• Published 22nd Aug 2012
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Geoverse Part Two: To Love Is Human - GeodesicDragon



With the help of his best friend, and a rather eccentric scientist, Geo begins planning his return to Equestria to be with Twilight Sparkle — who is making plans of her own...

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Epilogue (Edited)

"That was quite a story, Geo," Celestia said.

The eleven of us were squeezed into the living room in the library, sitting on various items of furniture. Outside, Tiny was attracting a curious crowd; every sound caused them to back away in fear.

Luna conjured a map of the town, a section of which was circled, and handed it to Ace. "There is land there that we have no need for," she said. "You may build your laboratory there. It's out of the way of town, so you don't need to worry about your experiments causing any problems for the townsponies."

Ace smiled and took the map. "Thank you, Princesses, I'll get started right away," he said. "Thank you again for your hospitality." Celestia and Luna both returned the smile as he stood up. "John, Geo, it's been a pleasure. I hope to see you all again soon." He extended a hand, and we both shook it.

"Likewise," I said. "And thank you for everything you've done for me... for us. Without you, I wouldn't be here now."

Twilight nuzzled my chest as I spoke, a smile still plastered firmly on her face. "Yes," she said. "Thank you, Doctor."

"Call me 'Ace,'" he replied. "Anyway, I'll let you know when my new laboratory is completed." He went towards the door. "Perhaps you'd like to help me with my experiments?"

I nodded while John made a neutral noise in his throat.

Ace opened the door and stepped outside. "Now, now, everypony," he said to the crowd. "You don't need to be afraid of my little friend here." He closed the door behind him as he began explaining to the townsponies why Tiny was so great.

John stood up. "He's got his lab, and you've got this place," he said. "But what about me? Where the heck am I going to stay?"

"Ya can stay with me if ya want, John," Applejack said. "I've got plenty of room, and ya can help me around the farm."

"Thanks, Applejack." John replied. "I'd be happy to help."

"All right then." Applejack nodded. "Come with me and I'll get ya settled in fer the night. G'night, everypony."

She opened the door and stepped out, followed by John. Ace's voice could still be heard as the door closed, trying to explain why Tiny was named 'Tiny,' when he was anything but.

The rest of us sat in silence for a while, occasionally smiling at each other. I was glad nopony was saying anything, as it gave me more time to enjoy being around them all again. Twilight was on my lap, nuzzling me gently while I stroked her mane.

Eventually, Celestia broke the silence. "If you'll excuse us," she said. "Luna and I must return to our duties in Canterlot." We all nodded and bowed. "It's wonderful to see you again, Geo." She smiled slyly. "Take care of yourself this time."

"You can count on it, Your Majesties," I said, squeezing Twilight softly. She let out a small squeak and giggled.

They both vanished in a blaze of light, leaving behind Rarity, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash.

"I must go as well, darling," Rarity said. "You know what that sister of mine can get up to in my absence."

I chuckled. "I'll need to catch up with the Crusaders at some point," I replied. "It'll be great to see how they've been doing."

"Come by tomorrow, then," Rarity offered. "Chances are they'll be at the Boutique after they finish school."

"Will do, Rarity. See you then."

With a wave goodbye, she left, leaving the door open.

"I'll go as well," Fluttershy said timidly. "I need to feed my animals, and I don't like leaving Angel by himself for too long."

I nodded. "OK, Fluttershy," I said gently. "See you soon."

She left the library, followed by Rainbow Dash.

"I'm gonna go get some shut-eye, since I'm on the weather patrol tomorrow," she said. "But we've gotta hang out soon, 'kay?"

"Hell yeah we do," I replied. "All of us."

"That's why I'm throwing you a party, silly!" Pinkie Pie said. "I've got it all figured out. You're gonna love it, trust me!"

I held out my hand in a futile attempt to calm the bouncing pink ball of energy. "I know it'll be great, Pinkie," I said. "You don't need to tell me; I know that you always throw a great party."

Pinkie smiled. "I'll go and put the finishing touches to it now! Bye!"

Before anyone could reply, she was gone. Rainbow Dash waved goodbye and followed suit, closing the door behind her.

Now that it was just the two of us, Twilight sighed contentedly and locked the door using her magic. "Would you like a drink?" she asked. "We need to celebrate you being back."

I nodded while she went into the kitchen and stood up so I could look around the library, fond memories flooding my brain.

As I walked, my eyes fell on Twilight's desk — and the plain black box which was sitting on top of it.

I gasped and rushed over. Opening the box, I found the golden band I'd asked Diamond Dust to make.

"I thought I lost this!" I said to myself.

"Lost what?" asked Twilight. I turned around and saw that she had a tray of drinks in front of her. I showed her the box and her smile faded slightly. "I found it on your... body... after you were shot." she said. "I already know what's inside. I hope that's all right."

I nodded. "Did you like it?" I asked.

"Like it?" Twilight replied. "No, I didn't like it." I lowered my head, and she grinned. "I loved it."

I grinned back and and walked over to her, keeping my eyes on hers while she levitated the tray over to the table and put it down.

As I dropped to one knee, she suppressed a squeal. I took one of her hooves in my hand and looked deep into her eyes.

"Twilight," I said softly. "You are my life, my love, and my everything — but I want you to be much more than that."

The corners of Twilight's eyes filled with tears as she nodded.

"Throughout my time in Equestria, you have been by my side. You have helped me get through thick and thin." I said, my own eyes filling with tears. "You have listened to my problems, and shared your own. You became my friend, and then you became my lover."

Twilight's lower lip began trembling as I continued. "I know now that I want nothing more than to spend the rest of my life with you. No other person has loved me the way you do." I opened the box, showed her the band, and took a deep breath. "Twilight..." I gulped. "Will you make me the happiest man alive, and marry me?"

Twilight began sobbing loudly. "I have waited so long to hear you ask me that!" she said between sniffles. "Of course I'll marry you!"

I grinned and wiped my tears away as I slipped the band over one of her forelegs. She wiped her own eyes and admired her new piece of jewellery, as it glowed in the moonlight which was now streaming in through the window. Perfect timing, Luna.

"Now we can celebrate." I reached for a drink, only for my hand to be slapped away from the tray by an invisible force. I looked up to see a purple aura around Twilight's horn.

"Forget the drinks," she said. "I know another way we can celebrate." I looked at her blankly and she glanced upstairs with a sultry grin on her lips.

I realised what she was getting and quickly returned her grin with one of my own. "I guess we could celebrate that way," I replied. "After all, we have a lot of catching up to do."

And with those words, I scooped her into my arms, kissed her passionately, and carried her upstairs.

Comments ( 51 )

GOD DAMN!!! great fucking storie man i can't wait for the next storie in the series

Alrighty then.

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Could you elaborate on that, please? :rainbowhuh:

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Should I?

Great ending to a great series! :pinkiehappy:

And hopefully I pay enough attention to get on the band wagon when the third starts!

Hi

I have a good imagination but i wanted to read it:fluttercry: oh well cant wait for the next one:pinkiehappy:

I wonder what the next one will be about :rainbowhuh:

Anyway, GREAT story, really enjoyed reading it,

I just hope that mine hopefully gets famous someday,... or even featured :rainbowkiss:

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I did ask. Unless you're making a very obscure reference to my author's note at the end of the Epilogue. :twilightsmile:

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Well, actually I just wanted to confuse you. Did it work?

The story was good, too.

Tim

Sequel time? :rainbowhuh:


And here is a Schnauzer. :moustache:

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Sequel won't be appearing for a while yet. A man has to take a break from writing every now and again!

Tim

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I expected nothing else, you've written quite a lot lately and you earned a break. I just wanted to know whether a sequel will be written or not.

Comment posted by Nanohuman deleted Mar 10th, 2018
Comment posted by Nanohuman deleted Mar 10th, 2018

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I never wrote that dialogue.

Well, you did not dissapoint. At this point I'm not sure whether or not you are keeping your chapters at this length or not, but I think it works out. It certainly keeps the story moving. While I feel the science behind the portal is a little stretched I'm willing to just roll with it. Also, when I read the part where Dr. Sorou offered to play some music, I was thinking "Is he gonna do it? It would be awesome if he did! Come on, play it!"
So, yeah, I so totally called that.
Keep up the good work,
-RisingOne
P.S. (I think these little add-ons may become a habit in my reviews) I can tell that Sorou's character is gonna be that awesome, mad scientist type. Awesome.

on to the next one.

*Laughs like a maniac* :pinkiecrazy: Will read it now :twilightsmile:

I love happy endings.:twilightsmile:

And now for something related: Ten seconds of Sex, and something else that is Completely Different: Bullfighting :eeyup:

All Right, you two can stop now....:twilightblush:

Once again, I :moustache: you a question:
Is that feels shotgun you're shooting us with a 12-gauge? Sure of heck hits like it.

Curse you for making your story so good, I couldn't stop reading once I started!:twilightangry2: I was up till midnight because of this.:ajsleepy:

What happened to his body when he got shot?

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C) I haven't posted the Epilogue to A Season Of Adventure. :trollestia: :twilightsmile:

1821581 I thought he was playing without me at first.

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:rainbowhuh:
I don't think I understand what you are talking about, or how that has any relevance to a comment I made over twenty weeks ago...

Awesome story broski. I like the previous one as well. Got 4 more to read.

2490117 Awww no clopies? But I loved that first/last one. Well I ain't using my imagination cause when tat happens things get...weird. Like Kalza (Gilda's little sister from Harmony's Wrath) spying on them from within Twi's closet weird.

Darn it, left my rating on the wrong chapter. you can look back at it, though.

"Like it?" she replied. "No."
I lowered my head.
"I loved it."

Even after hearing that a few times. I still fell for it. :derpytongue2:

Wait a minute. If Geo was sent back to Earth at the end of part one with the same features he had when he was originally shot doesn't that mean his virginity became intact again.
If that's the case then he's technically losing his V card to Twilight for the second time.
Am I over-analysing this?

3950838 He got shot again... It just never mentioned how much time he lost, or where the bullet wound he woke up with on earth was.:twilightsheepish:

hhhm, loving this story dude

"You can use your imagination."
Learned your lesson from the first attempt I see? :rainbowlaugh:

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I like to think that I've somewhat improved at writing clop. :twilightsmile:

4598415 Good! I'm glad that you've learned from past mistakes and acquired a new skill. :pinkiehappy:

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This story is still being rewritten. I haven't gotten this far yet.

5739875 Well I'll be waiting to see it.

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The 'convenience' is fully explained later.

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I've been waiting for this specific reply for months...

Thi... This... THIS STORY IS TOO BEAUTIFUL! :raritycry::fluttercry:

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Umm... Was one of those Fluttershy's meant to be a Pinkie Pie? :rainbowhuh:

Oops, I never noticed that. It's been fixed now.

Thanks for pointing it out.

Insert pithy comment about Geo eating his hand here. :rainbowlaugh:

Omnomnomnom... :derpytongue2:

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I am well aware of this, and it will be addressed when I (eventually) get around to editing this chapter.

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