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Alpha Scorpii


Happily retired. Thanks for all the good times :)

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Pound and Pumpkin must work together to obtain the delicious cookies!

A silly short story featuring the Twins, Gummy, and Mrs Cake on a minor role. I hope you like it.

Thanks to Inumaniac for being my proofreader for this one.

Read the Polish translation here, courtesy of Karwelas.

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Comments ( 19 )

I love the Cake family. If they were to make a show focusing only on the Cakes, I would totally watch it.

Anyway, thanks for reading, I hope you liked this silly story. Thanks to anyone who comments, likes or favourites this; thanks to the moderator who approved this story, whoever may be; and special thanks to Inumaniac for being my proofreader once again.

:twilightsmile:

Well i still think they are sons of the devil, but i admit, they are kind of cute, the cutest hellspawns ever born:twilightsheepish:

D'aww. Kinda thought translating the baby babble was wierd, was expecting more of a mutual understanding that eliminated any need for any form of language. Still, awesomeness. 4/5 yays. :yay::yay::yay::yay:

I love how you explained that Pound and Pumpkin's powers were only temporary and by the time this fic takes place those powers are gone, this is a nice short little fic staring two of the cutest foals ever seen. :heart:

Dawwww. so cute! you should write more stories about those two. Rugrats, Pony edition :pinkiehappy:

The mysterious kitchen sink, where the dirty plates would disappear, to be magically replaced by new ones.

Genius!!!

“I love it when a plan comes together...”

WAT. Hannibal Smith? D:

1469683>>1469732>>1470296>>1470381 Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :pinkiehappy:

1470500

Do you have any plans to write a Nightmare Night/Halloween story?

Do you mean, for the Equestria Daily contest, or just in general?

I had honestly thought about writing one (not for the contest), but I don't have any ideas. Although it would be funny to try it, maybe I could squeeze something out of my head before October 31.

I would need a new pre-reader for the ocasion, though. Inumaniac is out until November due to exams.:applecry:

1470569 I like making some pop culture references every now and then :twilightblush:

Yay! I love the Twins. Especially Pound Cake :pinkiehappy:

This story was cute.

Cute. Pound and Pumpkin are my favorite side/background characters.

This was a very cute Pound and Pumpkin story. I like the twins a lot.

Not to many people do cute stores of the twins. Good job.

*laughs and applauds* Very adorable. Congrats on focusing on some under appreciated characters in the Cake twins. The baby babble was confusing to start with (I've gotten too used to the Cake twin stories by the lovely Cloud Wander) but It quickly became a favourite to me. Definitely going to look forward to more from you.:pinkiehappy:

2037888 True, Cloud Wander's style is different from mine, richer and more elaborated. He (or she?) is really good at portraying how Pound and Pumpkin connect with each other, and how they see the world around them. This was just a silly story about cookies, and I thought the baby talk would be something funny to do.

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. :twilightsmile: And thanks for the watch :pinkiesmile:

2041401 I honestly wasn't trying to compare the two of you. I really liked how similar and yet how unique each characterization you each chose is. :twilightsmile:

Gummy is SO not going to live for much longer. An alligator eating cupcakes and cookies.

The bit about Gummy staring at both ens of eternity reminded me of Beth's horse from "The Bravest Warriors"

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