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NinjaMare


Welcome to main page readers! my name is Floral Essence (aka NinjaMare), and here you will find mostly HiE fics, among other kinds of fics. hopefully you all enjoy what I have to offer.

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Nice I like it

Is anyone else confused as to how this was posted on December 13, when it is currently December 12? IS THE AUTHOR A TIME TRAVELER??

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SHHHHH! nobody is to know that!

I like it nice job on the intro can't wait to read more

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how do you like the designs for the robots that the ponies will meet?

Well, Johnson is going to get a showing of just how crazy that system is.
Of all the days to arrive...

Just reading the first chapter got me all excited to see the next one! Keep up the great work!

“I should probably inform the princess of this along with what I found about, her .”

There are these natural things called meteors but i can see why you ask about it

Well damn, this is pretty good

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remember stars and anything astrological never appear or happen until Luna returns, as the show kind of implements that she creates a curtain of stars just past the outer atmosphere of the planet that's facing Equestria. so the ponies never see that many stars, or shooting stars for that matter.

Stuff like this make me think that if mlp's solar system was a part of the scp universe, the foundation you have orbital batteries above the planet so nothing on it becomes spacefaring. XD

It would really be interesting to see the amount of objects, writing, painting, and tools left in the castle of the sisters, to be discovered by "luky" and to clearly reevaluate the attempt to colonize a planet inhabited by another civilization. just say.:moustache:

Is ot just me, or is picturing two anthro guards in armour pulling a chariot kinda weird.

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well, its not like they have any tamed flying beast they can use to pull chariots.

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Sounds like something the foundation would do, yes. XD

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Still seems like it'd be pretty demeaning to the guards.

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it's the Equestrian guards............-_-

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oh, right, case closed then. XD

“Very well then, I leave this venture to you. But as you do, make sure to keep me up to-date on any progress you make.”

Still reading but right now with the high possibility of Sapient life the director would send someone to help or in the unlikely chance she deems it necessary she would send people with more in-depth training and/or experience in peace talks and diplomacy etc along side a smallish security force. Note this is going off if she has the power to do such things that aren't just about exploration of planets and similar interstellar things.
PS: she could do what she just did but it be risking plenty on one pilot trained for exploration (to my knowledge)

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Have to agree a bit. Does he even have first contact training? And again one lone guy against a potential hostile culture.... then add in Moonie is coming

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Some background on the humans of this fic:

-in order to be a Space Explorer and Planet Survey, you must have military-grade training to ensure you are capable of defending yourself, as well as having a stellar education of the highest grade to operate not only the ship, but equipment within said vessels, as well as being able to operate as an agent for the Deep Space Exploration Bureau and follow orders.

so John has military-grade training as well as top marks in his education, which is why Henrietta the Director of the Deep Space Exploration Bureau has faith that John can pull off this mission. as for making first contact, there are rules and procedures that are alrighty set, if John does find sapient life he will contact the director and inform her about the alien race he is 'observing'. and when its seen that contact is legible and safe, then the Director will send envoys trained for diplomatic meetings.

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Oohh, alright that makes alot of sense

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so yeah, even if John discovers the ponies, he'll be studying them from affair and document them. and what he finds shows that the ponies are worth making contact with, he will contact Henrietta for the final call in how to procced.

Nice job dude.

With the word crowed, change it to crowd, because the word crowed is the sound of a crow. Crowd is what your looking for in the context.

Lovely chapter though

I knew I was going to like this story. More robots

Well that was anti-dramatic:rainbowhuh:, it was ... nice I think:twilightsheepish:, will there be another sequel? or does it end here?:rainbowderp:

Damn, was hoping for more!

Please make a sequel!! I was so looking forward to reading how these hyperspace-capable humans interact with Amazonian Equestria!

“Whoa, whoa, hold up RD!” Pinkie said as she pulled the pegasus back by tugging on her tail. “No need to try and play hero, besides, it doesn’t look like its going to attack us.”

Characters have been seeming little odd so far. But when did pinkie become applejack?

Rather abrupt ending. Figure there is a sequel in the works but personally would just combine the two

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well it is an alt. version of Equestria, so some of the characters are going to have some differences to their characters.

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no. i goofed and messed something up when i uploaded this chapter. don't worry, there will be other chapters.

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don't worry, this fic will continue. i goofed when i uploaded this latest ch. to the fic. more chapters will be on the way.

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don't worry reader, there will be more. i just goofed up on something.

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well its not suppose to be a drama type story, its more of a documentary with slice-of-life segments.

Great work love it I can’t wait for the next chapter

Pretty good, look forward to next chapter

late to the party, but not a bad into. any one else getting some serious 'Red Planet' vibes from R.E.C.O.N. 7?
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Possible typo, maybe...

The noise was so shrilling and loud anything within a couple of yards could hear it!

Just my opinion, but 2 yards is only 6 feet... so a tall persons body length. Perhaps you meant a couple hundred yards? Or perhaps a couple miles? Anything less wouldn't be very loud... unless it's some type of directed short range audio attack? I mean it could be.

in any event, enjoyable :)

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beat me to it i thought of red planet also

To be honest I was sort of expecting something like a more advanced version of the Boston Dynamics Spot, and not something so fantasy looking.

Great work and hop twilight don’t do something stupid

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