia can stop them from entering the realm, and bring only the good in!

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oh good, they're safe!

for now

hope Celestia can stop them from entering the realm, and bring only the good in!

that's not gonna happen. because, in my Un-Naturalverse---while very rare--there are several people that have cross-dimensional capabilities to there teleportation powers. so the only way to prevent the bad guys to not come to Equestria, by accident or not, is to get those people to leave earth.

A phoenix is an immortal creature, makes sense he would be able to regrow limbs...
Wonder if it is rapid cell growth (that should drain the body's resrouces) or just magical nonsense
Anywho, good chapter!

You know, it was the 'Scootadopt' fanfics that originally drew me to fimfiction in the first place (my personal favorite being Guardian Angel by Mayhem Darkshadow)

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the universe that Red Hawk comes from doesn't have magic, his powers were the by product of a global bomb gone wrong. i will eventually explain how his 'healing' power works in a later chapter.

10328648
While technically this isn't a Scootadopt (since she isn't actually an orphan) this one is still quite good without going full-on 'My Little Dashie'

10328817
i've actually thought of doing a version my little dashi, but in stead of RD, i have Fluttershy as the human mc's daughter.

but thanks for saying my story is quite good.:twilightsmile: and hopefully further chapters i post will continue to please you.

I haven’t started reading this but does this have anything to do with the hero with the same name from my hero academia?

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nope. they might have similar titles, but my character comes from my own made up universe. but i hope you like what i've written.
Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/902973/the-un-naturalverse

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