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Zatoichi Vokunkiin
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Zatoichi Vokunkiin
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Well done, you have satisfied me.
A new story, and it's a Harry Potter crossover.
Is that your new OC?
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Yep, gonna do my best to create him in hogwarts legacy as well.
Look, I confess that when I decided to give your story a chance, I didn't have much expectation. But after reading the chapters released so far that changed. I'm looking forward to more.
Thanks for the chapter! Continues!
I’m getting Howl vibes from Havran at least with the raven transformation.
Great story so far!
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No idwa who Howl is. Jist rhought it would be a cool animagus form is all x3edit: Ah. Howls Moving Castle. Sory. Been yeeeeeaaarrs xD
I'm glad that the pony characters are more wholesome and nicer with our de-aged wizard friend. ( Unlike our poor Aku from Eater of Sin and Magic. Hopefully, you come back to it on your own time. )
He could still meet Twilight and Baby Spike. As for the others, they are all back at Ponyville or Cloudsdale. So, how do we let our wizard protagonist go there?
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He actually ran into Twilight and her brother in the second chapter, though once school starts he will be spending more time with Twilight. As for meeting the others, we will see what i can come up with.
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As for getting to cloudsdale and ponycvile, he could easily fly there as a raven or using his unsupported flighr spell. The queation is. What reason would he have to go and visit those places?
Thanks for the chapter!
So Spike is Barb in this reality? Interesting. Does this mean anything for the future? Maybe, I can't say. So you're not going to make him meet with the other Mane Six? And how far in MLP history will you adapt?
But, I really liked the chapter.
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He will indeed mewet the other mane 6 down the road. As for Barb, it could have some kind of meaning. But that's a bridge we will cross when I get us there. And we shall see how far I go into the timeline.
You're tempting fate and Murphy's Law over here.
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Pushin' that envelop, buddy. :3
Only now I realized that Havran really has many similarities with Odin and he could even be considered a "god" since his magic does things that Equestria's magic is not able to do. And we have the appearance of Barb and Fluttershy. Who will be the next important character the protagonist will meet?
I'm really enjoying the story, I hope it continues!
One question, is there any chance of Havran getting a bag like the one Newt Scamander has?
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Oh Havran is a god by no means. No immortality or anything like that. But it is true his magic is quite different indeed. But that is all he really has going for him. As you can tell, when comes to using a sword or any kind of melee weapons he has a lot of trouble with them, despite his large size And he actually does have a black messenger bag that has the same extended charm capabilities. He could stuff himself inside it if he chose to.
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Despite Equestria being a nice, sunshine and rainbows, and peaceful harmonic place. It is anything but.
Considering the MANY Villains that our pony heroes has faced and reformed.
I see your story is recently in the popular section. But, this haven't been updated recently?
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I'll get back to it eventually xD
Well things really got complicated in this chapter. Havran will be gone for a while.
Hmmm, question is...should I give him the ability to use ancient magic? Or is he already OP enough? xD He is based off my Hogwarts Legacy character after all. Also considering wandless magic to.
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I would find it interesting. Since he's going to face a lot of threats in this world, depending on how far you adapt, maybe it's a good power boost. But just my opinion, the final decision is still yours.
Use the OP Power Boost of the Ancient Magic.
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I have a question, can any of Havran's spells regenerate Tempest's horn? This doubt came to me after I rewatched the mlp movie.
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There is one spell that can actually heal bone. And a horn is considered to be part 0f the skull. Brackium Emendo is the bone healing spell. Lockhart is just a trash wizard who can't cast right xD
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The serious? I just watched the movies didn't read the books so I thought you a fake spell he had made up. I'm glad that in this universe Tempest might get her horn back.
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Oh ueah, Lockhart is just incompetent. XD
Anyway, about this chapter.
WOW, that frickin escalated quickly!?
Personally, I don't give a shit with what happened to the three rapist's lives. Just surprised on how very quickly your wizard OC use two of the three forbidden curses ( Especially the infamous killing curse. ).
Thought he will eventually use it on one of the unredeemed MLP Villains like Sombra, Tirek, or even Chrysalis much later on?
No offense, but I feel this is a little rush, and little weak "excuse" to get him in moral trouble with Celestia for killing some random bastards, and protecting Rarity.
Didn't want this to end up like Eater of Sin and Magic version 2.
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Eh, I was feeling in the mood to throw in some unforgivable curses to liven things up. Plus he was in the absolute right to do what he did. You will find out why later
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Like I said. I don't give a shit to what happened to those three bastards. The issue with how Celestia will react, and I don't want her to do something stupid to our wizard. Like for what happened to Aku in your other story.
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She knows that Havran did what he did to save someone. And considering that he is still a child, she will also understand that he made a choice because he wasn't in his right mind.
Thanks for the chapter 😊
Can't wait for next
I also feel like Celestia would follow him I got a feeling she has a way to find him not in a bad way sense he only 17
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The real question is: Why she appeared in the first place? She just happened to be nearby? Out of her royal duties?
Nah. Either she casted a tracking spell on him whitout his consent, or she is constantly watching him somehow.
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The latter is correct. She has been keeping a close eye on him. She won't chase after him because she wants him to come back when he feels he is ready.
Thanks for the chapter 😊
Can't wait for the next
Hopefully he gets with Luna
Thanks for the chapter! Seeing that this Celestia is a good person is a breath of fresh air, especially after Celestia from "Sin-Eater and Magic".
Question, have you decided whether to give Havran access to ancient magic?
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I will give him access to it at some point. While he already possessed it in his last life. He had to unlock it again. Most lokely through a traumatic experience. We will see though.
So... Faust waited five years to have that conversation?
I like the story, but this chapter... feels like it's just an excuse to put our dear Raven in a position where he feels he owes Celestia, and at the same time, a reason for him to be around the mane six the rest of the story.
Didn't leave a good taste in my mouth. I do like what you are doing with Princess Luna though. It can lead to some nice and interesting moments.
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I have to agree with him.
This new chapter gives a rather bad taste in my mouth also.
Not only that I didn't like he self-exiled himself,
)
but for a long ass time!? FIVE years!? ( It's Avengers Endgame all over again!
And Faust herself, or not even Celestia or Twilight themselves DIDN'T search for him earlier, and help him with his guilt immediately in that long time frame?
Sorry, this actually does seems forced ( Just for the sake of the dang plot. And I'm personally not a fan to those kind of writer's "tactics" in fan fictional stories. ).
I bet a hundred dollars that he does actually killed some criminals like the death eaters, when he was a Auror in his past life. And he didn't make a "big deal" out of it like right now? Am I right!?
Auror's do have the "license to kill" the evil wizards/witches, just like James Bond for example.
And even then, I do know that he is definitely gonna have no choice to kill once again in the future. Like the unredeemed main villains like Chrysalis, Sombra, Tirek, Storm King, or an new foe that is too dangerous to be left alive, nor wants to ever redeemed themselves.
( Like Voldemort for example. )
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All I can tell you is that this is only temporary. That feeling will wear away over time as he gets older. As for Twilight and the others. They had no idea where he had disappeared to. All will be clear in the later chapters.
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He feels bad for what he did when he was younger, but as he gets older, he won't feel remorse for killing anyone who wrongs him or those he will grow to care for. You will see how I move things along. And no, he will not become another Aku. So don't worry aboutn that.
This might be nitpicky of me, but animagi don't use their wands to transform.
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I could have sworn i corrected that to be 'without' x.x
Thanks for the chapter 😊
Thanks for the chapter! I'm really enjoying the way you're writing Havran's relationship with Celestia and Luna, the reunion moments with Rarity, Twilight and Barb brought a smile to my face, I like moments like that.
I can already imagine the development of some future situations, the funniest and if in the events of "A Canterlot Wedding" Havran just sends a "Revelio" to Chrysalis, in that scene when they are practicing at the end of the first part.
I know this is Equestria and there is magic, but even then it feels like a slap to the face when that's the answer. It's like when they put a Deus Ex Machina or something like that.
Other than that, a good cozy chapter :)
Havran became a Father Figure for Barb and Twilight became her mother figure.
This chapter and the last are both contrived bovine excrement. The whole business of killing the three rapists was simply for your own self satisfaction.
Then a five year time skip. Lazy writing all around for nonsense. The fact your character has been alone for five years makes no sense. I agree with the others that he should not have been left like that. Who leaves a guilt ridden person alone for five flipping years?! Your just a horrible person!
The worst part was I really liked this story. Now I can't continue you have ruined your world, story, and characters. So thanks for that and good bye.