You live your life

This story is a sequel to Please, Starlight, Come Back

Twilight unexpectedly runs into Starlight at the Crystal Empire

Thanks to Peni Parker for helping write this story

EDIT: Featured 3/14! Third story featured, finally!

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Switch Swap

Switch Swap #1 · Apr 14th, 2020 · 6 · ·

Are you going to continue this series?

TheHardie-Boy

TheHardie-Boy #2 · Apr 14th, 2020 · · ·

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Probably not

Melody Song

Melody Song #3 · Apr 15th, 2020 · · ·

This was really good.

Skyblazer9

Skyblazer9 #4 · Apr 15th, 2020 · · ·

I really enjoyed this, I liked how Twilight explained to Starlight why she didn't held onto her grudge as holding onto angry changes you from the inside out and makes you a very different person who you really are.

The Pro Alpha

The Pro Alpha #5 · Apr 15th, 2020 · 4 · ·

I love this story! Can you make a sequel to this, maybe showing twilight and her friends befriending starlight? Thanks

Ninjadeadbeard

Ninjadeadbeard #6 · Apr 15th, 2020 · 1 · ·

Mmm. A very nice story. And, unlike the main timeline (mane?), no one's timeline got genocided. A win-win all around!

Fillyfoolish

Fillyfoolish #7 · Apr 16th, 2020 · 1 · ·

Very nice, and with a beautiful moral as well. Feels like it could have been a show episode (and i mean that in the best way!) Thank you.

Light Heart101

Light Heart101 #8 · May 3rd, 2020 · · ·

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/213901/my-little-reviews-feedback/thread/435457/you-live-your-life

Not bad, but I think the story could have been built upon more. Keep working on your skills, and don't be afraid of adding more details and building stronger connections between characters.

Wild Stallion