I am your Local wish granting, reality bending, Dimensional traveling, space Dragon. And I tell stories of timelines that you may not know of.
Princess Luna and Celestia both, years ago, trapped a small cat like creature in a prison with magical enchantments to preventing it from using its magic to cause panic among their subjects. Now the two monarchs are going to have a little chat with this small creature.
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I got to now are you working on a second part to this story or is there one up already because I really want to know what happened
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Other than the grammar mistakes, this is interesting.
I’m kinda confused.
I have so many questions wrapped in deeper questions, fried in questions and eaten by questions, then expelled into my brain. What the hay is going on here? I get a vague sense of a larger saga surrounding this "King of Shadows", but I think it might be a father to Sombra or something, as he is the King of Shadows.
Eh.
Ah, they strike again.
Puna?
Why is the story tagged human and why is the prison text in Cyrillic? Is he a Russian trapped in a fursuit?
Given hiw these stories tend to go, I highly doubt King is actually guilty of anything other than trying to get home or defend himself from ponies who consider him a monster because he isn't a pony.
Just dropping it all like that feels supremely unsatisfying.
I don't know what this is ... but I like it.
This plot seems uninspired
It is an 'ok' start. Looking forward to the next part!
Nice