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Banshee531


I've always been a lover and writer of fanfiction, but it wasn't until I got into MLP that I really found something I loved writing about. Hope you all enjoy.

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This story is a sequel to Yugioh EQG: XX


The Double X has come and gone and everyone's getting back to a normal life. But before they can relax, enemies old and new appear with a dark agenda. Will our heroes prevail, or is our world doomed to oblivion. It's time to Duel.

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Damn. This story is off to an intense start. Looking forward to updates when you can make them.

"Sure. Keep telling yourself that." Flash kept teasing him about it for the rest of lunch, Sunburst feeling very embarrassed as he tried to deny everything.

Yeah, trust him. He should know. :raritywink:

Rainbow seemed surprised by this. Was he....no way.

Oh, yes way. :ajsmug:

(reads the ending) WHAT THE HECK?! :twilightoops::pinkiegasp:

I wasn't expecting this so soon. Last time, you waited until your Pokemon story was done.

Well... that escalated quickly. 😨

Well that was an epic start to your final Yugioh story. It is going to be strange with this story not updating every other day like your other ones did, but you are also working on a few other stories too so it is understandable.

There were some good moments in this opening chapter, like Flash teasing Sunburst over his relationship with Starlight (he finally gets to do that himself instead of being on the receiving end), Cold and his allies discussing what they need to do against the Dominators, seeing the great state Wonderbolts Academy is in now that everyone is dueling, and Soarin actually managing to ask out Rainbow with the excuse of a "team meeting" and Rainbow actually agreeing!

Flash's duel against Marble (or should I say Lady Marble) was pretty good. I especially liked his new Xyz Monster Reality Buster Dragon. Plus that Zenith Dragon was scary awesome. Once again Flash has lost in the opening, which can only mean things are going to get bad really fast.

He looked up at hi opponent, a teenage girl with yellow skin with light blue hair.

his

I'll keeping working hard, for both our sakes.

keep

We gather useful information from Tempest Shadows, who was taken over by Storm King Dominator using a Soulink.

gathered and Shadow

He opened the next and went wide-eyed seeing what it said,

Seems like you forgot to put something after "next".

"By banishing the top card of my deck, I can let attack once more after he destroys a monster."

Put "it" after "let".

"When we have to look everywhere!"

Then

Say bub-bye to yourself, Lady Marble.

I think you mean "buh".

Flash asked as the crumbling piece of the moon-sized egg feel away to reveal...an eye.

fell

Afterwards, they're banished a replaced by one of the monsters used in their summoning.

and

Seconds later, the hole shrank until it took disappeared into thin air.

too

Damn those Dominators. They have no regard for other people’s lives, human or duel spirit. And now they’ve thrown Flash and Scootaloo in some other dimensional prison? That’s going too far.

And what’s that coward Hellfire doing back here? Did he come just to rub in that they locked up their friend? Twilight is not gonna take this well. Oh, no. Misty. How is she gonna react to this?

That’s it. That’s where I draw the line. Banshee, take as much time as you need, I don’t care how long it takes, I just want these demons to burn.

"Well, good thing for us there's no such thing as an ordinary human."

So C.S. Lewis once said or wrote down. I really don't remember which. It very well may be both.

Wait, the symbol on Flash's hand...:pinkiegasp: I don't think I like what it could mean. Also, why do I get the feeling that Dash is going to get Omega-ed (not a verb, I know) into where Flash and Scootaloo are?

That Hellfire, showing up acting all smug, and that thin veneer of politeness when we all know what a monster he is. Glad Cold was able to put him in his place.

That mark on Flash is significantly concerning. I really hope it doesn’t mean what I think it might mean. Either of the two possibilities. And now Rainbow is stuck alone with Ouravas, which is not at all an evil sounding name.

Someone needs to stop these evil beings now before they take anything or anyone else.

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I don’t think they plan on doing that to her. Remember when Scootaloo fell in with Flash? Lady Marble said “some trash got mixed in”; it sounds like they’re just targeting candidates (the six people who have defeated the Dominators in the past). Of course, that would mean that Gilda and Soarin’ are potential targets. I could be wrong, though, but that’s my theory, at least.

Man, I'm wondering what will happen next after the Zealots revealed what they're planning. How will Flash and Scootaloo get out of their situation? Can Rainbow defeat her enemy or be defeated by them? Can any of the heroes defeat those Zenith Dragons? We'll just have to wait.

Cold won the duel, but the war is far from over. I don't know for sure what that symbol on Flash's hand could be, but I do know there is no way it can be good. The Omega Zealots are probably targeting the six candidates that Storm King and the rest of Team Dominators scouted during the Double X for this "project" that was mentioned a few times, but then why is Ouravas going after Rainbow? Also, I wonder where Soarin could be? I thought he and Rainbow were going to have a "team meeting" together, so if he is nearby he could be in some danger too, maybe more so than Rainbow since he is actually a candidate.

I hope Flash and Scootaloo will be okay until the others can find a way to save them.

"WEAK HUMANS TEAMING UP BECAUSE THEIR DESPERATE!"

THEY'RE

The blasters unleashed a barrage of snowballs, which hit Heath's two face down and turned them to ice before they shattered.

downs

As he did, a pair fireball erupted infront of him.

fireballs

The two wing blasters pointed at Cold's face down, firing to destroy them but leaving his Pendulum Cards safe.

downs

By tributing Frozen Heart Neo Dragon and a level four or higher Frozen Heart monster, I can unleash my dragons ultimate form!

dragon’s

He pulled out four, showing Frozen Heart Angel, Fortress Golem and Diplocaulus.

I think you mean three.

"If a monster is on your field after this card attacks, it can attack again.

Ending quotation mark needed.

Before anyone could tell her to shush, six figured appeared behind Discord and were completely hidden in the shadows.

figures

Looks like things are going to be tough for everyone.

Looking at the duel I am reminded of a particular poem:

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I’ve tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.

So can we say that Heath's world has be destroyed twice?

I take it Flash is intended to the Omega Zealot of Light.
I am not sure how Rainbow will fare against the new guy, but it will be interesting.

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I take it Flash is intended to the Omega Zealot of Light.

I doubt it. I think they already have that area covered. They probably have something much worse planned for Flash.

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Who knows. I do want one thing though. It would be extremely fitting if Fluttershy was able to defeat Discord and free him.

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