Oh shit noooooo!!!!!!

Keep up the chapters and now I am truly scared for him!!!

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Red Hawk isn't the only thing that should be afraid...........

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true, they'll think all ponies are a "Un-Natural"

“Threat level…A. Target locked, and slated for termination.”

Oh shoot! Well, that’s not good.

UH OH...
By the time Celestia, Luna, Mane Six... Let alone Discord or whoever is powerful realizes who the Collectors are, there will be dread...
On the other hand for the Collectors: THERE WILL BE TARTARUS TO PAY... (ORBITAL FRIENDSHIP CANNON UNLEASHED!)

The shit has hit the fan I hope Red Hawk and maybe the main six and the princesses can stop this and fight. I also hope he date and makes a herd with all eight of them.

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I also hope he date and makes a herd with all eight of them

now i'm still figuring out what to do for the romance & sex, but i'm not sure if i'll do the Herd dynamic. while i do like fics with Herds, i just not sure if i can right a good Herd story. i like having characters have 1 on 1 (maybe 1 on 2) romance life cause i feel more confident that i can do a decent single romance.

other than that, i'm glad you're liking what's going on so far.

Bringing Un-Natural's to this world is noble Red. But you have to pick and choose and use good judgement. Some of them may seem nice.. but they could have evil intentions

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that's going to be one of the main conflicts. while Red Hawk wants to do right for HIS people, not many of them would accept because:
A.) they think that he maybe crazy.
B.) they could have evil intentions.
C.) they are to traumatized by being on the run, and being lied & used, that they won't trust anyone else. not even other Un-Naturals.

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I've always like stories like this where a Alien lands on a different world and wants to bring more of their kind for a better life but it may or may not go correct. So entertaining.