• Member Since 5th Jan, 2012
  • offline last seen Apr 27th, 2019

TheGreyPotter


27, Female, Iowan, College Graduate. Favorite Pony: Celestia. Favorite Not Pony: Discord. Yeah, I like Equestria's Gods, so that's what most my fics are going to be about!

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Fluttershy too sick to get out of bed? Feeding time delayed by a whole hour? Good time as any for Angel to lead a full-scale revolt!

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Comments ( 23 )

I like it! Fluttershy saved the day! And Angel got a time out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I found this hilarious. Good job.

Luvly!
Also, because it had to be done:
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Twilight dun falled.
That is all.
Journcy Out.
:twilightsmile:

... Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

You say Twilight has a fat flank? :twilightangry2:

Good work. :pinkiesmile:

Maaaan, Angel's such a dick.
I loved this!

huh that was....good i enjoyed this story:ajsmug:

This story was just as enjoyable as it was zany. It especially impresses me that this was a thirty minute pony story.
Kudos to you!

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I only completed the first section in thirty minutes, the rest was done over the course of one mad night of writing :rainbowlaugh:
But thirty minute ponies is a fun way to get writing every day and I really really really recommend it :raritystarry:

1143213 funny stuff also maybe sequel

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Best Angel fanfic I've read in a while!! Go, Fluttershy!

JAG

:rainbowlaugh: This was great. I love the idea of Angel running a kingdom of rebel animals. That could easily make a good subplot or something for an episode of the show.

And then, of course, the spoiled little jerk gets what he deserves. Fluttershy is now Best Goddess.

Honestly I don't like Angel, he's a spoiled brat or at least he acts like a spoiled brat most of the time. If I ever, god forbid this ever happen, read a dark shy fic then it would only be because Angel would probably be the first to go.

Yash. I like the characterization; Angel makes a good tyrant. And Fluttershy a surprisingly good goddess.

Can I use the Steadfast Sky metamorphosis as canon?

Homer: WHY YOU LITTLE--*proceeds to strangle Angel*

Two words: Animal Farm.

Six years later, this fic is still awesome.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
That.......was..........HILARIOUS!!!!!! I just finished reading it through three times, and I laughed so hard my ribs hurt. Bad, bad bunny!! He got what he deserved. And as for Fluttershy.........

Dang, that pony can stare!!!!!! :pinkiegasp:

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Twelve words.
All animals are equal, but some animals are more equal than others.

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