How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love Cadance's Big Fat...

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CapNTilfy

CapNTilfy #1 · Apr 9th, 2020 · 4 · ·

I was legit expecting the title to end in "Ass". I'm not into futa, but I wish you luck in the contest!

Edit: did not see book cover until just now. XD

Fylifa

Fylifa #2 · Apr 9th, 2020 · 2 · ·

A+ Cover art

garatheauthor

garatheauthor #3 · Apr 9th, 2020 · 2 · ·

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Oh i mean she also has a fantastic ass, that is true.

10171967
Thank you very much. I truly have 1000 hours in MS Paint.

Mix-up

Mix-up #4 · Apr 9th, 2020 · 1 · ·

Loved this story, I love Princess Futa Cadance , can't wait to see what happens next to them.

Sunny Rose

Sunny Rose #5 · Apr 10th, 2020 · 1 · ·

Is it weird that I'm reading porn but d'awwing about how Sunburst is gonna be Flurry Heart's second papa?

Mix-up

Mix-up #6 · Apr 24th, 2020 · 1 · ·

If you are looking for a cover art for the next story let me know I am open for commissions if you are ever interested, you can look at the link below, I love Shining/Sunburst/ Cadence shipping.

https://www.deviantart.com/amalgamzaku

dirty little secret

dirty little secret #7 · May 24th, 2020 · · ·

This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
Remember to vote in the contest's poll -- voting closes at midnight, June 6th.
And make sure to allow notifications from the contest group and/or follow Dirty Little Secret to get the full results and the awards show post on June 9th!

------ Review ------

Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Dommy Cadance is fun.
-up from her sheathe -- too much 'e'.
-Shining doesn't get an orgasm? Poor Shining. Story seems kind of incomplete without that.
-Seems like the story ends before it's really over.
-I'm liking the dynamic they have between them.

------ Scores ------

To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 87/100
Allure: 80/100
Enticement: 92/100
Immersion: 89/100
Prose Quality: 89/100
Total Score: 437/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.

Thank you for participating, and thank you for contributing to Fimfic's collection of clop!

garatheauthor